Jordan listened to Sara groan as she closed the dishwasher with a slam, which slightly jarred Jordan on the countertop. She then rose back up to her full height which Jordan still found uncomfortable. This was especially the case with the knowledge that Sara wasn’t even particularly tall, which made all this a hard pill to swallow. Seeing her family and some of her friends, all stand taller hit home just how small he had gotten.
“I’m not mad at you or anything. So, you don’t need to be all quiet and gloomy.” Sara said, leaning onto the counter. “It sucks they leave this stuff for me like I don’t have things to do,” Sara said as Jordan nodded in agreement. He didn’t particularly think it was all that bad; he often had chores when he was at home. However, he was firmly entrenched as Sara’s responsibility by her family. So, he knew better than to upset the hand that feeds and cares for him.
“We should get you all washed up before school, and then we have our own errands run. I mean,” Sara said with her eyes bearing down on his miniature body. “You may be whitto mansy.” Sara said in a cutesy voice. “But you still need to listen, and I expect some obedience. I’ll listen to your concerns and give your opinions true thought. But I really don’t want you taken away or to get in trouble because you don’t listen. Mom’s a hard ass about that stuff. I love her but she doesn’t put up with shit.”
“Okay, okay. I’m sorry, I just really like pancakes. Maybe you could give me some before it’s drenched in syrup next time. Then I could dip an end into the syrup on your plate.” Jordan said questioningly.
“We can make that work. That seems reasonable. Just remember, it’s like mom says. We don’t air our dirty laundry in public.” Sara said as she grasped Jordan, not waiting for him to climb into her hand. “You’re all sticky and gross. I can’t have you walking over to my hand. You will leave little dirty footprints,” Sara said as she gripped Jordan just tight enough to know he wasn’t fully off the hook. She went upstairs, heading into the same bathroom as last night. Jordan couldn’t help but notice how good the warmth from Sara’s hand felt. He was still a bit cold even with the clothes sara gave him but he noticed the house didn’t feel as cold as usual. He wondered if they turned up the heat or turned down the air conditioning.
“I will get myself cleaned up really quick. I know we have a bit of a schedule to keep.” Jordan said as Sara closed the bathroom door and walked over to the sink. Jordan watched her turn the water on while keeping him gripped in her hand. Using her other hand, Sara ran her finger under the water till it was a moderate temperature before reducing the power of the water coming out of the spigot.
Jordan felt himself rise up until he was looking down at the empty sink watching the water disappear into the drain waiting for Sara to lower him into the sink.
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i dont think he will be washing himself lol
Last time it was established how ticklish his feet were, I wonder if she’ll play into that this time.
Lol
1, Sara you ungrateful can’t! You’re parents cooked glfor you leasy contribution you could do is clean up. Growing up on the farm the best part of cooking is that you could make as big a mess as you wanted and someone else would have to clean it up. (We abused the shit out of that as kids)
2. Sara saying she’ll listen to Jordan is good but she made clear on day one she viewed doing so as strictly optional.
3. Makes sense she doesn’t was Jordan walking on her hands, and for him it would almost be like wearing weighted shoes.
4. I’m glad Sara was able to accept a compromise rather than just ban him from the good stuff as punishment.
5. I just remembered Tiff actually did threaten to take him away in 235, I’m only now realising how much that scared her.
*ungrateful cunt.
1- Well she is doing. It’s not like she is being disobedient. She is of course whining about this “hardship”. Its doubtful Sara would survive farm life. .
2- She generally listens to jordans concerns. She doesn’t always act on his concerns.
3- Thats seems pretty accurate. Cement shoes with a sticky glue-like substance.
4- She really just didn’t want him getting dirty. She wasn’t banning him for life or anything.
5- Well she knows her mom doesn’t play around. she says what she means.
1- that’s true, though somehow I doubt she’d let him get away with complaining like that. Sara wouldn’t go well on a farm at all, though she’d do better than Jordan because growing up on a farm = 10/10 would recommend,but shrinking down on a farm = 0/10 get fucked!
2- sometimes she does, but more often than not she’s getting something in exchange when she does.
4- I know that’s all she wanted, and I was talking about as punishment not why she did it in the first place
5- still I’d like to think Tiff would be kinder to Jordan that Sara’s described, some of what Sara has suggested would be Jordan getting literally tortured over Sara’s decisions.
Ohhhhhhhhh please 🙏🏻 oh please🙏🏻 hopefully Sara strips those clothes off him and goes to town cleaning 🧼 him with her fingers and rubbing her hand over his little naked body
Maybe as she’s washing him she can FaceTime Ellie what’s she’s doing to him
Constructive criticism. Does Jordan never cry, as a way of expressing his feelings, his emotional state? After all, for everything he has been through so far, his losses, the new reality that was imposed on him would certainly awaken in any person situations in which crying and depression would be natural developments in their life and that would certainly be dynamic to enrich the relationship between Jordan and Sara. Sara is certainly not the only one suffering from depression in this context.
I’m just trying to say that you have a story that can go beyond a story about giants but rather that a story about giants becomes a backdrop for discussing issues of human relations in greater depth. I see that you sometimes “scratch” the surface when trying to deal with this. try to delve deeper into this, I think you will take your story to another level. Anyway, I enjoy reading your story. A hug.
I also like how this story is going deeper into the subject matter than most. Beyond the giantess shtick it’s also got themes of classism, wealth disparity, moral ambiguity, human rights, media manipulation, sci-fi applications of fantastical elements and many more, though the emotional avenues your suggesting would likely come about through those.
I appreciate the feedback. I don’t think Jordan has ever cried in the spirit of what you are referring to. Episode 60 alludes to him being alone and kind of crying but its a textless slide and its dark so it doesn’t carry the same effect that you are talking about.
As the story has gone on I’ve done more of that as I’ve tested more and more with scenes in which the focus isn’t specifically about giant and tiny.
I’d say Jordan probably wouldn’t wanna cry in front of Sara, at least not with how little he currently trusts her, though a few tears slipping out after his nightmare could have been believable.
IF he did straight up cry, it would have been in his in habitat while he was in solitary while she was at school so that she wouldn’t find out, but it’s never been explicitly stated that he has.
His situation could definitely produce mental issues such as depression or PTSD. (I wonder if Dr Evans has any little patience, that’d be some S-tier cognitive dissonance if she was treating one little as the therapy pet of one of her patients, and another was the patient themselves.)
I liked what you wrote. But I also think it’s possible for Sara to find Jordan in his home crying in secret and this could be a situation for both of them to rethink themselves and each other. Sara sees Jordan as her emotional support animal, but couldn’t Sara realize that she is also Jordan’s emotional support animal and not just his owner? I’m just seeing that history has many possibilities to be explored. a hug.
I’m imagining if his collar recognises that he’s crying that could send an alert to Sara’s phone. It could certainly be a pivotal moment between the two, though Sara is the o e most likely to make him cry so her comforting him afterwards could be dubious.
I’d love to see Sara call herself “his emotional support animal” that’d be a level of humility I didn’t think she could do. But in all likelihood it’d probably be a matter of “I can’t have my therapy pet resenting me”
A hug 🫂