Sara continued walking down the same sidewalk as she briefly looked down at her phone to check the message Kayla had sent her about where she was in the park. Sara wasn’t about to let the fact that Charity Stevens was here change anything even if a part of her hoped that she wouldn’t notice her. As that thought crossed her mind, the two made eye contact, and Sara watched Charity veer towards her.
“I was just thinking something stank around here,” Charity said with a sneer as Jordan watched the bubbly-looking Teen stop in front of Sara. He could see her eyes drifting down towards him momentarily before looking back at Sara.
“Here I was thinking it was just your desperation. Do you not realize your park is across the street? If you’re lost, I can help you find your guardian Underbred.” Sara said as she crossed her arms. “It doesn’t matter how much money your parents have Charity. They can’t change what you are. You know what they say if it walks like a duck, quacks like a duck, must be a duck.”
“I’m the same size as you, Sara! Only we don’t parade around in stuff that looks like it’s out of a Walmart, mouth breather.” Charity said
“Oh, but for how long? Money can’t change the fact you were born an animal who just lived her life, hiding the fact they weren’t really a person. You were just playing pretend. You’re not so high and mighty anymore, Charity, because you’re not even a person, Underbred. Your words, they don’t, they can’t hurt me anymore. Your sneers have no meaning because you’re what amounts to a child talking out of turn.”
“Big talk from someone who never was important. Your only claim to any worth is just being Ellie’s friend and Mallory’s little pet project. So why don’t you stop pretending that you’re actually important Food Stamps. We’re only classmates because your parents found a coupon. So why don’t you go back to whatever trailer you crawled out of. “Charity said as she shoved her shoulder into Sara as she walked by, causing Sara to stumble backward. The blow knocked Jordan from Sara’s shoulder, who felt himself suddenly tumbling through the air.
“Jordan,” Sara said in a worried tone as she recovered her balance and snatched him in midair with her left hand. She gripped his small body tight enough that he had limited movement but not enough to cause him any pain. “What goes around comes around Charity,” Sara said angrily as she opened her hand just enough to see that Jordan was okay.
“Sorry, not sorry, but good catch food stamps,” Charity said with a bit of a laugh as she moved past Sara.
“Charity!” Sara shouted
“What, Loser?” Charity sneered.
“Fifty Thousand,” Sara said as she stood back up fully and put Jordan on her shoulder
“What?” Charity said confused
“Fifty thousand is the minimum amount I always keep in my account. I stream, I do sponsorship deals, and I work at the theater. I saved and sacrificed to make sure I had that money available to me.”
“Why do I care about such a trivial amount? Do you want some applause for saving up what amounts to pocket change?” Charity questioned as she gave a fake applause before she started to turn around to continue on before stopping as Sara started to answer.
“Because it’s how much it will cost to buy you when you reach your natural state, underbred. Who’s going to help you? Underbreds can’t buy underbreds so Mommy and Daddy’s money is useless.” Sara snapped back at Charity. Sara saw Charity’s normal cool exterior crack with a look of fear for a moment before returning to her normal I’m better than you are exterior.
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Damn gonna used all her savings just to torture this chick. Sara don’t play
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned
Another early one, that’s two in a row I’ve read in my free time rather then when I’m supposed to be working (though I’ll reiterate that this is best time to upload)
1. Damn, Sara is a bully. Like I fucken knew she was gonna call her an underbred. (Should’ve made a posterity comment yesterday). I’m curious who started it, I can’t imagine Sara as an innocent victim just standing up for herself.
2. Starting to understand why Gavin didn’t tell Sara and the girls he was vulnerable, can’t imagine this’d make him more trusting of them.
3. So vulnerable people can’t be guardians, I was wondering about that. It makes sense.
4. Poor Charity, imagine having that become public knowledge in a fucking school, No wonder she lashes out.
5. This interaction stinks of insecurity, Sara for her lower level of richness and Charity for her genetics
6. Really want to see Jordan’s reaction to Sara treating a preshrunk like that, can’t imagine she’s looking like a good guardian tohim right now, hope he calls her out for it.
6. Do you think there are guardian battles? (like custody battles but for littles) cause I’m sure Charity would already have some to be her guardian lined up.
7. Actually Charity looks a little bigger than Sara, not the same size.
8. You’d think Charity would be more careful around littles, afterall that could easily be her.
9. Wonder if Sara actually has fifty thousand of if she was bluffing, certainly wouldn’t be an unreasonable amount given how much money the others throw around.
10. So if Sara does only see Underberds as animals,
10. A, why did she Saddie’ treatment of Christine was “like animal abuse” rather than just “animal abuse?
10. B. Does she consider Mal’s relationship with Gavin beastiality?.
11. The “Good Life” Sara provides for Jordan was literally a threat she used in another, I hope he calls her out fir that, but can’t imagine he’d be feeling very spiney right now.
12. Love Sara getting called a pet! (Pet project technically but I’ll count it.
13. Sara equating Charity a “child speaking out if turn” just shows how deep her bigotry actually runs and how she isn’t the kind of progressive she thinks she is.
13. Let’s be honest we have all told a pet to stop barking when we’re talking. And in the social structure of this world Sara seems to even see per shrunk as shrinks and so I would not call it bigotry in that world I would not say it’s nice but probably socially acceptable in their world.
Welll it depends on if I go home for lunch or not. As posting at this time is in the middle of my workday.
1 – It’s not a secret or anything. You will know exactly who started it tomorrow. I’m pretty sure its mentioned in a prior page as well a long time ago. I’m going to withhold further thoughts for now on this.
2 – To be true to Gavin’s character. Gavin did it solely out of pride. Which also affected Sara.
3 – if you aren’t immune you can’t be a guardian or own a little.
5 – Sara wasn’t saying what she said because of wealth or lack of thereof. She has other reasons tied to their history.
6 – oh for sure. I mean its kind of cleared up mostly in Mia’s timeline as you saw how easily she is able to get one. But even then if a couple is married you could have a legal battle over custody of the little.
9 – It’s a lot of money to Sara. Not a lot of money to others. But she isn’t lying.
10A – she was using like as slang.As in “like, you know what i mean?” instead of “she’s agile like a fox”
10B – No, they haven’t had sex together since he caught smallara.
11 – I know if I was going to say something. I would probably tactfully choose a better time and not immediately after someone just got into a heated argument.
12 – figured you would like that
13 – She normally says shes progressive when comparing herself to less progressive people and situations. As well as her parents.
Just upload when you can. I’m only half serious.
1. Well at least we’ll learn quicker than we did learning about Sara and Kaitlyn’s past. I think she’s only has one prior mention in163 where the worst said about her was “she’s such a bitch” and “She’s not even Immune but sure as hell acts like it” the latter makes it seem as though the issue was Sara’s fault.
2. Pride isn’t always a bad thing, and these comments wouldn’t make him feel safe forgoing it. How did that affect Sara?
3. Imagine paying all that money for guardian training only to be told “you can’t have one” does thus also apply to regrowth?
6. That’d be an interesting aspect, as well as a hope for certain littles.
9. Oh damn she actually does. I thought that might have been her lower end of wealthy coming into play, lol.
10. A. pretty sure that’s a simile not slang. Not sure I get it still.
10. B If they hypothetically did, would Sara consider Mal and Gavin’s relationship beastiality.l or zoophilia or something.
11. I’d probably be to pissed to remember that good advice.
12. It’s nice and dehumanising, just like she deserves after doing the sane to Jordan.
13. Well that’s definitely cheating, you can make yourself the best at anything if you rig the sample size. “I’m actually a really fast runner if you don’t compare me to anyone faster” is how Sara seems to be behaving.
10 – it is but the importance is in how like is used not in what the sentence is. As like is used to compare the agility as being similar to a fox. Hence agile like a fox.
However, in “like, you know what i mean” Like is used as a filler word. It has no actual purpose to the sentence. Adding extra words when speaking was a popular trend during a period of time in the US. Most culturally relevant in the 90s to early 00s and then became less popular.
I always found it interesting so try to incorporate it into this world.
I really think Sara will have some apologizing to do to jordy after that, regardless of anything else thats how she sees him too. and i don’t think she wanted to say it like that in front of him.
Sara just threatened Charity with something she wants Jordan to feel lucky he has, that’s not going to benefit their relationship, while I doubt Sara would the sane with Jordan as she hypothetically would be with Charity it’s still not a good look.
Well maybe she will make her Jody’s pet lol
That’d be a dark twist. Probably have some line like, “Jordan you’re my lap dog, I have you so I can cuddle and pet you to my hearts content, Charity’s my working dog, like a sheep/cattle dog or maybe a guard dog, or sled dog. I have her so I can put her to work, just because your both underbreds doesn’t mean your equals, I put you above Mocha when I still had him, Charity would be below Mocha, if he still lived with us, and feel free to give Charity orders, you’reher boss too”
(Kinda wanna see that dream now, not gonna lie)
anything is possible
lol
Well i could see it going either way. As she meant everything she said. But, she probably would have wanted to be able to recount it differently to Jordan. As she may view Charity and Jordan differently in some regards. Just like two peopel can be dog owners but the dogs can still be treated and cared for differently.
I think the character Jordan is very passive in the story. He rationalizes everything by accepting Sara’s impositions, when he is dissatisfied, indignant with the treatment he receives, he keeps it to himself, in his own thoughts. I believe that Jordan must face Sara now, fight for her humanity even if it means suffering the consequences and punishments. If that doesn’t happen, I think the story will end here. It will become something repetitive with Jordan lamenting to himself, Sara continuing to see him and treat him the same way since the beginning of the story. This is the time for the characters to have greater depth and complexity. If the characters don’t become more complex the story will gradually lose the interest it aroused in me. It is not possible for this relationship between the two not to be more conflicting and tense, as only then will there be growth for both in history.
I agree he’s quite passive, I’m hoping that its building point he explodes at her, makes her confront every thing she’s done to him and ways she’s hurt him (physically, emotionally and mentally). One thing I’ve been advocating fir is consequences for Sara
It can be a but repetitive but I think that adds to realism as life is like that.
He’s best rebellion is when he tried to escape her, but i hope there’s more to come, (with better results)
I agree with you that Sara does not suffer any consequences, nor does she change or question her way of thinking. I find it flawed that in the story there is a single character who has a humanist view of Jordan, which is Cloé. Not even Sara’s parents are present in the story, they don’t question, they don’t care about JJordan’s situation. As for how Jordan could rebel, in his condition I think disobedience would be one way for him to rebel, whether privately or in public in front of Sara’s friends and other people.
Remember in their world this is almost normal and we’re all human so we all act differently with different people. I definitely don’t see it a a flaw in the story since since our views are different since our world is different.
Very accurate, Sara’s views aren’t abnormal or even extreme for her world. They are fairly normal.
I appreciate your critiques, thoughts, and criticism.
Jordan is passive. However, there are people who are passive like that though. I’ve seen videos where people knocked this janitor’s bucket over so water spilled all over the floor, knocked him to the ground, and then he just got up and started mopping. It was sickening, but he took it all passively. Some people do avoid confrontation and just internalize their feelings. I’m not saying Jordan won’t say something at some point. I am just saying I don’t think it’s a flaw in his character.
I think a core tenet that is presented in the story is that Sara is a humanist. She cares about human welfare, values, and dignity. However, that extends to people. Littles/Underbreds aren’t people to her. They don’t deserve to be hunted, or abused, etc. They have rights, but they aren’t equal anymore. As a society, human life is more valued than the life of animal. A human has more rights than an animal wild or domesticated. That’s not viewed as wrong, or abusive or an inequality. It just is.
I would also say Chloe isn’t that only person who shares her beliefs. Emily brooks, Daniela Sanchez do, as characters who were depicted directly in the story. It’s just the story is about Sara. So you learn the most about her.
Sara’s parents don’t question it because they lived through it all. They don’t believe otherwise. Similar to growing up in a staunchly republican or democratic household in our world. Those views you share with your children and your children may not think anything is wrong with being republican. Sara parents have a view of littles/underbreds and where they exist in the world.
Yes, there are people who are passive, but there are those who rebel. My country in its history had 500 years of slavery, in these 500 years there were slaves who did not rebel, others who rebelled and failed, others who fled and formed communities of escaped former slaves, the quilombos (search quilombo dos Palmares and its leader Zumbi ), during the 500 years of slavery, quilombos never ceased to exist, even today there are Quilombola communities formed by descendants of former slaves. And there were still slaves who preferred the path of suicide as a last resort against their dehumanization. I mean Jordan could be a much richer character. As for Sara, in our recent history we live in realities in various parts of the world in which societies have normalized the dehumanization of part of their population with the terrible consequences that we know, when you say that Sara thinks the way she thinks you are saying that people don’t can change. Sara is not a bad person but she is part of a society that has normalized dehumanization. The way you think Sara you are saying that she, like everyone else, cannot change their ways of thinking. Dehumanization does not always win, it is like saying that things like Nazism are inevitable, that individuals and societies cannot change from before they reached barbarism. I thought of his story as a parable of our own history to show that history does not need to be deterministic and that people and societies can save themselves and change their destiny.
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The black civil movement in your country in the 1960s is a good example that even when dehumanization seems consolidated for decades, it can be challenged and can positively transform both the victims of dehumanization and those who practiced dehumanization. People can change for the better on both sides. Try using this complexity that exists in societies, your story will become much richer and more relevant, a hug.
This does not mean arriving at a perfect society with perfect people. improve without a doubt. The experiences that Jordan and Sara are going through together will not change them completely. But I believe that Jordan can somehow regain, even if in a limited way, some control over his life. And that Sara can grow as a person by seeing Jordan with more respect. Even if she never accepts completely losing control over him. I feel like she is confused about how she feels about Jordan at certain times she treats Jordan, even if unconsciously, as an equal as a person, how many conversations have they had where she treats him like a normal person? but at other times she treats him the way society made her think, that is, as property, an animal. I think that what may emerge from this relationship, the biggest beneficiary may be Sara herself, the emergence of a relationship from which a sincere friendship emerges between two even if she is not prepared to completely give up her control over him.
Gonna be hilarious if one of Sara’s friends ends up buying Charity when she shrinks, cause then Sara will torment the hell out of her.
Bonus if it’s Chloe who claims her, her being more into little rights than Sara would be hilarious dichotomy.
Whittle jordy might want to really think about be loyal and obedient to Sara wow!!!! She doesn’t play games or else punishment for her whittle one. How strong her fingers are to him his rear end will be extremely sore 😉😈🙏🏻💗💯
Great scene Asuka and some great comments guys. Really saving me a lot of typing time lol.
I feel Sara’s rant was simply out of rage and she knows the right things to say to get to somebody. It’s pretty harsh to unload like that right in front of Jordan though. I imagine he’s feeling pretty concerned, confused and more vulnerable then ever after hearing that directly from Sara.
Crazy for Charity to act like she does knowing how vulnerable she is. Perhaps with all her parents money she just assumed the antidote is a phone call away? Maybe they have connections and already have some hidden away, though doubtful. Pretty sure Asuka mentioned every dosage is accounted for.
As usual I’ve gotta re-iterate how traumatizing trying to live your life would be knowing your not immune and being aware of all the drama and potential horrors surrounding little’s without any say in the matter. To go from a full fledged member of society to a 50k novelty to whoever has it, to pretty much treat you however they want. Whoever you were seems to mean nothing in this world.
I do have a question on the antidote though –
If somebody catches smallara and receives the antidote, is that a 100% guarantee? Or is there a chance after an unknown amount of time they may revert back to being small again?
Well we do like making your life easier, lol.
Yeah. I’m certain this interaction has not benefited their relationship one bit.
Charity would probably be wise to keep her head down and be a bit meek and humble, but I also thi k it’s kinda brave for her to choose not to be, y’know?
I wouldn’t be surprised if some people had cure doses reserved for them should the time come. Even ismf all doses are acounted for that doesn’t mean some aren’t reserved.
50k novelty wouldn’t be great but Jordan was only 30k so that’s something at least. Lol. Though I do pity her, I’d hate to not only be vulnerable but for that information to end up public.
At one point the cure was called the “vaccine” which to me does imply that it cures and innocuolates all in one. Though Asuka has mentioned possible new Variants of Smallara that could work around the current cure, but that’s just a maybe.
I appreciate any help I can get lol – plus it gives Asuka a few less paragraphs to bother with.
Yeah I can’t help but remember the phrase “A drunken mind speaks a sober heart” when it comes to Sara’s rant towards Charity. All that work Sara did to try to convince Jordan she was one of the good ones seems a bit insincere atm.
I can’t help but believe there’s a handful of the “cures” out there, for the right price of course. I couldn’t recall if it was called the vaccine or antidote. Interesting that it could mutate into other variants. Possibly putting previously cured victims at risk again.
Honestly I’d love to see a strain that can suddenly affect everybody. I think quite a bit of the system would change at that point.
Sara’s not drunk, she’s angry, and in all likelihood, she’s showing a darker incarnation of herself, not her true self.
Imagine paying for the cure and shrinking again, I’d be so pissed.
That’d be interesting, though, at that point it’s no longer a giantess story it’s an apocalyptic story as that’d be the result. personally, I just want a new strand that makes the vulnerability rate jump from 7.5% to 12.5% just high enough for Sara to worry she may be vulnerable again and relive the fear of uncertainty as to whether she’s immune or not, but not so high it becomes unbelievable that society would still function. Dayton and another of her friends become vulnerable (either Ellie or Steph, perhaps Riley) and definitely someone she has a personal relationship with gets shrunk and taken away from her, (is that really so much? lol)