“A-are you going to be at Chloe’s party? I mean I’m sure you are.” Bradley said a bit nervously. Jordan rolled his eyes a bit as he watched this teen fighting for his life while trying to keep his nerves up.
“Chloe’s like my best friend, of course I’m going to be there.” Ellie said as she played a bit with her hair while leaning in towards Bradley. “Why do you want to know?” Ellie asked batting her eyes.
Bradley had been so focused on Ellie and getting the nerves to not only walk up to her but ask her he hadn’t noticed Jordan sitting on her shoulder until she leaned in slightly. Bradley jumped back a step in surprise.
“You have a little? I had no idea.” Bradley said in shock before taking another step closer. “They look so lifelike.” he added as he stared at Jordan.
“They aren’t dolls Bradley.” Ellie exclaimed, grabbing his arm as she laughed flirtatiously once again.
“You’re right, I didn’t mean any offense I just haven’t seen one up close is all. I briefly saw Gavin being toted around by Mallory but nothing like this. I can see his chest moving up close like this. It’s completely different. “ Bradley said being taken by surprise. “As astonishing as this is it can’t compare to your beauty,” Bradley said as Jordan started laughing.
“Jordy,” Ellie scolded. “Sorry don’t mind him Bradley” Ellie said.
“So, would you maybe go to Chloe’s Ellie with me? I mean go to Chloe’s party with me?” Bradley asked, deciding to just shotgun it out before he lost his nerves and ran away.
“I was just planning to go with my girls, but why don’t you meet me there and we can see what happens. You know that way there’s no pressure.” Ellie said switching from playfulness at first to a bit of seduction in the tone of her voice at the end.
Jordan found himself stuck listening to Ellie and this boy play around. Jordan remembered why he hated flirting. He didn’t like the dance and the corniness of it all. He would much rather just focus on getting to know someone than have to do all this extra stuff.
“Yeah, yeah that would be great.” Bradley said feeling a bit dejected but trying to hide it.
“I have to get to the locker room and get changed. But I will see you tomorrow night. Oh and Bradley…I like chocolates. Those cute little ones. Hold the flowers.” Ellie said before turning around and walking towards the locker room as Bradley turned in the other direction himself and celebrated.
“I can’t believe you went for that.” Jordan said laughing slightly. “As astonishing as the fact I exist is, it can’t compare to your beauty.” Jordan mocked.
“He was so sweet. He was practically shaking. Besides, it’s the guys like that are the ones who treat a girl right. They’re kind, loyal, and treat you like a queen. Whereas those sporty popular guys end up treating you like shit. I mean look at how Gavin did Mallory when he was full sized. Gavin is a close friend, but I would never date him.” Ellie said.
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Nerd!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤓 at least he got the girl and Jordan is speaking facts man he has my respect
Hardest part is remembering sometimes you just have to ask lol best way someone put it to me is that you gotta get some at bat’s and learn to strike out before you get on base
True very very true and also be prepared to here the word no and take it like a champ
Exactly. Took me a while to realize how not getting turned down with a simple no was messing with me lol like I get being nice and everything but I never learned to change my approach until I just heard no through all the other stuff.
The man shot his shot. You gotta give him credit for that.
lol, well he atleast was acknowledged it wasn’t a firm yes or no. But he’d probably take it as a win. I know I would.
Lol kid is relatable. Kind of nice reprieve from the last few chapters. Have a feeling the Kayla and Kelli talk about the pool stuff is fast approaching
I should have heaped on and triple downed on the last few chapters for you…lol.
1) well that was adorable.
2) “look at how Gavin did Mallory” not to be confused with the flawless way Mallory did Gavin.
3) “go to Chloe’s Ellie with me?” i remember those nerves well.
4) Jordan laughing at the kid seemed a bit rough, though I’m sure Jordan’s done his own cringeworthy deeds when it comes to flirting.
5) A little concerning that Ellie conflates “treat a girl right” with “treat her like a queen”, and that the other option is “treat her like shit”. Healthiest relationships tend to involve treating one’s partner as an EQUAL partner. (I’d say Mal’s extracting the Queen treatment, and that’s not healthy at all)
6) just realised, Ellie doesn’t deny Jordan being her little, you’d think she’d correct Brad letting him know “Jordy’s actually Sara’s” but no.
Lol I think ellie considers Jordan hers by proxy
Possible, I’m imagining when Asukafan2001 makes Ellie’s Biography it’ll say..
“Registered littles: Jordan Reeves (godlittle)”
Or
“Registered Littles: technically none, Jodan Reeves (as per Sara’s will)”
1) I’m glad you liked it.
2) I’m glad to see you are fully on board with Mallory..lol. Although, to be fair, Gavin did cheat on her. In my opinion, that’s one of the worst things you can do to someone. But that’s very much a personal opinion
3)Yes, me too. Its so relatable.
4)From Jordan’s POV though the guy is floundering in front of Ellie and the attempt of pickup line was a bit laughable.
5) Just because she wants to be treated right doesn’t mean she won’t treat her partner equally well. I feel like you’re reading a bit into that more then is there IMHO. But, I could be wrong.
6)Well her and Sara are very close. They tend to share a lot of things. I’m kind of surprised you think Ellie would say something. I feel like its more her character not to say anything.
1) I needed it Especially after Step Monster.
2) I’m not gonna defend Gavin’s cheating I fully agree that its a disgustingthing to do, however that doesn’t mean Mal is above criticism.
She was a very entitled, clingy and demanding girlfriend. He should have broken up with her properly before looking for another girls but it’s not like she was a saint in the matter, especially given how she treats him now.
4) he was floundering, (I think Ellie was enjoying that about him) and the pick up line was appropriately cringy in my opinion. And we know Jordan’s not exactly a communicative savant either, so who’s he to criticise.
5) it’s possible, but in my experience women and girls who wanna be treated like queens, don’t usually treat their partners as kings, that’s why I made the Mal comparison.
6) That might be my misinterpretation of things, after Ellie had her heart to heart with Jordan, explaining why Sara needed him I thought she may be more clear on that.
1) That light-hearted tale?
2)She’s not above criticism and the things she does can definitely be viewed in a negative light but I view the offenses differently. I consider what gavin did walking into your home and shooting your dog in front of you and then leaving without saying anything.
Whereas Mallory I view more as she walked into your home slapped you across the face and left.
4)Im going to give Jordan some credit here. He maybe an introvert and he may not have the greatest level of game. However, He is surrounded by several very attractive women and can comfortably speak to them.
Even Kelli, Jordan was lightyears more comfortable speaking with her. He may be a bit oblivious at times to reading signs but he had the right of it with those lines.
Sometimes less is more.
5)Hard to say as we haven’t seen Ellie with a boyfriend. But, I do see your point. I can’t imagine following in Mal’s footsteps. She seems like she would fall more in line with Sara.
Who for sara’s faults has been a good girlfriend to Chloe.
6) Well Sara does need him. I don’t think Ellie would deny that. However, since she and Sara also share things I could see her viewing Jordan as partly hers as well.
Its also possible it just wasn’t worth correcting to him.
2) I think that’s true of their behavior pre-Gavin’s infection, I was more referring to how Mal’s been since which I view as worse.
I’d also like to point out that Mal is clearly willing to forgive Gavin’s infidelity despite not needing to, where as Gavin only seems forgiving of Mal as far as it keeps him out of shit.
4) definitely credit worth giving him.
“He is surrounded by several very attractive women” you mean these underage girls? I think that’s a bit different for him.
“can comfortably speak to them” Unless he has a problem then he has to tip toe on eggshells around their (especially Sara’s) temper-mental egos.
He does seem to be doing pretty well with Kelli, even though I’m not too convinced he likes her like that.
5) entirely true I was pulling from what she said and what other people who’ve said similar have done. She may be somewhere like Chloe and Sara, hopefully not like Gavin or Mal.
That’s actually fair Sara praise (yeah, you read that right), she does seem to have a healthy relationship with Chloe, especially since it started with an act comparable to “walking into your home and shooting your dog in front of you and then leaving without saying anything”
6) fair enough, at worst she could just correct him later if he asks “Where’s your little” but it’s not a big deal.
5) I see where you’re going and while I would ultimately agree with you. I would also concede those events aren’t the same. Sara was given an ultimatum of tell the world your preference and that we’re dating or we’re through which led to the events of the eventual breakup.
Which is different then Gavin who you could argue was leading Mallory on and sold out his friends to maintain a lie.
5) well, that was me giving you a bit of cheek, using your own quote.
I’ll say that Kaitlyn (who I’m also not defending) giving Sara that cunty ultimatum is also something Sara was willing to forgive, even going as far to apologise for her part in the falling out back in 178 hoping to begin the make up process.
I understand that poiint, but personally wouldn’t say Gavin was leading her on, he was intentionally pulling away from Mal hoping to get her to dump him, (the fucking coward should have sacked up and properly broken it off, and selling Sara out like that crossed an other damn line too).
His cheating would be worse than Sara’s but they’re both still cheating.
(PS solid foreshadowing in 178 hinting at her sexuality and antidepressants in one swing)
Ellie…. ever the charitable girl. Because he is winging WAY out of his league.
“Ain’t the same fuckin’ ballpark, it ain’t the same league, it ain’t even the same fuckin’ sport.”
The interaction kind of reminded me of Violet Parr at the end of The Incredibles.
Facts: Ellie’s a shark, and he’s out here fishing with your basic Walmart rod and reel.