“I learned this from the Serendipity streams,” Madison said to Krysi, snapping herself out of her thoughts as she set her hand down on the desk with a deliberate motion. She held it there, palm up, waiting. Cindy stared at the giant hand before her, confusion evident in her expression. Madison’s patience wore thin as she watched her mother hesitate, clearly not understanding the most basic of concepts. Madison rolled her eyes in exasperation. “Ugh, she’s so old sometimes,” she thought to herself, annoyed by her mother’s slowness.
“That means you’re supposed to climb into my hand,” Madison explained, her tone dripping with condescension. She spoke as if she were instructing a small child or a young pet, using a sugar-sweet and slow speech pattern. “If you see McKenzie, Krysi, or me put our hand down like this, it means you climb onto it. That way, we don’t have to constantly tell you to get on. It doesn’t matter what you’re doing—hand down means you climb on. Got it?”
Cindy felt a wave of humiliation wash over her as Madison broke down the concept into such simple terms. It was clear her daughter was trying to make this as easy as possible, almost as if she believed Cindy was incapable of understanding without this kind of infantilizing explanation. The shame of being treated like a child, or worse, like a pet, was almost too much to bear.
Madison, on the other hand, was trying to balance her growing frustration with a sense of duty. She could see her mother was overwhelmed by everything that had happened, and she hoped that introducing simple, clear instructions like this would help. If she could teach her mother these basic concepts, maybe Cindy wouldn’t spend so much time thinking about everything she had lost. Madison hated having to be so stern, but this was exactly what her mother had always preached about Littles—they needed a firm hand to guide them.
Cindy had always said that Littles were slow to understand things that should be obvious, that they required the patience and guidance of their guardians but could be taught practical skills. Never in her wildest dreams did Madison think that everything her mother had taught her would be used against her. For a brief moment, Madison wondered if that was why her mother had been so hard on her growing up—if, deep down, Cindy had known she was a Little all along and had been trying to prepare Madison to be strong enough to do what was necessary. Strong enough to guide her mother down the path of being a proper Little.
The thought made Madison pause, but she quickly pushed it aside. Whatever the reason, she knew she had to be firm. “This is what you wanted, Mom,” Madison thought, her resolve hardening as she looked at her mother, who was slowly beginning to climb into her hand. “You said Littles needed structure and guidance, and that’s exactly what I’m giving you.”
As Cindy reluctantly climbed into Madison’s hand, she couldn’t help but feel the crushing weight of her new reality. Every lesson she had ever taught, every belief she had ever held about Littles, was now being turned against her. And no matter how much she wanted to resist, to fight back, she knew she was powerless in the face of her daughter’s authority. The world had turned upside down, and all she could do was try to survive in this new, humiliating reality.
As Cindy finally climbed fully onto Madison’s hand, she realized she was completely unprepared for what it would actually feel like. The sharp ascent made her stomach drop, and fear gripped her more intensely than she had anticipated. The fact that this was her fourteen-year-old daughter’s hand—the same hand she used to pick up everyday objects with ease—now cradling her entire existence, was a jarring reality she couldn’t quite wrap her head around.
“You’re doing really good, Cindy. We’re here for you,” Krysi said, her tone laced with a mix of sympathy and condescension that made Cindy’s stomach turn. “Everyone’s super sorry about you not being human and all. We never knew. You had us all fooled. We thought it would be overwhelming if we all came over, so they stayed away, but they wanted me to make sure you knew that we’re all thinking of you and will be here to help you on your journey to being a proper Little. As we all know, it’s what you would want. Your conviction and beliefs about a Little’s place had such an impact on us all. We don’t want to dishonor the memories and teachings you left us.”
“Everyone?” Cindy questioned.
“Yeah, you know, the usual crew. Evan, Brooklyn, Emma, Ava, and Abby,” Krysi replied casually, as if it were the most natural thing in the world to list off the names of people who were now privy to Cindy’s new reality.
The candidness of Krysi’s words made Cindy’s skin crawl. She could tell it wasn’t easy for Krysi to say those things, but hearing them made Cindy want to scream. The irony of being praised for teachings she now realized were deeply misguided was almost unbearable. She wanted to shout that she had been wrong, that everything she had believed and taught about Littles was a mistake. But the weight of her reality pressed down on her, silencing any protest.
Madison’s voice interrupted her thoughts. “Make sure you teach Dad the skills you learned today. It would be super helpful if I didn’t have to repeat these teachings over and over again. Plus, it’ll reinforce everything Krysi and I taught you today. You always said the best way to practice something is to teach it, right?” Madison said, a gentle pat on Cindy’s head accompanying her words as she walked over to the habitat.
The condescension in Madison’s tone was unmistakable, and Cindy shuddered at her daughter’s last statement. She had indeed told Madison countless times that teaching a skill or concept would reinforce one’s own understanding, but never had she seen any evidence that Madison truly listened. Whenever she had tried to pass on wisdom or advice, Madison’s usual response had been a dismissive “What?” or “Huh?”—a demonstration of her lack of comprehension or interest. Yet now, with the power dynamic reversed, every lesson, every word, every sentence Cindy had ever spoken seemed to be at the forefront of Madison’s mind, ready to be thrown back in her face.
Krysi removed the lid from the habitat as Madison carefully set her mother back inside. The familiar warmth of the habitat enveloped Cindy’s body like a blanket, a small comfort in an otherwise terrifying existence. As soon as the lid was back on, Greg rushed over to her, his concern palpable.
Cindy’s mind raced as she tried to process everything that had just happened. The humiliation of being taught like a child, the twisted echoes of her own teachings now being used against her, and the horrifying reality that this was her life now—it all threatened to overwhelm her. But there was no escape, no way to turn back time. She was trapped in this nightmare, and every step she took only seemed to confirm her new reality as a Little, under the control of her daughter and her daughter’s friends.
Yet even in her despair, a small part of her clung to the hope that this was all temporary, that somehow, some way, things could go back to the way they were. But for now, all she could do was survive—and try to teach Greg the lessons she had been forced to learn, hoping it would spare him some of the humiliation she had just endured.
idk if it’s just me, but madison’s tone kinda seems to be shifting. Sure she’s probably annoyed and bratty, and definitely enjoying the power trip still, but I get the sense that as she realizes just what alls going on with both herself and her parents increases, she gets a bit more caring. Plus, all the dialog is heard from Cindy and Gregs perspective, so maybe to them it sounds the way it does, but Madison isn’t meaning for it to and she’s actually trying to be a bit more understanding. especially after seeing her mom break down earlier.
ran out of time to edit. I should say understanding instead of caring. I was always under the impression that she cared, but never got the sense that she initially understood or had empathy for what her parents were going through until a bit after the little social worker left and reality slowly started to sink in she’s realizing that this isn’t a switch that just turns on in a littles brain and they immediately accept it.
There are pockets here and there where the reader gets Madison’s thoughts or McKenzie’s thoughts. But you are correct you are mostly hearing greg and cindy’s perspective so you see things from there perspective.
Madison’s thoughts and reasoning could be different then what Cindy and Greg are interpreting.
You do have the right of it though. While she is enjoying the power trip she does have a degree of care as it is her parents still. So there is a degree of this is different.
Hopefully once the power trip wears off, she becomes more receptive to the fact that, even though greg and cindy are littles, they’re still her parents.
I do like that the condescending and mocking tones are heard from the parents, as I’m sure my parents only heard attitude where there wasn’t any when I was a teen lol
The future could hold many paths for them. I’m sure it would be stressful for everyone in reality.
1.1) “I learned this from the Serendipity streams,” is that hand offering method not normally used by guardians?
1.2) and of not why did Maddie expect her Cindy to instantly recognise the instruction.
2) Cindy having a hard time dealing while Madison is actively trying to make it easier (the way she’d know how) is some funny irony.
3) “Madison wondered … if, deep down, Cindy had known she was a Little all along and had been trying to prepare Madison” that was fun to read, the cruel Karma Cindy was being bulldozed with twisted onto Madison genuinely believing Cindy’s teachings, and trying to resist bad temptations
4.1) “the usual crew. Evan, Brooklyn, Emma, Ava, and Abby,” are we gonna meet all these kids, or are there more Hunters and Rileys amongst them.
4 2) and of course they’re all kids Cindy’s pushed her beliefs onto.
4..3) That’s so many kids knowing, and they’re probably telling other kids, and their parents so news would be spreading quickly.
5) “irony of being praised for teachings she now realized were deeply misguided was almost unbearable” that woukd absolutely suck, especially since no one wants to listen to her backpedalling her beliefs.
6) Cindy teaching Greg makes sense, it’s true that teaching other solidifies skill in one’s mind. Though I’m not so sure McKenzie wants her little sitting on comand like that.
1.1) No they are taught in training to just grab safely and securely. The hand offering thing is something Sara does out of respect for Jordan.
1.2) Cindy does not watch Sara’s streams. But to Madison and her friends they’ve been doing it for awhile. So she just kind of assumed her mother would know. Then remembered oh shes old.
2) There is a degree of Irony in it. I chuckled myself at the idea of it.
3) I like the idea of Madison being like logically this has to be why mom did this and was so hard on me.
4)Evan and Brooklyn I’ve already introduced them. Writing wise Emma is just about to get introduced so her appearance would be past episode 63 sometime. Ava and Abby have not appeared yet in the story.
But the intention is for them all to appear eventually.
4.2) Yes, yes they are. They are all very familiar with cindy’s teaching as they were all under her tutelage. In regards to little appropriateness and beliefs.
4.3) that is kind of the nature of things but also makes sense Madison would tell her friends as they would find out anyway. Plus not to mention McKenzie’s friends.
It wouldn’t be a secret for long.
5) Yes, based on her beliefs shes “Just a little” now. So they wouldn’t even care much even if she was backpedlaing as she would have taught them not to listen.
6)That would be the rub. As Greg does technically belong to McKenzie even if the sisters do share littles. There is a degree of ownership each has over a specific parent.
1.1) I see
“Something Sara does out of respect for Jordan” that is not a sentence I was expecting to read today
3) oh shit yeah, definitely seems like the logistics she’d use, and her condition reinforced the lessons as “even littles want this treatment”
4.1) I must have missed Evan, or was he Brooklyn’s little? (Though a name-drop and introduction aren’t the same to me tbh)
63? We’re gonna end the year in Madison’s world, aren’t we?
4.2) lots of young minds tainted
4.3) I know, plus it’s Vindy who wants it kept a secret,not Madison.
5) not just their beliefs, the beliefs she taught them.
6) indeed, I’m curious to see how their treatment differs in the long run.
4) Evan is one of madison’s friends. Not a little. None of people mentioned were littles. You haven;t met them yet. They are upcoming.
Well its only September. There are still 3 months left. There a chance that it takes through the year but not guaranteed.
That 63 you mentioned will be on Wednesday 27th November, (assuming you maintain current upload schedule. Later if you add in bonuses and side stories on Fridays again and not accounting for the American holidays you’ll take off from your upload schedule)
67 now but very true that does take us pretty much to the end of the year. I hadn’t actually mathed it out. But yeah it will probably will be the rest of the year.