Greg sat on the edge of McKenzie’s desk, his feet dangling over the side, swinging idly in the vast open space below. From his new perspective, everything in McKenzie’s room seemed impossibly large. It had never been a particularly big room, but now, it felt expansive, towering above him like the world of a giant. He glanced around, the familiar surroundings now alien, stretched by his smaller frame. He could hardly believe how different everything looked from down here.
As the door creaked open, McKenzie returned, a bottle of water in her hand. She shut the door behind her before sitting back down at her desk, her presence filling the room as she settled into her chair. Greg looked up at her, the scale difference a constant reminder of how far things had shifted. Despite that, the sense of comfort between them remained. They had just finished going over the bills and budgets, a routine that felt oddly familiar, even in this unfamiliar dynamic.
Hearing Greg’s praise had filled McKenzie with a warmth she couldn’t deny. His voice, even smaller now, still carried the same weight. “I’m proud of you, Kenzie,” he had said, a smile tugging at the corners of his mouth as he reviewed her work. She already knew her numbers were right, she had double-checked everything, her plan meticulous. But still, hearing it from her dad meant something. It always had. She couldn’t help but feel a small glow of satisfaction spread through her chest.
But the comfortable silence that followed was soon broken by Greg’s question. “Did you see your mother? Is she doing okay?” His tone was careful, but there was a weight to the question, an unspoken concern layered beneath the words.
McKenzie shifted slightly in her seat, glancing at her father. She knew the question wasn’t just about whether Cindy was physically okay, it was about more than that. It was about the strained relationship between her and her mother, a tension that had only worsened since Smallara. Instead of bringing them closer, the change had pushed them further apart. McKenzie felt it every time she was around her mother, the unspoken resentment, the distance growing wider with each passing day.
Greg knew it too. He didn’t blame either of them for it, though. He loved McKenzie fiercely, she was his daughter, and he would always stand by her. He understood where she was coming from, understood the frustration and the emotional toll it had taken on her. But at the same time, Cindy was his wife, and he could see her side as well. Cindy wasn’t acting out of cruelty or neglect. She had always wanted what was best for McKenzie, even if it came across as harsh or idealistic.
“She’s doing fine,” McKenzie replied, though her tone was cool, detached. “She’s with Madison, working on… whatever Madison has her doing.” She avoided elaborating, not wanting to dive too deeply into the subject. It was easier to keep the conversation on the surface than to confront the deeper rift that lay beneath.
Greg nodded, sensing the reluctance in her voice but not pushing further. He knew McKenzie’s feelings toward her mother were complicated, especially now. Cindy had wanted McKenzie to focus on her future, on herself, not on Littles, not on them, and certainly not on raising Madison. It had been an idealistic hope, and while Greg understood that Cindy’s intentions had come from a place of care, it hadn’t been fair to McKenzie. He could see that. The weight of responsibility thrust upon her was overwhelming, and he knew it was hard for her not to resent that, even if Cindy meant well.
“It’s a tough hand, Kenzie,” Greg said softly, his voice gentle. “I know it wasn’t fair to ask you to take on so much. Your mom just… she wanted to protect you. She didn’t want you to have to worry about all this.”
McKenzie’s eyes softened slightly, though the tension remained. “I know, Dad. I get it. It’s just… hard.” Her voice wavered for a moment, betraying the deeper feelings she was trying to keep at bay.
Greg reached out, placing his small hand on her massive finger, offering a wordless gesture of comfort. It wasn’t much, but it was what he could do. “You’re doing great,” he said quietly. “Better than great.”
McKenzie smiled, a small, tired smile, appreciating the reassurance even if it didn’t fully ease the strain. The relationship between her and Cindy might be fractured, but in this moment, she still had her father’s support, and that, for now, was enough.
“It meant a lot to me, Dad,” McKenzie’s voice was soft, almost hesitant, as if the weight of what she was about to say hung heavily between them. Greg looked up at his daughter, sensing the emotional undercurrent in her words. “That you picked me. That you chose me over Mom.”
Her words lingered in the air, thick with meaning. Greg felt his heart twist, torn between the love he held for both McKenzie and Cindy. Yesterday’s decision had been agonizing. Choosing McKenzie in that moment had felt like betraying Cindy, but he also knew how much it meant to his eldest daughter. She needed that reassurance, that validation, especially now, with everything shifting around them.
“I thought for sure you’d side with her,” McKenzie continued, her eyes cast downward for a moment before looking back at him. “But you didn’t. And I won’t forget that.” She paused, struggling with her next words. “I promise I’ll do everything I can to make this easier for you.”
She stopped, letting out a long breath, the weight of her responsibilities pressing visibly on her shoulders. “I wish I could take on your day-to-day care. I really do,” she said, her voice tight with emotion. “But I have to work, and I have standards I have to meet for the Emancipation…” Her voice trailed off before she added, almost in a whisper, “and the adoption.”
Greg’s heart sank as the reality of her words hit him. The adoption. She wasn’t just referring to taking care of him and Cindy. She was talking about Madison. His youngest daughter. The enormity of it settled over him like a heavy blanket. McKenzie was planning to adopt Madison, to step in and officially become her legal guardian, because he and Cindy were no longer capable. As Littles, they could no longer provide for Madison in the way parents should. And while Greg understood why this had to happen, it still felt like a bitter pill to swallow.
McKenzie’s expression tightened, the guilt evident on her face. She didn’t want to hurt him, she didn’t want him to feel like she was taking Madison away from him and Cindy. But she was. That was the reality of it. And yet, she didn’t want it to feel like that. Greg could see the conflict in her eyes, the way she struggled to frame it so it wouldn’t break him further.
“I know it seems like I’m taking her away,” McKenzie said after a long pause, her voice barely above a whisper. “But I have to do this, Dad. For Madison’s sake. She needs someone who can take care of her, and you and Mom… you can’t. Not anymore.”
Greg swallowed hard, the lump in his throat refusing to go away. He understood. He did. But it didn’t make it any easier. Madison was still his daughter, his baby girl, and the thought of losing that role, of being replaced, was a painful one.
McKenzie’s eyes softened, filled with regret and love all at once. “I don’t want you to feel like you’re losing her,” she said, her voice trembling slightly. “I’m not trying to take her away from you. I just want to make sure she’s okay. That she’s taken care of.”
Greg nodded, his heart heavy but his mind clear. He knew McKenzie was right, she was doing what needed to be done. Madison needed a guardian who could provide for her, who could offer stability in a way he and Cindy no longer could. But the weight of that truth didn’t make it hurt any less.
“You’re not taking her away from me,” Greg said quietly, his voice steady despite the emotions swirling inside him. He reached out, placing his small hand on McKenzie’s massive finger, offering her a gentle squeeze. “You’re doing what’s best for her. I know that.”
McKenzie’s lips quivered as she smiled down at him, relief mixed with sadness. “I just don’t want you or Mom to feel like I’m replacing you. You’ll always be her parents. I’m just… stepping in where you can’t right now.”
Greg nodded, though the pain still lingered. He knew McKenzie was right, but the thought of no longer being Madison’s father in the traditional sense, of watching his eldest daughter step into that role, was harder than he ever imagined. Still, he trusted McKenzie. She was strong, responsible, and fiercely protective. He knew she would take care of Madison the way she always had, now, just in a more official capacity.
“I’m proud of you, Kenzie,” Greg said softly, his voice filled with both sorrow and pride. “I know you’ll take care of her. You’ll do what’s right.”
McKenzie smiled, a tear escaping down her cheek as she nodded. “Thank you, Dad. I promise I’ll take care of her, and I’ll make sure you are okay too.” McKenzie said before saying quieter “and mom.”
Greg squeezed her finger again, his heart heavy with the knowledge of what was coming, but filled with love for the daughter who was stepping up in ways he never could have imagined. “I know you will, Kenzie,” he said quietly. “I know you will
Greg knew deep down that this was for the best. Madison would listen to McKenzie. She had the ability to be firm when necessary, something he and Cindy could no longer manage. Their dynamic with Madison had shifted too much; they depended on her for everything now, food, shelter, even basic care. The balance of power had tipped irreversibly. Madison, still young and wrestling with her rebellious streak, wasn’t ready to take on the role of a true caregiver. She was still fighting for her independence, just as McKenzie had at her age. But McKenzie had already been through that phase, she’d emerged stronger, more grounded, though she still had moments where she believed she knew better than she did. Greg trusted her to guide Madison through that same storm.
“I don’t, it’s not like I hate Mom or anything,” McKenzie said suddenly, her voice low, as if confessing a secret she wasn’t sure she wanted to share. “She’s just… it’s difficult.” Her eyes darted away, avoiding Greg’s gaze. She couldn’t bear to look at him, afraid of seeing disappointment reflected in his expression. Even now, even as a Little, she didn’t like hurting him. She never had.
McKenzie shifted uncomfortably. “Mom didn’t believe in me when it mattered most, and I don’t know how to let that go. I don’t know how to forgive that.” She paused, her voice tight. “I still love her—she’s my mom—but it’s different now. I just think it’s best that things ended up this way. She’s ultimately Madison’s now, and maybe that’s for the best.”
Greg felt a pang of sadness at her words, but he understood. He had seen the tension between McKenzie and Cindy grow since the Smallara change, watched their relationship deteriorate as McKenzie wrestled with her resentment. Cindy had tried to protect her daughter, but in doing so, had pushed her away. And now, McKenzie was trying to protect herself by accepting the divide.
McKenzie’s shoulders slumped slightly, as if the weight of the conversation was pressing down on her. She glanced up briefly, still avoiding Greg’s eyes, and continued. “I just didn’t want to disappoint you, Dad,” she said softly. “Hurting you feels different than hurting Mom. When it happens with her, it feels… inevitable, like it’s bound to happen. But with you, it’s worse. Like something inside me breaks when I do.”
Greg’s heart ached for his daughter, seeing her wrestle with emotions she couldn’t fully express. She didn’t want to hurt him, but she also couldn’t ignore the rift that had formed with Cindy. And now, Greg had chosen her, he had stood by McKenzie’s side instead of Cindy’s, defending her beliefs and her choices. That meant something. Something heavy.
“Dad, you know you’re a Little now, right?” McKenzie’s voice cut through his thoughts, her question direct but filled with concern. She searched his face, watching him carefully.
Greg nodded, his expression calm though his chest tightened at the reminder. “I’ve come to terms with it. I don’t like it, but it’s the hand I was dealt, as they say.”
McKenzie let out a breath she hadn’t realized she was holding. “Right. I just wanted to make sure. Because… you’ll need some Little training,” she said hesitantly. “You do have to live as a Little now. And I love you, Dad. You’re my father forever. But there are going to be times when I have to ask you to do Little things, like chores or tasks. It’s not because I think less of you, it’s just the way things are now.”
Greg listened quietly, feeling the weight of her words settle on him. She was trying to soften the blow, to explain the inevitable changes in a way that wouldn’t hurt him. But the truth was clear: his role in the family had shifted permanently.
McKenzie’s voice trembled slightly as she continued. “But promise me you’ll still be my dad. The process… it changes Littles. Some of them come out different. I don’t like the methods, but it’s just how things are. Mom helped set it up that way.” She paused, her eyes pleading. “I just need you to still be you when it’s all said and done.”
Greg’s heart swelled with emotion at her words. She wasn’t just asking for compliance—she was asking for reassurance, for a promise that she wouldn’t lose him to the same system that had taken so many others. She didn’t want him to become another obedient, hollow Little, stripped of his personality. She wanted him to remain her father, even if their relationship had changed.
“Kenz, pumpkin,” Greg said softly, his voice warm and steady. “You know I’ll do everything I can not to lose myself. Having you as my support system… that means everything. More than you know.” He reached out, placing his small hand on her finger, the gesture tender despite the difference in size. “It means the world to me that you still see me as your father. I know things have to change, and I know I’m a Little now. There will be things I’ll need to do, and I’ll do them. But being able to talk to you like this, to still share things with you, it keeps my head on straight. I promise, Kenzie. You won’t lose me. I won’t become like Trina.”
McKenzie smiled, though her eyes glistened with unshed tears. She nodded, gently squeezing her father’s hand. “Thank you, Dad. That’s all I needed to hear.”
Greg smiled back, feeling the strength of their bond, even in the midst of this strange new reality. He would do whatever it took to remain himself, to stay the father McKenzie needed, no matter how much the world around them changed.
“Dad, I just need you to know,” McKenzie began, her voice soft but edged with tension. “I will protect you, always. You’ll always be in my life. But… how things are now won’t be forever. You know that, right?” She bit her lip, hating that she had to bring this up now, but it felt necessary. They had come this far, and the longer she waited, the harder it would be. Some things, she had learned, only grew more difficult to say with time.
Greg looked up at her, sensing the gravity behind her words. “Yeah, I mean… I guess that makes sense,” he replied, his voice steady though his heart tightened. “You two wouldn’t have lived at home forever, even if we didn’t catch Smallara.”
“Right, exactly.” McKenzie nodded, though there was no relief in her expression. “It’s just… when Madison and I go our separate ways someday, I’ll take you with me.” She paused, watching for his reaction, but when she saw none, she continued. “It’s like I said. I can protect you. I’ve made sure you’ll always be protected. But… Mom will be with Madison.”
Greg’s chest tightened at her words, a mix of understanding and sadness filling him. He had always known there would come a day when things would shift again. McKenzie was practical, and this was her way of preparing for the inevitable. But hearing it out loud, Mom will be with Madison, made it real.
“I don’t know the future, Dad,” McKenzie said, her voice faltering slightly. “I don’t know how it’ll all work out, but I need you to understand. When that time comes, my intention is to take you with me, wherever I go. If I move away, if life takes me somewhere else… you’ll come with me. But Mom… she’ll be with her favorite child.” She looked away, her eyes focused on something distant, unable to bear the weight of her father’s gaze. She hated how selfish she sounded, how spoiled. She didn’t want to see the disappointment she imagined must be on his face.
“You know how Mom and I get if we’re in the same room for too long,” McKenzie continued, her voice quieter now, almost apologetic. “It’s just… I know she’s your wife, and I know it’s selfish of me. It’s not fair to ask this of you. But you picked me, Dad. You chose me, and I thought… you know…” Her voice trailed off, the unspoken words lingering in the air, heavy with guilt and longing.
Greg felt the weight of her words pressing on him, the raw vulnerability she was exposing. He understood what she was trying to say, the unspoken plea beneath her hesitant words. She wanted him with her. She needed him. And as much as she loved Cindy, there was too much unresolved pain between them.
“Kenzie, honey,” Greg began gently, his voice steady but filled with emotion. “I am forever in your corner. You know that. You and Madison are the world to me. I’ll always be here for you.” He paused, choosing his next words carefully, his heart aching with the knowledge of what he had to say. “The distance… your mother and I will work that out. We’ve gotten through so much already.”
He managed a small, comforting smile, hoping to ease her worry. “I mean, they have FaceTime for Littles, don’t they? We can still talk—habitat to habitat, video calls, whatever. I’ll always be wherever you need me, Kenzie. I’m your Little.”
The words felt strange coming out of his mouth, but for the first time, Greg meant them. He wasn’t just acknowledging his new role, he was accepting it. He wasn’t going to abandon Cindy, but he couldn’t deny McKenzie either. She had chosen to take on this responsibility, to carry the burden of his care, and he would be there for her in whatever way he could.
McKenzie’s lips trembled as she listened, tears threatening to spill, but she quickly blinked them away. “Thank you, Dad. I just needed to hear you say that. I needed to know that you’ll still be you… that I won’t lose you.”
“You won’t lose me,” Greg said firmly, his voice filled with quiet determination. “I won’t become like Trina. I promise.”
They both sat in silence for a moment, the air heavy with understanding. Greg knew what McKenzie was asking of him, and while it felt like a betrayal of Cindy in some small way, he also knew it was what had to happen. McKenzie needed him—now more than ever.
And yet, in the back of his mind, Greg couldn’t shake the feeling that maybe, in the end, this made him the bad guy. A bad husband, perhaps. But a good father. He loved Cindy, and he would never abandon her, but how could he say no to his daughter, his guardian now. He knew this day was still far off, years away. McKenzie had two more years of school, and Madison had four. It wasn’t something that would happen overnight. Who knew what the world would look like by then?
This is a great episode. It showcases how hard Smallara is on everyone. Even guardians now have to find the time to balance caring for a little and their lives, especially if the little in question happens to be a family member.
I agree that was kind of the intent to demonstrate the struggle that everyone goes through.
This was amazing!
I can’t imagine how McKenzie Is feeling! The weight of the world on her shoulders!
1. Will McKenzie have Greg paint her nails? What kind of chores?
2. I know it’s years away but could t McKenzie take them both for a week or so and then Madison?
3. Did she not tell her dad about Cindy painting madisons nails because even she felt guilty about it
4. So she doesn’t want her dad to become like Trina! That’s good but will he have to go through the same training? Sounds like it’ll be harder on him to stay the same
5. I’m dying for season 3 to see how the time jump is like when theyre all settled in
6. I love their relationship!! He’s an amazing dad! I just hope and pray he doesn’t loose himself cause McKenzie will blame herself for it
1. Painting nails is a maybe, I’m sure McKenzie would think very hard if a task is reasonable before asking Greg to do it
2. That depends on how things go, if McKenzie travels for work, or lives outside of New York, or Madison dies those things would be less likely. I’m imagining it would go, weekly visits, then fortnightly, then monthly, then every other month, then if they an get around to it.
3. She could have just thought nothing about the task, but I could see her feeling guilty, but I think having littles do that is somewhat normalised.
4. Everything we know about training indicates it changes personality.
I’m so glad you liked it. Mckenzie is taking on a lot so i think its easier to cut her some slack. Atleast I do but I also will admit I do have a degree of bias when I’m in the observer role as opposed to the author role.
1) Possibly, It really comes down to what would be reasonable for him. Nail painting is pretty normalized in this world as Lethal pointed out.
2) Legally Greg is hers and Cindy is Madison’s. Now the girls could work something out
3) She didn’t think about it as its not all that uncommon.
4) Well in theory he would be pulled out more often as McKenize would probably take him when she is home. But he will still get some training.
5) Yeah season 3 won’t be immediately after as i have a few other projects like the Kayla story I want to post.
6) He is a good dad. That was the design of his character is that he is just a g eniuine good guy with a few faults.
There’s no way that marriage we’ll be able to stay alive with long distance rarely has that work !!!! And that’s excluding the fact that would mentally break Cindy I me she created this but at the same time I can’t say she is earned this much punishment I’ll give her shit but damn separating her from Greg is kinda pushing it at least for me personally.
This was great though shows the real struggle and bond between Greg and McKenzie. Shows that great is a great father and husband and is finally accepting how things are now.
Overall great chapter.
I do think a long distance relationship would work because they are littles the pool is smaller. ITs not like Cindy is going to be meeting a droves and droves of other people.
Plusi mean odds are worst case Madison and McKenize would still get together for holidays. However odds are being that they live in new york they would probably stay in that area unless they are wanting small town living or something.
Im glad everyone is responding positively to the McKenize section.
I think the way Sara spends so much time with Jordan would be perfect for them because he could always be with her and hold on to her hair and hug her next for moral support and give her his life advise if she asks. I think being a man little with be hard for him to do nails but can help with small tools like Jordan in the morning with Saras morning
I think it really depends on the little. Jordan would probably be okay with a little less time as he is a introvert by nature and not very social. So Sara a lot of times has him outside his comfort zone.
Where Kelli is much more social and Kayla isn’t. But Kelli would be much more comfortable and okay with going more places.
1) “McKenzie returned, a bottle of water in her hand” Is Greg gonna get some bottled water?
2) “the sense of comfort between them remained” That’s cute
3) “They had just finished going over the bills and budgets, a routine that felt oddly familiar” it’s good to see her letting him help.
4) “Did you see your mother? Is she doing okay?” Nice to see him checking on her, and good to see he’s cautious of how Kenzie may feel about this question.
5) “He didn’t blame either of them for it, though” I do, I blame Cindy
6) “Cindy had wanted McKenzie to focus on her future, on herself, not on Littles, not on them, and certainly not on raising Madison” I can certainly believe that.
7) “It meant a lot to me, Dad… That you picked me. That you chose me over Mom.” It was still shitty of you to make him pick!
8) “Choosing McKenzie in that moment had felt like betraying Cindy” and choosing Cindy would have felt like betraying McKenzie.
9) “I promise I’ll do everything I can to make this easier for you.” except help Cindy.
10) “I wish I could take on your day-to-day care. I really do,” So do I McKenzie, but it makes sense you’d be in such a position with the changes you’re enduring
11) “she didn’t want him to feel like she was taking Madison away from him and Cindy” he wouldn’t feel like that given how much time they spend with Madison, if anything Madison’s trying to take him from McKenzie.
12) “She needs someone who can take care of her, and you and Mom… you can’t. Not anymore.” she’s right, which worsens it.
13) “You’re not taking her away from me… You’re doing what’s best for her. I know that.” He’s such a good dad.
14) “You’ll always be her parents. I’m just… stepping in where you can’t right now.” Might want to explain that to Madison.
15) “I’ll take care of her, and I’ll make sure you are okay too.” McKenzie said before saying quieter “and mom.” that hesitation before adding Cindy was perfect.
16) “I don’t, it’s not like I hate Mom or anything… She’s just… it’s difficult.” I’m glad their disagreement isn’t truly hatred.
17) “Even now, even as a Little, she didn’t like hurting him. She never had” That’s a good daughter.
18.1) “Mom didn’t believe in me when it mattered most, and I don’t know how to let that go. I don’t know how to forgive that.” I can definitely think it’s fair that she’d struggle to forgive Cindy, but she should also acknowledge that Cindy did at least try to make things right between them
18.2) “I still love her—she’s my mom—but it’s different now. I just think it’s best that things ended up this way. She’s ultimately Madison’s now, and maybe that’s for the best.” I can also agree that Madison with Cindy is for the best, justice-wise.
19) “Cindy had tried to protect her daughter, but in doing so, had pushed her away. And now, McKenzie was trying to protect herself by accepting the divide” not exactly a winning strategy from either side.
20.1) “I just didn’t want to disappoint you, Dad” I can see that, she’s hoping to have at least one parent close to her, but she’ll need to do more for Cindy if she truly wants to avoid hurting Greg.
20.2) “Hurting you feels different than hurting Mom. When it happens with her, it feels… inevitable, like it’s bound to happen. But with you, it’s worse. Like something inside me breaks when I do.” I think in this case it’s at least partially because she’s blaming Cindy for getting hurt, rather than taking responsibility for hurting Cindy, and while I can certainly get behind blaming Cindy I don’t think that’s the strategy that will help Kenz.
21.1) “You’ll need some Little training,” I appreciate that she checked he came to terms with things before bringing it up, but he really doesn’t need training, plenty of little live without it.
21.2) “But there are going to be times when I have to ask you to do Little things, like chores or tasks. It’s not because I think less of you, it’s just the way things are now” and hat can happen without training. But little training is very much something for people who think less of littles.
22.1) “But promise me you’ll still be my dad. The process… it changes Littles. Some of them come out differently” That’d likely be the psychological toll little endure from training, and a good indication that she shouldn’t do this.
22.1) “I don’t like the methods, but it’s just how things are. Mom helped set it up that way.” Interesting that a Preema Tech employee help design Genritech little training.
23.1) “She wasn’t just asking for compliance—she was asking for reassurance, for a promise that she wouldn’t lose him to the same system that had taken so many others” then don’t give him to that system, dambass
23.2) “She didn’t want him to become another obedient, hollow Little, stripped of his personality. She wanted him to remain her father, even if their relationship had changed” Yeah that’s what the training is intended to do, break and bend littles and their personalities into obedient submissive slaves for their future guardian.
24) “Kenz, pumpkin… You know I’ll do everything I can not to lose myself. Having you as my support system… that means everything. More than you know.” but will that be enough?
25) “It means the world to me that you still see me as your father. I know things have to change, and I know I’m a Little now. There will be things I’ll need to do, and I’ll do them. But being able to talk to you like this, to still share things with you, it keeps my head on straight. I promise, Kenzie. You won’t lose me. I won’t become like Trina.” Little man’s doing his best to stay strong for his daughter, he doesn’t wanna become Trina, but his other daughter is holding up Trina like she’s who he should aspire to be like.
26.1) “how things are now won’t be forever. You know that, right?” that should be a good thing, But I think she’s referring to her inevitably separating him from Cindy.
26.2) “It’s like I said. I can protect you. I’ve made sure you’ll always be protected. But… Mom will be with Madison.” I knew it, I saw it coming, and I still feel the Sting Greg is right now.
27) “You’ll come with me. But Mom… she’ll be with her favorite child.” you can feel the resentment as she says that, still trying to reassure Greg but can’t help but get those little digs in on Cindy.
28) . “It’s just… I know she’s your wife, and I know it’s selfish of me. It’s not fair to ask this of you. But you picked me, Dad. You chose me, and I thought… you know…” She’s doing the best she can, man this sucks for her to be in a position that she has to do this, but it was still selfish to make him choose like she did.
29) “I am forever in your corner. You know that. You and Madison are the world to me. I’ll always be here for you.” Greg trying to reassure her even in these times is so good to see, he’s so fucking strong.
30.1) “The distance… your mother and I will work that out. We’ve gotten through so much already.” It’s leaving her with Madison and her friends that’d be the big issue.
30.2) “I mean, they have FaceTime for Littles, don’t they? We can still talk—habitat to habitat, video calls, whatever. I’ll always be wherever you need me, Kenzie. I’m your Little.” that optimism and reassurance would be everything to her.
31) “He wasn’t just acknowledging his new role, he was accepting it. He wasn’t going to abandon Cindy, but he couldn’t deny McKenzie either.” a man’s gotta do what a man’s gotta do, as they say,
32) “Greg knew what McKenzie was asking of him, and while it felt like a betrayal of Cindy in some small way, he also knew it was what had to happen. McKenzie needed him—now more than ever.” I’ve never been in that kind of relationship, but one of my biggest fears is having to pick between my child and partner, and he’s forced to live that hypothetical.
33) “Greg couldn’t shake the feeling that maybe, in the end, this made him the bad guy. A bad husband, perhaps” That is 100% how Cindy will see it.
I feel so bad for Greg. he’s being strong and everything, but the weight of being pulled in either direction has gotta be crushing
1) “McKenzie returned, a bottle of water in her hand” Is Greg gonna get some bottled water?
Response: It does not come up from what I recall.
2) “the sense of comfort between them remained” That’s cute
Response: They try
3) “They had just finished going over the bills and budgets, a routine that felt oddly familiar” it’s good to see her letting him help.
Response: She had promised him earlier that he could help with it. So shes fulfilling her promises to keep him involved in things.
4) “Did you see your mother? Is she doing okay?” Nice to see him checking on her, and good to see he’s cautious of how Kenzie may feel about this question.
Response: They do care about each other and love one another. So it seems like the appropriate thing to do for his wife.
5) “He didn’t blame either of them for it, though” I do, I blame Cindy
Response: It’s more understandable why the reader would blame Cindy but Greg being hte spouse would go easier on her then a outside party.
6) “Cindy had wanted McKenzie to focus on her future, on herself, not on Littles, not on them, and certainly not on raising Madison” I can certainly believe that.
Response: Yes, that is relateable moment in my opinion.
7) “It meant a lot to me, Dad… That you picked me. That you chose me over Mom.” It was still shitty of you to make him pick!
Response: I think with her being young its relatively appropriate. If she was older I would personally look at it differently. However I can understand where people wouldn’t like it.
8) “Choosing McKenzie in that moment had felt like betraying Cindy” and choosing Cindy would have felt like betraying McKenzie.
Response: It would have I agree. Greg looks at the sacrifice as part of being a parent to some extent. Where he wants to be there for kids even if its harder on Greg and Cindy.
9) “I promise I’ll do everything I can to make this easier for you.” except help Cindy.
Response: lol you aren’t wrong. Although im sure McKenzie would argue she is helping Cindy just not to the same levels as Greg. But she did go to check on her downstairs with madison. she did intervene between Madison adn Cindy at dinner the other day.
10) “I wish I could take on your day-to-day care. I really do,” So do I McKenzie, but it makes sense you’d be in such a position with the changes you’re enduring
Response: It is possible down the road she would be able to even if in the immediate term she cannot. However she does have alot on her plate so I agree its underestandable.
11) “she didn’t want him to feel like she was taking Madison away from him and Cindy” he wouldn’t feel like that given how much time they spend with Madison, if anything Madison’s trying to take him from McKenzie.
Response: Madison is trying to make sure she maintains a level of control over him.
12) “She needs someone who can take care of her, and you and Mom… you can’t. Not anymore.” she’s right, which worsens it.
Response: Yes, I can’t Madison listening to little versions of her parents. That would not go over well as I can’t see her taking them very seriously. If it was something she didn’t want to do or listening to any punishment they dealt.
13) “You’re not taking her away from me… You’re doing what’s best for her. I know that.” He’s such a good dad.
Response: He tries.
14) “You’ll always be her parents. I’m just… stepping in where you can’t right now.” Might want to explain that to Madison.
Response:She did kind of set that tone at dinner when Madison was talkign down to her mother.
15) “I’ll take care of her, and I’ll make sure you are okay too.” McKenzie said before saying quieter “and mom.” that hesitation before adding Cindy was perfect.
Response: It fit how they feel about each ohter. There is animosity there but also still love.
16) “I don’t, it’s not like I hate Mom or anything… She’s just… it’s difficult.” I’m glad their disagreement isn’t truly hatred.
Response: Hate is a pretty strong feeling to McKenzie. So while they aren’t seeing eye to eye outright hating her mother in a real sense isn’t likely.
17) “Even now, even as a Little, she didn’t like hurting him. She never had” That’s a good daughter.
Response: She cares about him and loves him. So she wouldn’t want to hurt him if she can avoid it.
18.1) “Mom didn’t believe in me when it mattered most, and I don’t know how to let that go. I don’t know how to forgive that.” I can definitely think it’s fair that she’d struggle to forgive Cindy, but she should also acknowledge that Cindy did at least try to make things right between them
Response: The issue with Cindy trying to make things right to McKenzie is that it didn’t happen before she became a little. So she partly looks at the attempts of Cindy doing it as a little being hypocritical and shes just doing it to try to get power not actually thinking that CIndy believes she did somethign wrong. If cCindy had made overatures before this happened McKenzie would probably view htem differently then she does.
18.2) “I still love her—she’s my mom—but it’s different now. I just think it’s best that things ended up this way. She’s ultimately Madison’s now, and maybe that’s for the best.” I can also agree that Madison with Cindy is for the best, justice-wise.
Response: I do think Madison won’t be as harsh as people imagine.
19) “Cindy had tried to protect her daughter, but in doing so, had pushed her away. And now, McKenzie was trying to protect herself by accepting the divide” not exactly a winning strategy from either side.
Response: It’s not but I feel like this kind of thing happens alot in life. Sometimes nothing can fix things other than time.
20.1) “I just didn’t want to disappoint you, Dad” I can see that, she’s hoping to have at least one parent close to her, but she’ll need to do more for Cindy if she truly wants to avoid hurting Greg.
Response: She probably has to atleast throw Cindy some kind of olive branch and then it will ultimately be upto Cindy if she wants to go through the amount of work necessary to fix things. As I feel like McKenzie will only go so far.
20.2) “Hurting you feels different than hurting Mom. When it happens with her, it feels… inevitable, like it’s bound to happen. But with you, it’s worse. Like something inside me breaks when I do.” I think in this case it’s at least partially because she’s blaming Cindy for getting hurt, rather than taking responsibility for hurting Cindy, and while I can certainly get behind blaming Cindy I don’t think that’s the strategy that will help Kenz.
Response: I agree, I partially wrote it with her age in mind where beuase she is younger seh doesn’t get everything right and certainly isn’t always going about things the best of ways. However, thats also part of growing up and getting older and wiser.
21.1) “You’ll need some Little training,” I appreciate that she checked he came to terms with things before bringing it up, but he really doesn’t need training, plenty of little live without it.
Well if you remember tehy aren’t getting formally little trained. As Cindy doesn’t want to be trained by one of her friends. So McKenize is speaking to more informal training. As part of little training is just conditioning and learning to live as a little and how to move around and navigate as a little. You use different muscles and need different skills so its building those up. Which is what McKenzie is more getting at
21.2) “But there are going to be times when I have to ask you to do Little things, like chores or tasks. It’s not because I think less of you, it’s just the way things are now” and hat can happen without training. But little training is very much something for people who think less of littles.
Response this kidn of goes into the prior point but also into what Madison is having Cindy do in building up her core strength just so she has the strength necessary to carry out the task. So that is more what McKenize is getting at. THere is a degree of little training that is important.
22.1) “But promise me you’ll still be my dad. The process… it changes Littles. Some of them come out differently” That’d likely be the psychological toll little endure from training, and a good indication that she shouldn’t do this.
Response: As stated earlier they aren’t going through formal little training. So she isn’t putting him through actual little training.
22.1) “I don’t like the methods, but it’s just how things are. Mom helped set it up that way.” Interesting that a Preema Tech employee help design Genritech little training.
Response: As you see in dayton story with guardian training. while generitech puts it on. There are aspects tehy legally have to cover in ways they have to cover in order to maintain there contract and agreements with the U.S. government. LIttle training is the same way. Generitech and Preematech along with others have lobbying groups that work with the government in devising what should be required and taught. Generitech then per there contract carrys it out. So while they have leeway and can do things to help littles there is a degree of mandated aspects they just have to carry otu regardless of how they feel.
23.1) “She wasn’t just asking for compliance—she was asking for reassurance, for a promise that she wouldn’t lose him to the same system that had taken so many others” then don’t give him to that system, dambass
Response: this is covered in the prior two points.
23.2) “She didn’t want him to become another obedient, hollow Little, stripped of his personality. She wanted him to remain her father, even if their relationship had changed” Yeah that’s what the training is intended to do, break and bend littles and their personalities into obedient submissive slaves for their future guardian
Response: She is hoping that pulling him out as much as she can will be helpful and the fact that its training through trina will help lesson things. She is in the background communicating to Madison. So there is that as well.
24) “Kenz, pumpkin… You know I’ll do everything I can not to lose myself. Having you as my support system… that means everything. More than you know.” but will that be enough?
Response: I guess time will tell. Commenting any furhter would just be a spoiler.
25) “It means the world to me that you still see me as your father. I know things have to change, and I know I’m a Little now. There will be things I’ll need to do, and I’ll do them. But being able to talk to you like this, to still share things with you, it keeps my head on straight. I promise, Kenzie. You won’t lose me. I won’t become like Trina.” Little man’s doing his best to stay strong for his daughter, he doesn’t wanna become Trina, but his other daughter is holding up Trina like she’s who he should aspire to be like.
Response: Cindy’s beliefs are an albatross to them now as Madison believes in them alot more then McKenize does.
26.1) “how things are now won’t be forever. You know that, right?” that should be a good thing, But I think she’s referring to her inevitably separating him from Cindy.
Response: Yeah, I mean Madison and McKenzie won’t live together forever. So there is a degree of speration which is inevitable.
26.2) “It’s like I said. I can protect you. I’ve made sure you’ll always be protected. But… Mom will be with Madison.” I knew it, I saw it coming, and I still feel the Sting Greg is right now.
Response: I feel like logically that was always going to be how things ended up. There is only so many logical ways it can fall and I can’t see McKenzie and madison living togehter
27) “You’ll come with me. But Mom… she’ll be with her favorite child.” you can feel the resentment as she says that, still trying to reassure Greg but can’t help but get those little digs in on Cindy.
Response: There is a bit of resentment there that was intentional. I’m glad that feeling she had was clear to the reader. Cindy makes it easy to have digs at.
28) . “It’s just… I know she’s your wife, and I know it’s selfish of me. It’s not fair to ask this of you. But you picked me, Dad. You chose me, and I thought… you know…” She’s doing the best she can, man this sucks for her to be in a position that she has to do this, but it was still selfish to make him choose like she did.
Response: I fully agree nothign really to add. She is doing her best to make the best of a bad situation at an age she shouldn’t have too.
29) “I am forever in your corner. You know that. You and Madison are the world to me. I’ll always be here for you.” Greg trying to reassure her even in these times is so good to see, he’s so fucking strong.
Response: Well he loves his girls. They have awlays been a priority to him and even a little that doesn’t change how he feels about them. Even Madison is generally nicer to Greg then Cindy.
30.1) “The distance… your mother and I will work that out. We’ve gotten through so much already.” It’s leaving her with Madison and her friends that’d be the big issue.
Response: I agree but there is a point where some of it is unavoidable. The only hope is that by hte time Madison Graduates things would be different and tehy would be more mature.
30.2) “I mean, they have FaceTime for Littles, don’t they? We can still talk—habitat to habitat, video calls, whatever. I’ll always be wherever you need me, Kenzie. I’m your Little.” that optimism and reassurance would be everything to her.
Response: Yeah as the intent is that she wants him with her and if there was a way she could take care of Greg herself that would be fair to him she would. I’ll be curious to see what you think of tommorrows episode.
31) “He wasn’t just acknowledging his new role, he was accepting it. He wasn’t going to abandon Cindy, but he couldn’t deny McKenzie either.” a man’s gotta do what a man’s gotta do, as they say,
Response: Most certainly.
32) “Greg knew what McKenzie was asking of him, and while it felt like a betrayal of Cindy in some small way, he also knew it was what had to happen. McKenzie needed him—now more than ever.” I’ve never been in that kind of relationship, but one of my biggest fears is having to pick between my child and partner, and he’s forced to live that hypothetical.
Response: It would be a difficult situation as you love your child but you’d love your spouse as well. So its like who do you side with ultimately. ONe of those your child or spouse is gonna get shot but you can only save one situations. You often don’t know until you get in that situation.
33) “Greg couldn’t shake the feeling that maybe, in the end, this made him the bad guy. A bad husband, perhaps” That is 100% how Cindy will see it.
Response: If anyone would feel he was the badguy it would be Cindy.
Prediction
1) at the end of those six ish years Cindy seeing the writing on the wall mentally decides that Greg should move on from her and find someone else more worthy of his love as he goes to live with McKenzie. And pretends to be the bad guy and tells Greg that she doesn’t want him anymore breaking his heart. Once he and McKenzie are gone she breaks down in tears as we see she choose to let Greg be happy even if it’s not with her.
Now I’m hoping I’m wrong with this one which is insane to say lol but this is a possibility in many routes this can go once we get to that separation point between the two groups in this family.
Greg got lucky. When Mads and Kenz split Cindy will be unrecognizable to Greg and Kenz. It’s sad but inevitable. Like a the Sadie situation just a little less Sadistic.
I think the Jury is sitll out on Madison. She has time to grow and change still. So far she hasn’t done anything all that cruel or mean towards Cindy.
While that may be, she has no constant positive role models. Kenz is away and she’s friends with people who are outwardly cruel and have modified the system to their liking without any regard towards their littles. Unless she has someone capable of being a voice of reason thats around often she has no where to go but down. Her mother’s teachings have had a massive influence on her and she has no alternatives? It’ll take a miracle or a near death situation for her to think otherwise.
1) nice that Kenzie let Greg in on the details of the finances. She might be smart, but having someone that’s been doing it for years look it over never hurts
2) hearing he’s proud of her must be a relief
3)”McKenzie felt it every time she was around her mother, the unspoken resentment, the distance growing wider with each passing day.” Like i said the other day, just a small attempt to make amends would be nice. Cindy would need to really consider her words though. the wrong ones would ruin it
4)”She had always wanted what was best for McKenzie, even if it came across as harsh or idealistic.” I can see that. Seems like Kenzie’s a bit more like Cindy than she knows lol she’s probably really stubborn in her beliefs and unwilling to back down. that would tend to create some tension
5)”It was easier to keep the conversation on the surface than to confront the deeper rift that lay beneath”. You’ll need to address it eventually, Kenize. Just start really small with Cindy. like give her a couple of minutes at least in the future. hell, do it for greg lol
6)”Cindy’s intentions had come from a place of care, it hadn’t been fair to McKenzie” true. Cindy was in the moment too and still reeling from everything. she didn’t really consider how Kenzie would feel. it’s sad that was what hammered the nail in the coffin
7)picking between kenzie and cindy sucked. I still think it sucks for greg to be in the middle of it now. That kind of thing would drag me into the ground with guilt no matter what I picked.
8)”But I have to work, and I have standards I have to meet for the Emancipation…” Her voice trailed off before she added, almost in a whisper, “and the adoption.”” that’s the real exhausting part. having to do all of that one your own to keep your family together must extremely stressful.
9)“I don’t want you to feel like you’re losing her,” in a way they kind of are. She’s there, but that’s not their madison, that their guardian. she’s not being a daughter at this point.
10) “I just don’t want you or Mom to feel like I’m replacing you”. I like that she included Cindy in that. Kenzie must really be struggling with things between her and Cindy, more than she’s letting on, even now
11)”Mom didn’t believe in me when it mattered most, and I don’t know how to let that go. I don’t know how to forgive that” forgivness is hard and takes a long time. sometimes you just have to take it by one small step
12)”When it happens with her, it feels… inevitable, like it’s bound to happen”. ouch
13)”But promise me you’ll still be my dad. The process… it changes Littles. Some of them come out different. I don’t like the methods, but it’s just how things are” What does the training by a generitech employee differ from Cindy’s methods? Like Generitech’s should be the defacto way to train a little and I doubt they’d follow Cindy and the policital people she helped put in place over their own methods or even let it affect their training of littles
14)”she was asking for reassurance, for a promise that she wouldn’t lose him to the same system that had taken so many others. She didn’t want him to become another obedient, hollow Little, stripped of his personality. She wanted him to remain her father, even if their relationship had changed.” As soon as he starts to change, kenzie needs to step up and stop it. It’ll be inevitable. It’s like 6 (3 offical guardians, 1 unofficial, and roughly 2 trained littles) vs 1 for training, all of them being supporters of Cindy’s methods. There’s almost no way he doesn’t change in those odds unless the training itself changes imo
15) sounds like she fully intends on moving and taking greg when Madison’s 18
16)Man having to pick between your wife and your children’s gotta suck. Kenzie probably doesn’t really understand how badly Greg is feeling right now, or it’ll be brought up this week in a post.
1)She did say she would early on and shes a person of her word. She wouldn’t lie about it. She wants to keep her dad included in things so he still feels apart of everything and that the is still contributing in some way to the household.
2) It does mean a lot to her. Especially now that she is kind of the head of the household. Its nice to have someone tell you that you are doing well or the right things.
3) I agree. I’m sure an overture will be made eventually. It will be up to Cindy to follow upon it and like you said chose her words.
4) Thats kind of a trait of all the wessen women. One only knows where they get that from. Surely not there father.
5) She will but its also important to know how much you can handle. Sometimes one more burden is the straw that breaks the camels back.
6) Cindy was in the moment but years of her actions weakened that bridge and that’s also on her as the parent. McKenzie is and at that time would have been fairly young.
7) I agree and its shown that McKenzie does feel some degree of guilt over asking but she also needed to know for her own sake. Sometimes there is no easy way to ask what you want to know and its easier just to say it as then for better or worse you know.
8) Yes, she is literally shouldering the burden of keeping the family together. Which is a lot for anyone to do at any age let alone as a teenager.
9) It is kind of depicted that Madison has been going through a bit of a teenage rebellious angsty stage in general. So their madison was a bit on hiatus with teenage emotions and hormones.
In theory she would mellow a bit as she gets older and moves through more of her teenage years.
10) She is, the whole thing has been hard on her.
11)That is true and she could be doing that or trying to do that. We aren’t all that far removed from the incident that really blew this up. It could take months or even more to fully resolve as it was literal years of events feelings built up over time of her feeling like needing to be the bigger person or defer to her mother even though she didn’t feel like she was wrong or was heard or her thoughts or points were considered.
12) That line is rough, but also raw as its exactly how she feels.
13) Generitech has to meet government standards when testing just like with the education system where schools need to meet to federal standard. Generitech is required by the government to have to teach certain things or risk losing the ability to train and educate littles.
The actual curriculum is just like the actual education system lobbied for so while Generitech does lobby the things they want and they do have the ability go beyond what is required and they do to reach there values. There are things they don’t agree with which are federally mandated to be included.
You kind of saw that in Daytons story where the instructor was more reluctant about teaching some things or covered things that generitech wouldn’t cover in guardian training if they could just include whatever they wanted without any outside impact.
So generitech generally very carefully makes sure to include everything that is required so then even though they go in and then also teach there beliefs they cannot be punished as they are teaching the required aspects of guardian and little training.
14) That is true she could step in or talk to madison or just pull greg out. THhere is no telling what could happen.
15) I doubt she would abandon her sister immediately but her intent is clear. She does intend to take her father with her and will protect him. Which in reality Madison is probably aware of and why he generally gets better treatment.
16) It would be a hard decision. Iw ouldn’t envy anyone having to make that kind of decision.