The door clicked shut behind Madison, plunging the bathroom into darkness. The sudden absence of light sent a wave of panic through Cindy, her vision momentarily swallowed by the blackness. For a brief, terrifying moment, she felt utterly trapped, but then her Little vision kicked in, adjusting to the dim surroundings. She could still make out the grimy contours of the sink and the cleaning supplies Madison had dumped at her feet. It was a bitter reminder of her new reality—her body, her senses, everything about her had been altered. She was a Little now.
Her stomach churned as she stared at the mop and brushes Madison had left behind. The thought of using them to clean her daughter’s filth made Cindy want to scream. But even in the solitude of the bathroom, she knew better. She could feel the tight collar around her neck, a constant threat. If she raised her voice, if she let her emotions slip, the collar would activate, cutting off her breath, punishing her for stepping out of line. It was a cruel, silent guard, always watching, always ready to correct her.
“I can’t believe this,” Cindy whispered to herself, her voice barely audible. “I’m actually Madison’s Little. She’s going to treat me like her damn Little, use me like I’m her pet.” The realization hit her again, as harsh as it had the first time. “I’m going to live as a Little to my own daughter.”
The thought made her sick. Cindy had spent years grooming Madison, preparing her for the responsibilities that came with adulthood, even the eventuality of having a Little of her own. She had thought Madison wasn’t ready yet—that she needed more maturity, that her grades needed improvement. Cindy had even considered sending her to a private school to help guide her development. All those plans, all those hopes for her daughter’s future, had been turned on their head.
Now, instead of preparing Madison to get a Little, Cindy was the Little. She was the one standing in the disgusting sink, surrounded by grime, preparing to clean the very thing she had once nagged Madison about. The irony wasn’t lost on her. Just a few days ago, Cindy had demanded that Madison clean this bathroom, threatening to take away her allowance and her phone if she didn’t. Now, Madison was outsourcing the job—to her. Cindy knew that, under different circumstances, she would have applauded Madison for delegating such a task. But not like this. Not when she was the Little being delegated to.
And where was Greg? Her husband, who was supposed to be by her side in this nightmare, was living it up with McKenzie, getting pampered and loved on, while Cindy was left with brushes, mops, and cleaning buckets. It wasn’t fair. Her frustration boiled inside her, but she swallowed it down, knowing there was no outlet for it.
With a sigh of disgust, Cindy grabbed the mop, dunking it into the bucket of soapy water. Just as she began to work, the door creaked open again. Cindy’s heart sank as she looked up to see Madison walking back in, a smug smirk on her face.
“Tut, tut,” Madison said with a mockingly sweet tone. “It doesn’t look like my Little has gotten very far.” She laughed, a sound that echoed through the bathroom, bouncing off the walls. “You’re hilarious, Mom. You could never clean this sink in a reasonable time frame. You’re much too Little for that.”
Cindy’s grip tightened on the mop, her knuckles turning white. She wanted to snap back, but the collar around her neck kept her silent.
Madison crossed her arms, looking down at Cindy as if she were no more than a pet. “I mainly just wanted to see you try,” she said with a chuckle. “I wouldn’t do that to you. You’re my mom, after all—even if you are my Little.”
Relief washed over Cindy, and she nearly collapsed from the weight of it. “Thank you, thank you. So I don’t need to clean this? Oh, thank god,” she said, her voice trembling with exhaustion. “You really had me going.”
Madison’s smirk widened. “Oh, I’m sorry, did you think I meant you didn’t have to clean the sink at all?” she asked, her tone dripping with false innocence. “Mom, that’s funny. I like a Little with a sense of humor.”
Cindy’s stomach dropped. She had misunderstood, and the relief she had felt moments ago was ripped away.
“You are going to clean the sink,” Madison continued, her eyes gleaming with amusement. “I just got you a pressure washer. The sink will give you good training on how to use it. It’s probably too much for Dad to handle, but you’re going to have plenty of other tasks. Shoes to clean, jewelry to polish, phone screens to wipe, my smart watch… all kinds of things that will become part of your daily life as my Little. Just think of all the ways you’ll be useful.”
Madison set the pressure washer down in the sink with a loud clunk. Cindy flinched at the sound, the weight of her new life crashing down on her all over again.
“Those mops, brushes, little rags—they’re all part of your workset now,” Madison continued, her voice turning serious. “Obviously, you can’t pressure wash everything. And my Little would never damage any of my stuff, would she?” Madison’s voice took on a harsh edge, her eyes narrowing dangerously.
“No, no, of course not,” Cindy stammered, her heart racing.
“Good,” Madison said with satisfaction. “Anything of mine that you handle should be treated like a national treasure. As a Little, you should understand that most of it is more important than you are now. Isn’t that right, Mom? Isn’t that what you always said?”
Cindy’s face burned with shame. Those were her words. She had taught those lessons, instilled them in her daughters and others. A Little’s value had always been secondary to the usefulness of objects—phones, watches, even shoes.
“Yes,” Cindy whispered. “Yes, that’s what I said.”
Madison raised an eyebrow, her arms crossed. “I must have missed my Little thanking me for my generosity. I’m putting your beliefs into practice, Mom. Isn’t this what you always wanted?”
Cindy’s lips trembled, the words caught in her throat. “Thank you, Ms. Wessen,” she finally forced out. “Thank you for your generosity.”
Madison nodded, satisfied. “Good girl. Now, get to work.”
“Honey, please, you have to listen—” Cindy began, but her voice faltered. It sounded weak, meek, nothing like the commanding tone she used to have. It didn’t have the force to dominate a room anymore; it barely had the force to reach Madison’s ears.
Madison’s gaze sharpened, her arms crossing tighter. “I have to what? Did you just tell me what I have to do?” she asked, her voice hard and cold. “I don’t believe it. Cindy Wessen, of all people, the woman who taught everyone how this all worked, who paved the way for purebred rights, is now saying that her guardian has to do something?”
Cindy’s heart raced, fear taking hold as she realized her mistake. Madison’s words cut deep, each one reminding her of the rules she had set in place, the beliefs she had preached to everyone. Now, she was being held to those very standards.
“You know better than that, don’t you, Mom?” Madison continued, her voice laced with authority. “A person doesn’t have to do anything for a Little. It’s the Little who has to do things for their guardian. Isn’t that right?”
“Yes, yes, of course,” Cindy stammered, her eyes lowering in defeat. “I misspoke.”
“That’s what I thought,” Madison said, her tone softening but still laced with condescension. “Now, get back to work. This is what you always wanted. Remember?”
Cindy didn’t respond, her mind too overwhelmed to form words. She simply lowered her head and picked up the pressure washer, knowing that there was no escape. She was trapped in the very system she had created, bound by the rules she had once enforced on others. Her only hope now was to navigate it carefully, to find a way to influence Madison from within the confines of the world she had built.
As much as it hurt, as much as she hated it, Cindy knew one thing for certain: she was Madison’s Little, and nothing was going to change that. She had made sure of it herself.
Cindy sat quietly, her thoughts swirling as Madison’s words lingered in the air. The cold truth settled into her bones—change could only come from within the very system she had built. The irony was crushing. She had spent years advocating for a society that placed Littles in subservient roles, convinced that it was for the best. Now, she was trapped within that same world, the very world she had helped create.
As Madison spoke, Cindy began to see that she wasn’t going to change her daughter’s mind through words or arguments. The beliefs she had fought so hard to establish had spread too far, taken root too deeply. She had won the war, but it was for the wrong side. Now, the only way forward was to try to change Madison from within, to make her a better person, even if she couldn’t change society at large. It was the least she could do—to try to undo some of the damage in her own daughter’s heart, even if the rest of the world remained unchanged.
Greg’s words echoed in her mind. They needed to be there for their children. They needed to find a way to live within the confines of the new world they inhabited. They were part of the Little world now, for better or worse. Any influence Cindy had left was through Madison, and Madison alone. As much as she hated it, as much as it twisted her heart to admit it, she was Madison’s Little. Nothing was going to change that now—not after all she had done to ensure this very outcome.
“I can see you understand, Mom,” Madison said, her voice shifting into a tone that was almost sweet. It was the same voice Cindy remembered from years ago, the voice of her preteen daughter who used to follow her around, eager to help with anything she could. “I know you misspoke earlier. This is just how things have to be. You’re a Little, my Little, and the best way I can honor who you were is by training you to be the best, most proper Little I can. Just like I know you’d want me to. I know as a Little you aren’t exactly the same person anymore.”
Cindy’s heart ached as she listened to Madison’s words. There was a tragic innocence in the way her daughter spoke, as if she truly believed this was the right thing to do, that this was how she could honor the mother she had once known. Cindy wanted to scream, to tell her daughter that she was still the same person, that she hadn’t changed.
“No, honey,” Cindy said softly, her voice trembling. “I am. I am the same person. I haven’t changed.”
Madison smiled at her, the kind of smile you give to someone who doesn’t understand. “I know you’re trying to comfort me. You’re a good Little. I’ll work hard to train you, to teach you everything my mom taught me. You deserve that, and it’ll give you the best chance at having a good life as a Little. It’s greedy of me, I know, but it’s nice seeing everything you fought for, everything you worked so hard to build.”
Madison’s voice grew softer, almost nostalgic. “All the fundraising, the social events, the training programs, the public speaking… all the educational videos on Little training and guardian training. It makes me feel like everything you fought for is still alive, like it’s still here. So, in a way, it’s like you’re not gone.”
Cindy’s throat tightened. What could she say? How could she argue with this? Her daughter was trying to honor the legacy she had built, to keep her mother’s vision alive, even as it twisted her into something Cindy no longer recognized. There was no cruelty in Madison’s words, but the weight of her sincerity crushed Cindy’s heart. She had created this reality, and now she had to live in it.
The belief was that when a person became a Little, it was as though their human body died and they were reborn in the flesh of a Little. The body’s cells, the physical matter, broke down and regenerated, but imperfectly. This was why the cure never worked—why, despite all attempts, humanity couldn’t play God. The newly formed cells weren’t compatible with the original. Over time, they broke down, leaving only the “God-given” matter behind. It was like a person had to mourn the loss of who they had been, accepting that what remained was both the same and irrevocably different.
Cindy felt that now, more than ever. She was mourning herself—mourning the woman she had been, the mother, the advocate, the fighter. What was left was a shadow of that person, reborn into this new body, this new life. And Madison—her sweet, misguided daughter—was doing what she thought was right, trying to hold on to the pieces of her mother that still existed.
“You can start cleaning now,” Madison said suddenly, her tone shifting back to that of a guardian instructing her Little. “I’ll fetch you in a bit. Since it’s the weekend, you’re allowed to stay up past nine tonight. I can’t control fully what McKenzie does with Dad, but you are mine, and you will follow my rules. It’s what Mom would want.”
Cindy flinched at the last words. It’s what Mom would want. Madison had no idea how wrong she was.
“Be thankful you aren’t one of Emma’s Littles,” Madison added, her voice casual as she moved toward the door. “She’s from England, and she brought house Littles with her. Her personal Little is American, though. But anyway, her house Littles double as pooper scoopers. You know, because why should she have to pick up after her dogs? That’s what Littles are for.”
Cindy swallowed the lump in her throat, trying not to think too much about what Madison had just described. She had known Emma—at least, she thought she had. The girl had always seemed sweet, polite, well-mannered. But Cindy had never met Emma’s parents, never seen what life was like in their household. The thought of being a house Little, cleaning up after dogs, sent a shiver through her. But then again, was it really all that different from her own situation? She was a Little now, tasked with cleaning sinks. The differences seemed less and less clear with every passing moment.
Reluctantly, Cindy picked up the pressure washer Madison had left behind. It was large, heavy, and awkward in her hands, but once she turned it on, the steady stream of water gave her some small sense of relief. It was better than scrubbing with the mop. As she sprayed the sides of Madison’s filthy sink, she realized that it would still take time, but at least she could clean small sections in one pass.
“You’re doing great, Mom,” Madison said from the doorway, her voice light and almost cheerful. “I’ll leave you to it. I’ll check back on you later.”
The door closed behind her with a click, and Cindy was left alone in the bathroom, the pressure washer humming in her hands. The darkened room felt suffocating, the only light coming from the faint glow of the hallway seeping under the door. As she sprayed the dirty walls of the sink, a part of her wanted to scream—to lash out and demand that Madison see her as more than just a Little. But deep down, she knew the truth. Madison couldn’t see her that way anymore. To Madison, she was a Little now, and nothing was going to change that.
As the minutes passed and the sound of water echoed through the bathroom, Cindy worked in silence, her heart heavy with the realization that this was her life now. She was Madison’s Little, cleaning sinks in the dark, waiting for her daughter to return.
I really want to see a climax where Cindy snaps under the pressure. Where she’s acts in a way none of them would expect. Yelling with the collar tightening over and over or something. She’s in a bad situation and it seems like the world is ok with that. I’m surprised littles don’t commit suicide more often. But then again we’re still on day 3. But Madison is pushing all the buttons and it’s only a matter of time before Cindy can’t take it anymore.
Well like Auska said Littles can’t really do self harm to an extent at least not life threatening and sometimes the littles are forced and brain washed to accept their reality although I do agree that see how the mental health numbers for Littles would be good to see how to degree how realistic can it be for them all to be mentally stable regardless of the circumstances! But again the chances of Littles doing any self harm is low and don’t have the tools for it the best thing would be jumping of high places while their guardians aren’t watching but still hard enough for that if their let outside !
I think it would be nice to see if the growth for more Littles rights and treatment have increased and leads to better matches and environment but it’s a wait and see
Overall nothing bad enough to warrant suicide has occurred. In general suicide is not the answer. Especially when in reality so far she has only been asked to do shitty a couple shitty jobs and humble herself. Lots of people work jobs they don’t like every day. My grandfather worked at a meat packing plant for 40 years and not cause he loved it. It was just what he had to do.
This is kind of similar to Cindy this is something she created and now what she has to do to see it through and while better days could be ahead it certainly wouldn’t happen in days or hours. That kind of change happens over a period of time as people reflect, grow and change.
Often the bad has to be depicted to show growth. Early smallara Sara was more harsh where in later versions she has grown and changed but the most change occurs in the snippets that months or years in the future.
So it all kind of goes back to your last point of it’s only been 3 days and so far nothing has happened to her in which she hasn’t advocated for.
I think Cindy would be very close to saying she was wrong no matter what at least until she got shocked to the point of being knocked out which should shock her daughter out of being evil or she has created a monster and that will be her human legacy
Again this is just depressing to watch this go on I wish I could Cindy huge and some therapy sessions but the drama continues and it interesting but so sad to watch in either side at this rate!!!!!!
understandable kind of like train wreck. You want to look away but are drawn to it.
1) “She could feel the tight collar around her neck, a constant threat” It really would be, especially since we know it can be activated remotely.
2) “I’m actually Madison’s Little. She’s going to treat me like her damn Little, use me like I’m her pet.” Well, well, well, if it isn’t the consequence of her own actions.
3) “Cindy had spent years grooming Madison, preparing her for the responsibilities that came with adulthood, even the eventuality of having a Little of her own” and how much worse for Cindy would this be if she’d finished?
4) “Cindy knew that, under different circumstances, she would have applauded Madison for delegating such a task. But not like this. Not when she was the Little being delegated to” one rule for Cindy, another for everyone else.
5) “Her husband, who was supposed to be by her side in this nightmare, was living it up with McKenzie, getting pampered and loved on, while Cindy was left with brushes, mops, and cleaning buckets. It wasn’t fair” I mean both are getting back what they gave to their daughters, sounds fair to me.
6.1) “You’re hilarious, Mom. You could never clean this sink in a reasonable time frame. You’re much too little for that.” Oh Maddie was just being a big meanie, lol.
6.2) ““I wouldn’t do that to you. You’re my mom, after all—even if you are my Little.” You’ve apparently done it to her several times before she shrank.
7.1) “I just got you a pressure washer. The sink will give you good training on how to use it” More little tools, and that is more reasonable for the task.
7.2) “It’s probably too much for Dad to handle” Poor Greg.
8) “Shoes to clean, jewelry to polish, phone screens to wipe, my smart watch… all kinds of things that will become part of your daily life as my Little” all tasks that seem more reasonable than the one she’s doing.
9.1) “Anything of mine that you handle should be treated like a national treasure” egotistic little bitch
9.2) “As a Little, you should understand that most of it is more important than you are now. Isn’t that right, Mom? Isn’t that what you always said?” Wow, even for Cindy that’s shit.
10) “A Little’s value had always been secondary to the usefulness of objects—phones, watches, even shoes.” A little would be somewhere between $30,000.00 to $50,000.00, none of those objects match that value, unless you’re looking at designer things, which I doubt Maddison has at that value.
11) “I must have missed my Little thanking me for my generosity. I’m putting your beliefs into practice, Mom. Isn’t this what you always wanted?” Salt for your wound, Cindy.
12) “I don’t believe it. Cindy Wessen, of all people, the woman who taught everyone how this all worked, who paved the way for purebred rights, is now saying that her guardian has to do something?” man, she loves digging that grave.
13) “. Madison’s words cut deep, each one reminding her of the rules she had set in place, the beliefs she had preached to everyone. Now, she was being held to those very standards.” of course, you wouldn’t want to be a hypocrite now, would you.
14) “bound by the rules she had once enforced on others. Her only hope now was to navigate it carefully, to find a way to influence Madison from within the confines of the world she had built” but you put so much time into preventing that from being a possibility.
15) “She had won the war, but it was for the wrong side” damn right she did.
16) “I know you misspoke earlier. This is just how things have to be. You’re a Little, my Little, and the best way I can honor who you were is by training you to be the best, most proper Little I can. Just like I know you’d want me to. I know as a Little you aren’t exactly the same person anymore.” It’s got a cruel level of sweetness to it where she seems genuinely surprised Cindy would change her mind while honouring her.
17) “There was a tragic innocence in the way her daughter spoke, as if she truly believed this was the right thing to do, that this was how she could honor the mother she had once known” just you wait until Cindy gets her hands on the rapscallion who taught her daughter such nonsense.
18) “No, honey,” Interesting that Maddie hasn’t objected to being called that.
19) “I am. I am the same person. I haven’t changed.” well you have, a lot of opinions and stances have shifted, not to mention she’s starting to break.
20) “I’ll work hard to train you, to teach you everything my mom taught me” talking about her and her mum like their different people, fucking brutal.
21) “All the fundraising, the social events, the training programs, the public speaking… all the educational videos on Little training and guardian training. It makes me feel like everything you fought for is still alive, like it’s still here. So, in a way, it’s like you’re not gone.” that was lucky timing, I was almost starting to pity her.
22.1) “The belief was that when a person became a Little, it was as though their human body died and they were reborn in the flesh of a Little. The body’s cells, the physical matter, broke down and regenerated, but imperfectly” that’s as good an explanation as any.
22.2) “This was why the cure never worked … The newly formed cells weren’t compatible with the original. Over time, they broke down, leaving only the “God-given” matter behind” That makes sense, still brutal though.
22.3) “It was like a person had to mourn the loss of who they had been, accepting that what remained was both the same and irrevocably different.” i feel like a lot of disabilities would feel like that,
23) “Madison—her sweet, misguided daughter—was doing what she thought was right, trying to hold on to the pieces of her mother that still existed” and who provided that misguidance?
24) “Since it’s the weekend, you’re allowed to stay up past nine tonight.” I’ll bet that’s more to do with the fact that she’s been put to work.
25) “I can’t control fully what McKenzie does with Dad, but you are mine, and you will follow my rules. It’s what Mom would want.” Twist that knife.
26) “It’s what Mom would want. Madison had no idea how wrong she was.” She’s not wrong though, the version of you she’s calling “her mom” in this instance would absolutely want this.
27) “Emma’s England and she brought house Littles with her. Her personal Little is American, though. But anyway, her house Littles double as pooper scoopers. You know, because why should she have to pick up after her dogs? That’s what Littles are for” Man, Emma must have some wealth behind her to have both personal and house littles, and little trained dogs that I’m guessing won’t attack them. She sounds like an interesting character to meet later.
Out of curiosity, would she have had to get retrained as a Guardian in America or would the English one still count in The States?
28) “The thought of being a house Little, cleaning up after dogs, sent a shiver through her. But then again, was it really all that different from her own situation?” as gross ans Ciny’s current task is, I’d prefer that to dog shit.
1) “She could feel the tight collar around her neck, a constant threat” It really would be, especially since we know it can be activated remotely.
Response: It would be difficult to get used to I feel like as mentally you would always be thinking about it at least until you got used to it. In theory you would adjust over time to only speak at hte proper levels and answer properly Where it wouldn’t activate but it still would be a lot for someone to get used to. However, much easier for a smallborn as they would have a collar presumably around there neck the entirety of their life. So it would probably almost be a cultural thing where people had adourend collars and the fancier ones had a level of prestige to it. Similar to how jewelry and watches in modern society.
2) “I’m actually Madison’s Little. She’s going to treat me like her damn Little, use me like I’m her pet.” Well, well, well, if it isn’t the consequence of her own actions.
Response: Yes. seeing the consequences of ones actions play out before you is a bit different to see as in real life we don’t often get to see people actually have to face consequences behind what they have done, said or preached. So seeing someone who advocated for a certain style of life to then have to live that style of life themselves is something that can be off putting to some even if it is warranted. As we are almost accustomed to people not having to live up to there word, or actually practice what they preach.
3) “Cindy had spent years grooming Madison, preparing her for the responsibilities that came with adulthood, even the eventuality of having a Little of her own” and how much worse for Cindy would this be if she’d finished?
Response: Potentially more strict but Madison did always have McKenzie as well to kind of balance her somewhat. As Madison has eluded to the fact she wouldn’t raise a little who wasn’t her mother to the standards that her mother believed. She is doing to her mother because her mom believed so strongly about it she views it as this is what she would want and expect as its what she fought for. She hasn’t actually made the connection or have an understanding fully that her mother is actually a hypocrite or at least to what level.
4) “Cindy knew that, under different circumstances, she would have applauded Madison for delegating such a task. But not like this. Not when she was the Little being delegated to” one rule for Cindy, another for everyone else.
Response: This is how so many people work sadly. Seperate rules and policies the masses have one rule and the rich and elite have another. Its understandable Cindy would have a similar divide.
5) “Her husband, who was supposed to be by her side in this nightmare, was living it up with McKenzie, getting pampered and loved on, while Cindy was left with brushes, mops, and cleaning buckets. It wasn’t fair” I mean both are getting back what they gave to their daughters, sounds fair to me.
Response: Yes, as its not like Greg advocated for the kind of life Cindy did. He also didn’t force beliefs into his daughters which has left him getting a bit different treatment as they feel differently about him and want differently for him then they do Cindy.
6.1) “You’re hilarious, Mom. You could never clean this sink in a reasonable time frame. You’re much too little for that.” Oh Maddie was just being a big meanie, lol.
Response: She was. SHe never intended to make her mom exclusively clean with just hte mop. As she was aware it would take her way to long probably the majority of a day if not two days.
6.2) ““I wouldn’t do that to you. You’re my mom, after all—even if you are my Little.” You’ve apparently done it to her several times before she shrank.
Response: One does not look behind the curtain lethal. This is a wizard of oz kind of thing.
7.1) “I just got you a pressure washer. The sink will give you good training on how to use it” More little tools, and that is more reasonable for the task.
Response: With a pressure washer it would be in some ways fun. As pressure washing is a bit therapeutic. Seing something filthy get washed away clean with water.
7.2) “It’s probably too much for Dad to handle” Poor Greg.
Response: He will probably survive just fine knowing he is unable to perform such a task. I know I could sleep just fine with the knowledge I’m incapable of cleaning madison’s sink.
8) “Shoes to clean, jewelry to polish, phone screens to wipe, my smart watch… all kinds of things that will become part of your daily life as my Little” all tasks that seem more reasonable than the one she’s doing.
Response: that is a fair assessment. I’m sure Madison will have a wide breath of activities for Cindy to perform to make Madison’s life easier. According to Cindy that is what Cindy is here for.
9.1) “Anything of mine that you handle should be treated like a national treasure” egotistic little bitch
Response: That one is a bit harsh, but its Cindy’s own words as you will see or saw as you read further.
9.2) “As a Little, you should understand that most of it is more important than you are now. Isn’t that right, Mom? Isn’t that what you always said?” Wow, even for Cindy that’s shit.
Response: Oh and its the very next point. It is Classic Cindy. I’m surprised you wouldn’t expect this from Cindy as this point.
10) “A Little’s value had always been secondary to the usefulness of objects—phones, watches, even shoes.” A little would be somewhere between $30,000.00 to $50,000.00, none of those objects match that value, unless you’re looking at designer things, which I doubt Maddison has at that value.
Response: Although Madison’s phone and smart watch would connect Madison to the world and her friends. It would have therapeutic effect as she is able to maintain her social connections would increase its intrinsic value beyond its material value. Where being able to communicate with her friends and socially stay in touch with the world as she knows it could be viewed as worth more then the amount of a little.
11) “I must have missed my Little thanking me for my generosity. I’m putting your beliefs into practice, Mom. Isn’t this what you always wanted?” Salt for your wound, Cindy.
Response: With a extra dash of humbling.
12) “I don’t believe it. Cindy Wessen, of all people, the woman who taught everyone how this all worked, who paved the way for purebred rights, is now saying that her guardian has to do something?” man, she loves digging that grave.
Response: She’s probably digging a backup grave at this point.
13) “. Madison’s words cut deep, each one reminding her of the rules she had set in place, the beliefs she had preached to everyone. Now, she was being held to those very standards.” of course, you wouldn’t want to be a hypocrite now, would you.
Response: Cindy is the poser child for hypocrisy at this point. She was full this is okay and how it should be as I wont have to live like that. But well karma.
14) “bound by the rules she had once enforced on others. Her only hope now was to navigate it carefully, to find a way to influence Madison from within the confines of the world she had built” but you put so much time into preventing that from being a possibility.
REsponse: Yup, Madison would need someone an outside force beyond Cindy to intervene and change Madison’s mind over time. As its doubtful Cindy is in any position to create enough outward force to push Madison into something different. Although even if with change its possible Madison would treat Cindy the same as she could view this as what cindy wants and how she wants to live as its what she fought for.
15) “She had won the war, but it was for the wrong side” damn right she did.
Response: She isn’t first one to end up on the wrong side of the stick.
16) “I know you misspoke earlier. This is just how things have to be. You’re a Little, my Little, and the best way I can honor who you were is by training you to be the best, most proper Little I can. Just like I know you’d want me to. I know as a Little you aren’t exactly the same person anymore.” It’s got a cruel level of sweetness to it where she seems genuinely surprised Cindy would change her mind while honouring her.
Response: It is 100% genuine. As the intent is Madison truly believes this si what her mom wants and even though she would do things differently she is purposefully maintaining her mothers beliefs for her mothers benefit because she loves her. So she is putting her mothers beliefs , wants and ideals before her own. Raising Cindy in the way she would want a little to be instead of how Madison would want a little to be.
17) “There was a tragic innocence in the way her daughter spoke, as if she truly believed this was the right thing to do, that this was how she could honor the mother she had once known” just you wait until Cindy gets her hands on the rapscallion who taught her daughter such nonsense.
Response; Man who could have done such a thing. Cindy really needs to get McKenzie on the case before Madison is corrupted.
18) “No, honey,” Interesting that Maddie hasn’t objected to being called that.
Response: Being its her mom the thought process I had was she hasn’t thought about it as her mom called her that often.
19) “I am. I am the same person. I haven’t changed.” well you have, a lot of opinions and stances have shifted, not to mention she’s starting to break.
Response: exactly. Only she has really changed as her life experience has been altered in a way that Madison and McKnezie’s hasn’t.
20) “I’ll work hard to train you, to teach you everything my mom taught me” talking about her and her mum like their different people, fucking brutal.
Response: a separation of the two identities in some way.
21) “All the fundraising, the social events, the training programs, the public speaking… all the educational videos on Little training and guardian training. It makes me feel like everything you fought for is still alive, like it’s still here. So, in a way, it’s like you’re not gone.” that was lucky timing, I was almost starting to pity her.
Response: THat was a close one then. We definitely wouldn’t want that. Glad the force was able to step in and guide you back on the right path. lol.
22.1) “The belief was that when a person became a Little, it was as though their human body died and they were reborn in the flesh of a Little. The body’s cells, the physical matter, broke down and regenerated, but imperfectly” that’s as good an explanation as any.
Response: thanks, I spent a lot of time trying to come up with a logical cultural view on how it works and how its viewed and why people think the way think and how culture and belief supports it. Where even if the person reading doesn’t agree with it tehy have an understanding of culturally this is what these people believe. Similar to that of like may a person has different belief set of the native Americans or even if a African tribe but it doesn’t mean they are wrong its just not something you may culturally belief. Another example would be the brutality of the aztecs religion.
22.2) “This was why the cure never worked … The newly formed cells weren’t compatible with the original. Over time, they broke down, leaving only the “God-given” matter behind” That makes sense, still brutal though.
Response: I agree but that’s true of many things like cancer. Most diseases are brutal like this i feel like.
22.3) “It was like a person had to mourn the loss of who they had been, accepting that what remained was both the same and irrevocably different.” i feel like a lot of disabilities would feel like that,
Response: Similar to athletes where when tehy have injuries and heal up they have to find where the new normal is at as you may never be as fast or agile as you were so you need to understand where your new limits are.
23) “Madison—her sweet, misguided daughter—was doing what she thought was right, trying to hold on to the pieces of her mother that still existed” and who provided that misguidance?
Response: It can’t be the person in mirror.
24) “Since it’s the weekend, you’re allowed to stay up past nine tonight.” I’ll bet that’s more to do with the fact that she’s been put to work.
Response: Madison seems like the type that works around what is best for her. I’m sure the polices around what she views as her little would be the same. It benefits her by having ehr little stay up so she can. When that is no longer true she probably wont allow it.
25) “I can’t control fully what McKenzie does with Dad, but you are mine, and you will follow my rules. It’s what Mom would want.” Twist that knife.
Response: Also some understanding and revealing that madison understands that she only has so much influence over Greg.
26) “It’s what Mom would want. Madison had no idea how wrong she was.” She’s not wrong though, the version of you she’s calling “her mom” in this instance would absolutely want this.
Response: Exactly, as there are two versions of Cindy to Madison. there is pre-smallara cindy and little. cindy and madison is mourning the loss of pre-smallara cindy and honoring that version of CIndy as she views that version as her true mother while little version is a lesser version of her mother.
27) “Emma’s England and she brought house Littles with her. Her personal Little is American, though. But anyway, her house Littles double as pooper scoopers. You know, because why should she have to pick up after her dogs? That’s what Littles are for” Man, Emma must have some wealth behind her to have both personal and house littles, and little trained dogs that I’m guessing won’t attack them. She sounds like an interesting character to meet later.
Out of curiosity, would she have had to get retrained as a Guardian in America or would the English one still count in The States?
Response: Emma has money and resources. Her family is quite well off. Youa re correct. Her pets are trained to not harm littles. She would have to specific issue a command for her dog to harm a little but she never would. her family has house littles for various maintenance related tasks as that’s common in England. The house littles and personal littles are viewed differently.
Generitech runs the training in England so it would carry over in both regions. In countries where Preematech does the training they would need to be retained.
28) “The thought of being a house Little, cleaning up after dogs, sent a shiver through her. But then again, was it really all that different from her own situation?” as gross ans Ciny’s current task is, I’d prefer that to dog shit.
I think i’d rather clean the sink but personal preference. There is no wrong answer.
1) “She could feel the tight collar around her neck, a constant threat” It really would be, especially since we know it can be activated remotely.
It won’t be for a while until she gets use to it, and I’m imagining even when she gets an upgrade she’ll likely be constantly paranoid it’s going to choke her.
Smallborns with collars would be interesting, how would collars adjust for growing necks?
Little collars awarding higher status is already a thing
“We also saw littles attach a status to the collar. Where those with nicer collars were viewed in higher regard than those with lesser collars” – Anna, 234.
3) “Potentially more strict but Madison did always have McKenzie as well to kind of balance her somewhat” more time with Cindy as a mother could have furthered the divide also.
“As Madison has eluded to the fact she wouldn’t raise a little who wasn’t her mother to the standards that her mother believed” that was always indicating she was going easier on her mother.
“She hasn’t actually made the connection or have an understanding fully that her mother is actually a hypocrite or at least to what level.” No clearly not
4) Very true
5) They both earned their new positions (within being littles)
6.1) That was actually a good prank. And even Cind would have agreed it was a fair job for a little
6.2) Oh sorry, I’ll just stop being curious.
7.1) I loved pressure washing as a kid
7.2) If pressure washers weren’t so fucking fun, I’d agree
8) Let’s see if there’re all that fair, I doubt they will be.
9.1 &9 .2) I expected the “my stuff is more important than you” to be a Cindy lesson, I just thought the “national treasure” comparison was all Madison.
10) I see, it’s more than just about cost.
12) She’ll have a whole cemetery in no time.
14) Maybe McKenzie could help… no wait, there’s something wrong with that plan
16) That’s so sweet in a really fucked up way.
17) but can she get to her in time?
18) It’s a really shitty discipline if they can just use nick and pet names.
21) I’m so relieved
22.1) Your effort really pays off in this amazing world you’ve created.
22.2) Agreed
22.3) It’s so rough
23) Well, that’s one suspect down.
24) Just like a mother.
25) It’s good to see her let him go like this.
26) I can see that being her reasoning
27) “She would have to specific issue a command for her dog to harm a little but she never would” why would that command exist? Under what circumstance would that command need to exist?
Interesting that house and personal littles are considered different.
So English standards are good enough for America
6.2) was meant in jes/joket but that was probably not clear. my bad. I don’t mind you being curious.
27) the thought process was a dog would naturally go after the little. So in training you would have the dog trained to only do the action to harm little on command.
Generitech is responsible for the English training. So the main guardian training sensibility and course is similar enough where retaking is not necessary.
The Eb and flow in this chapter is amazing!!
1. The realization hit her again, as harsh as it had the first time. “I’m going to live as a Little to my own daughter.” The last stage of grief is acceptance
2. The cold truth settled into her bones—change could only come from within the very system she had built. Which is why when she does get through to Madison, I believe Madison will become the ying to Cindy’s yang! Madison will have to fight for littles rights
3. I can’t control fully what McKenzie does with Dad. Thank god!!
4.It’s what Mom would want. Madison had no idea how wrong she was. I know it’s day 3 and I know it’s still early but I actually feel for Madison with the statement more than Cindy because when Madison does mature and come to the conclusion that it actually is Cindy inside the little it would really guilt her
Asuka! You’re a legend! Keep up the amazing story writing! I won’t be able to comment until Friday as I’m going on a hike! No internet!!
Hey enjoy your hike if you see this before you head out.
1) Yes she is turning the corner and starting to open herself to acceptance. While there will be some setbacks she is opening up to living this new life.
2) Possibly, but even McKenize who is more pro-little then anyone in her family I woudln’t call a little activist. That might be a step to far for Madison.
3) This chapter does show some understanding on Madison’s part that she only has so much authority over Greg.
4) Its hard to say how far she will get. As its entirely possible she believes that its Cindy reborn as a little and accepts that this is her mother now reborn as a little and person her mother was died. Which is a belief a lot of people in this world have. So its hard to say where she will fall.
I can’t help but wonder if Madison over time will see what a great relationship Kenzie is having with Greg. Maybe that will help her to change her mind about how she is treating Cindy.
Its possible as while she wanted a little she didn’t want her parents as littles so the bond she would have with her little would have been different if it was just a random little she picked out. As she wanted specifically a Japanese little.
Also how do the collars know when Cindy says Madison vs. Ms. Wesson?
They’re voice activated, they have an AI that scans for “forbidden words” as well as when they’re too loud. Madison listed her and the other humans names as “Forbidden.” Now when the collar records her saying them it activates
Lethal nailed it. No notes.
So she could say Ms. Fuckface and that would not cause the collars to tighten.
lmao part of me thinks swearing is on a dictionary of words they aren’t allowed to say, but I love the idea