Please note that this story was written as a one-shot story. While there are no planned updates to this story, the characters exist in the Smallara world, so they can appear anywhere. Tales from Little Mart is a series designed around each story being independent of the others. However, I would never rule out some stories being 2 or 3 parts but none of the stories are designed to be long content like Smallara prime or Madison’s world. But, the stories are intended to be one-and-done like this one.
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August 15th, 2024
The bright, sterile lights flooded Mark’s glass-walled habitat at Little Mart, casting sharp reflections that only amplified his sense of entrapment. He stood by the transparent wall, gazing out at the sprawling aisles below, where shoppers meandered like distant figures in a diorama. A large display of Sarandipty and her spokeslittle stood at the entryway to the aisle. Mark never thought he’d be here, on display, waiting to be chosen. Twenty-five years old, far from the life he had once envisioned when he married Heather, his high school sweetheart, fresh out of graduation. They’d rushed into things, barely adults themselves, eager to lock in a future they hadn’t truly imagined. Over time, the once-eager love between them had soured, laced with unspoken resentments and dreams of what might have been.
And then, Smallara hit.
The diagnosis in June of 2023 was swift, like a judge’s gavel sealing his fate. Heather’s face had fallen as if she’d witnessed an irreversible tragedy, her gaze avoiding his as reality set in. They both knew this would change everything, but Mark had hoped she might stand by him. Instead, she voiced fears and frustrations that he hadn’t dared to consider. She spoke of how the weight of caring for him would crush her dreams, how neither of them was ready for the unending responsibility of a guardian’s life. For the first time, Mark fully understood he was no longer her partner; he was now her burden. Their arguments became sharper, more final, until the inevitable day when Heather finalized his transfer to Generitech.
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The months that followed were a blur of bleak inevitability. Generitech, known for its compassionate approach to Littles, made sincere efforts to find a guardian for Mark. The employees treated him with kindness, understanding the emotional turmoil he was experiencing. They reached out to his friends and family, but Mark already knew the answers. His parents, aging and dealing with their own health issues, hadn’t the means or stamina to take him in, and his friends were sympathetic but distant. He was alone in this new, alien world, shuttled into a holding facility while the corporate gears turned in the background, deciding his future.
Despite the circumstances, the Generitech staff endeavored to make him feel seen and respected. They explained each step of the process with patience, ensuring he understood his options. One counselor, a gentle woman named Elise, spent hours with him, discussing not just the logistics but his feelings and fears.
“Mark,” she said softly during one session, her eyes meeting his with genuine empathy, “we’re here to support you. I know this isn’t easy, but we’ll do everything we can to find a situation that’s right for you.”
He appreciated her sincerity, even if it couldn’t change the reality of his situation.
Then came “Little Training,” a program designed to help Littles adapt to their new circumstances while preserving their dignity and individuality. Generitech prided itself on a curriculum that emphasized mutual respect and personal growth, rather than mere compliance. The instructors approached each Little as a unique individual, tailoring their guidance to suit different personalities and needs.
Mark threw himself into the training, not out of resignation but as a means to regain some control over his life. The courses covered a range of topics: from practical skills for daily living to emotional resilience and communication strategies. The trainers encouraged open dialogue, allowing the Littles to express their frustrations and hopes.
One instructor, Daniel, noticed Mark’s determination and took extra time to mentor him.
“You’re doing great, Mark,” Daniel said after a session on interpersonal communication. “Your insights during the discussions are valuable. Keep it up.”
“Thanks,” Mark replied, a faint smile tugging at his lips. “I just want to make the best of this.”
Daniel nodded. “And that’s all anyone can ask. Remember, this training isn’t about changing who you are. It’s about helping you navigate the world on your terms.”
These interactions provided a glimmer of solace, moments where Mark felt acknowledged as a person rather than a problem to be solved.
Upon completing the training with top marks, Generitech celebrated his achievement with genuine enthusiasm. They organized a small ceremony for the graduating Littles, complete with certificates and words of encouragement. Elise handed Mark his certificate, her eyes shining with pride.
“You should be proud of yourself,” she said. “You’ve come a long way.”
“Thank you,” he replied, emotion catching in his throat. “I couldn’t have done it without all of you.”
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Despite their efforts, a suitable guardian couldn’t be found. Generitech discussed the next steps with Mark, involving him in the decision-making process as much as possible. They proposed placement at Little Mart, assuring him that they would continue to support him and monitor his well-being.
“We’ll be in touch regularly,” Elise promised. “You’re not being abandoned. We want to make sure you find a home where you’ll be happy.”
Mark agreed, though apprehension gnawed at him. The idea of being displayed felt dehumanizing, but he trusted that Generitech had his best interests at heart.
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Now, standing alone in his newly arranged habitat at Little Mart, Mark observed the world outside his glass walls. The habitat was one of the higher-tier enclosures, perched on an elevated shelf that offered him a small mercy: he was spared from the tapping and slapping of excited young children who didn’t understand what it meant to be a Little.
The habitat itself was thoughtfully designed, a small apartment-like space complete with a comfortable bed, a reading nook, and a miniature kitchen stocked with his favorite pellet flavors and a few specialized little snacks. Generitech had ensured his meager personal items were transferred here, including littlle sized versions of the books he loved and a few photographs they had shrunk down for him from his old life.
Each day in the habitat was a slow, meticulous grind. The fluorescent lights overhead flickered on at exactly 8:00 AM each morning, bathing the habitat in a soft glow that simulated natural daylight. By 8:30, store associates passed through, bustling as they cleaned and prepared for the day’s rush of shoppers. Their glances at Mark were friendly, sometimes accompanied by a warm smile or a polite nod.
One associate, Kara, stood out with her genuine kindness. She had a habit of checking in on him, her eyes reflecting sincere concern.
“Good morning, Mark,” she said cheerfully one day, her auburn hair pulled back in a neat ponytail. “Did you sleep well?”
“Well enough,” he replied, sipping his coffee. A luxury he was glad he could still enjoy as a little.
“Let me know if you need anything, okay? We’re here to make you comfortable.”
“Thanks, Kara. I appreciate it.”
She gave him a thumbs-up before moving on to her next task. These small interactions became anchors for Mark, moments that grounded him amidst the uncertainty.
The first wave of shoppers typically arrived just after opening, a handful of early risers or parents with small children. Mark watched them with a mix of hope and trepidation, his eyes tracking each stranger’s movement as they approached his habitat. Some paused, their eyes lingering on the enclosure, but most were preoccupied, merely passing through Little Mart on errands. Grabbing a quick item for their own littles or a bag of pelletes. He noticed the variety packs that had fun sized chip bags filled with various pellet flavors. Including his favorite the Oreo pellets. Although they weren’t as healthy as others.
Around noon, the foot traffic picked up, bringing a crowd with more varied intentions. Teens and young adults strolled through the aisles in groups, chatting and laughing with that easy energy of youth. These were the ones who lingered the most, pressing their faces against the glass, pointing, giggling, sometimes making exaggerated expressions as if trying to provoke a reaction from the Littles inside.
At first, Mark made the mistake of hoping each group might be different, might be the ones who finally saw him. But, like clockwork, each set of faces faded away, drifting toward another habitat or growing bored after a few minutes. The disappointment settled into him gradually, dulling his optimism bit by bit until he began to expect the letdown as part of the routine.
One afternoon, a middle-aged couple lingered near his enclosure for what felt like an eternity. Mark straightened as they approached, his mind racing with cautious excitement. They appeared well-dressed and gentle, the sort of people who might view Littles with genuine kindness rather than mere novelty. The woman smiled as she pointed toward him, her eyes meeting his through the glass. Mark raised a hand in a hesitant wave, feeling an awkward thrill at the idea that someone might be seeing him as more than just another face on the shelf.
As she leaned toward her partner, whispering something he couldn’t quite catch, the man’s expression grew doubtful. He shook his head, gesturing subtly in Mark’s direction, and the woman’s smile faded into a resigned nod. She cast a last, pitying look at Mark before they turned and walked away, leaving him feeling colder than before.
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The Generitech staff continued to support him during these disheartening moments. Kara noticed his subdued demeanor after the couple left.
“Rough day?” she asked gently, pausing by his habitat during her rounds.
“You could say that,” Mark replied, trying to muster a smile but failing.
She offered a sympathetic look. “I know it’s hard, but the right person will come along. Don’t lose hope.”
He nodded, appreciating her effort even if it didn’t alleviate the heaviness in his chest.
Another employee, Sam—a senior manager with graying hair and kind eyes—made a point to check in on him regularly.
“How are you holding up, Mark?” Sam asked one evening, his tone conveying genuine concern.
“I’m managing,” Mark said, shrugging slightly.
“We’re here for you,” Sam assured him. “If you need anything, or just want to talk, let us know.”
“Thanks, Sam. That means a lot.”
These interactions reinforced that he wasn’t entirely alone, even if the loneliness persisted.
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The cycle repeated over the days, with moments of brief hope punctuated by repeated rejection. Mark found himself counting the hours, creating small rituals to break the monotony. In the mornings, he exercised in the corner with the weights provided, the mechanical rhythm of lifting and setting down soothing in its predictability. By afternoon, he’d settle in the reading nook, immersing himself in novels that transported him to distant worlds.
The nights were the worst. After closing hours, when the lights dimmed slightly, he was left alone in silence. He could hear the muffled sounds of employees cleaning and restocking, a reminder that the world outside continued without him. He lay awake in his bed, staring up at the ceiling, his mind racing with doubts and regrets. Memories of his old life flooded back, small details he hadn’t thought about in months. The way Heather used to hum while she cooked, the smell of their first apartment, the worn leather of his father’s armchair.
As the days wore on, he found himself slipping into an emotional numbness, a state where the sting of disappointment faded, replaced by a hollow resignation. He became adept at predicting the shoppers’ behaviors, noticing patterns he hadn’t paid attention to before. Families with young children often stopped to admire the habitats but rarely adopted; teens who lingered too long were usually just there for entertainment. He learned to read their faces, to discern the difference between genuine curiosity and idle amusement.
One evening, just before closing, a girl of about twenty came by alone. She had a quiet demeanor, her gaze soft and thoughtful as she paused by his habitat. The Blue streaks in her hair drew Marks attention. While his heart quickened as she tilted her head, studying him with an intensity that felt almost personal. He met her gaze, resisting the urge to look away, his hope rekindling against his better judgment.
For several minutes, she stood there, her eyes scanning his face, then his posture, as if weighing some unseen quality within him. Mark felt exposed in a way he hadn’t before, a mix of vulnerability and yearning he couldn’t suppress. He thought she might actually see him, the person behind the glass, the one clinging to fragments of a lost life.
Then, slowly, her expression softened into a faint, sad smile, and she stepped back, her hand resting briefly on the glass. Her lips moved as if she were about to say something, but no sound came, and with a final, lingering glance, she turned and walked away.
After she left, the emptiness inside him felt sharper, the silence more suffocating. He sat down on the edge of his bed, his shoulders slumping as he fought against the growing ache in his chest. He knew, logically, that his circumstances were unlikely to change, that each day in the habitat would be more of the same. But some part of him refused to let go of the hope, that stubborn flicker that insisted someone, someday, might finally see him.
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Kara noticed the change in his demeanor the next morning.
“Hey, Mark,” she said softly, pausing during her rounds. “You seem a bit down today. Want to talk about it?”
He hesitated, then sighed. “I thought… maybe yesterday… someone might have been interested.”
She nodded understandingly. “The young woman who was here last night?”
“Yeah,” he confirmed, running a hand through his hair. “But she left like all the others.”
Kara offered a sympathetic smile. “Sometimes people need time to make such an important decision. Maybe she’ll come back.”
“Maybe,” he replied, though his tone lacked conviction.
She reached into her pocket and pulled out a small, folded piece of paper. “I was going to save this for later, but I think you might need it now.”
He accepted the note, unfolding it to reveal a handwritten quote:
“Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul, and sings the tune without the words, and never stops at all.”
He looked up, meeting her eyes. “Emily Dickinson?”
Kara grinned. “Good catch. I thought it might resonate with you.”
“Thank you,” he said sincerely. “It does.”
“Hang in there, Mark. You’re not alone.”
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As days turned into weeks, Mark’s perspective shifted subtly, his emotions blurring together into a tangled mess of yearning, frustration, and resignation. He thought about his training, the lessons from Generitech about resilience, adaptability, acceptance. But no training had prepared him for the slow erosion of hope, for the way each rejection chipped away at his sense of self.
To cope, he began creating imaginary lives for the people who walked by. The teen with the blue hair who laughed with her friends, maybe she had a Little sister at home, someone who depended on her. The young father with the toddler in his arms, perhaps he had once dreamed of adopting a Little but had been discouraged by the responsibilities. Mark constructed these stories, filling the gaps with his own ideas, as if trying to build a bridge between his world and theirs.
Yet, in the quiet moments, when the stories faded and the habitat grew silent, he was left with the raw reality of his situation. No matter how many people passed by, how many paused or smiled or lingered, he remained inside the glass, an outsider looking in.
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One particularly slow afternoon, Sam approached his habitat with a thoughtful expression.
“Mark, I’ve been thinking,” he began, his tone measured. “I know this waiting period has been challenging for you.”
Mark looked up from his book, curiosity piqued. “It has,” he admitted.
“We have a program where Littles can engage in community activities outside the store, supervised, of course. It might be a good way for you to get out of here for a bit, meet new people.”
Mark considered the offer. “What kind of activities?”
“Volunteering, educational workshops, that sort of thing. We believe in supporting the Littles’ personal growth, not just waiting around.”
The idea sparked a glimmer of interest. “I’d like that,” he said.
“Great. I’ll get the paperwork started,” Sam replied with a satisfied nod. “We’ll make sure it’s something you’ll enjoy.”
True to his word, Sam arranged for Mark to participate in a local community garden project. The first outing was scheduled for the following week.
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On the day of the event, Kara helped Mark prepare, her excitement almost contagious.
“You’ll love it,” she assured him. “It’s a beautiful garden, and the people there are wonderful.”
Mark felt a mix of nervousness and anticipation. It was the first time he’d be outside the habitat since arriving at Little Mart.
When they arrived at the garden, the sight of vibrant flowers and lush greenery was a balm to his senses. He inhaled deeply, the scent of earth and blossoms filling his lungs.
A group of volunteers greeted him warmly, introducing themselves and explaining the tasks for the day. Mark spent the afternoon planting seedlings, his hands in the soil, feeling connected to something real and alive.
One of the volunteers, an older man named Grant, worked alongside him, sharing stories and laughter. They talked about everything from favorite books to philosophical musings.
“You’re quite the thinker,” Grant remarked, planting a seedling with careful precision.
“Too much time in my own head,” Mark replied with a chuckle.
“Nothing wrong with that,” Grant said. “The world needs more thoughtful souls.”
The day passed quickly, and by the time they returned to Little Mart, Mark felt a renewed sense of vitality.
“Thank you,” he told Sam and Kara. “I needed that.”
“Anytime,” Sam replied warmly. “We’ll arrange for you to go again soon.”
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The outings became a regular part of his routine, each one offering a respite from the confines of the habitat. He met new people, engaged in meaningful activities, and began to feel a semblance of normalcy returning to his life.
However, the return to the habitat after each outing was bittersweet. The contrast between the vibrant world outside and the stagnant waiting inside intensified his longing for a permanent change.
One evening, after a particularly fulfilling day at the garden, Mark sat in his reading nook, reflecting on his experiences. The glass walls seemed more transparent than ever, the boundary between him and the world both physical and metaphorical.
He picked up a notebook, a gift from Kara, and began to write, pouring his thoughts onto the pages. He wrote about his hopes, his fears, the people he’d met, and the emotions that swirled within him.
Writing became his solace, a way to process the complexities of his situation. The pages filled with musings, sketches, and fragments of poetry.
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Weeks later, during one of his outings, he crossed paths with the young woman who had visited his habitat, the one who had nearly spoken to him before walking away. Her name was Lily, and she was a regular volunteer at the community center where Mark was helping organize a charity event.
Their eyes met, recognition flickering between them.
“Hi,” she said softly, a hint of hesitation in her voice.
“Hello,” Mark replied, his heart beating a little faster.
They ended up working together, sorting donations and sharing light conversation. Lily was thoughtful and introspective, much like himself.
“I think I saw you at Little Mart,” she ventured cautiously.
“You did,” he confirmed. “I remember you.”
She looked down, a touch of color rising in her cheeks. “I wanted to talk to you then, but I wasn’t sure if it was appropriate.”
“I’m glad we’re talking now,” he said sincerely.
They spent the rest of the afternoon discussing everything from favorite authors to philosophical questions about purpose and destiny.
As the day wound down, Lily seemed to gather her courage. “I’ve been considering becoming a guardian,” she admitted. “But I wanted to make sure I was ready, to provide the kind of support and respect a Little deserves. Guardian Training doesn’t fully prepare you fully for that. But, I believe you don’t truly become a guardian until you take that last step and adopt.”
Mark felt a flutter of hope. “That’s a big decision.”
“It is,” she agreed. “But meeting you has helped me realize what I want.”
He looked at her, a mixture of emotions swirling within him. “And what’s that?”
“To offer someone companionship and understanding,” she said, her gaze steady. “Someone like you.”
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Back at Little Mart, Mark shared the encounter with Kara and Sam, unable to keep the excitement from his voice.
“That’s wonderful news,” Kara exclaimed. “She sounds like a great match.”
Sam nodded thoughtfully. “We’ll reach out to her, see if she’d like to proceed with the adoption process.”
Over the next few days, Lily visited the store multiple times. Each visit was filled with conversation and shared laughter, the connection between them growing stronger.
Finally, the day arrived when the paperwork was completed. Lily stood outside his habitat, a mix of joy and nervousness evident on her face.
“Are you ready?” she asked softly.
Mark felt a surge of emotion—hope, relief, happiness. “More than ever,” he replied.
As he stepped out of the habitat, Kara and Sam were there, their expressions warm and encouraging.
“Take care of yourself,” Kara said, giving him a hug. “You deserve this happiness.”
“Thank you, for everything,” Mark replied, his eyes misty.
Sam shook his hand firmly. “Remember, our support doesn’t end here. If you ever need anything, we’re just a call or email away. We’re in your tablet.”
“I appreciate that,” Mark said, gratitude filling his voice.
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Held gently in Lily’s hand as she walked out of Little Mart, Mark felt the weight of the past months lifting. The sunlight warmed his face, the air filled with the promise of new beginnings.
They paused outside, both taking a moment to absorb the significance of the moment.
“Thank you for giving me a chance,” Mark said, turning to her.
“Thank you for being someone worth waiting for,” she replied, her smile radiant.
As they walked towards their future, Mark glanced back at the store one last time. The glass walls that had once confined him now seemed like a distant memory, the kindness of those inside a chapter that had helped lead him here.
He knew challenges lay ahead, but for the first time in a long while, he felt truly hopeful. Surrounded by genuine care and the possibility of a fulfilling life, Mark embraced the journey before him, ready to write the next pages of his story.
A wonderful story and a happy Thanksgiving to you Asuka.
Seems like it went over well. Happy holidays to you as well.
Loved it. nothing more to say. it’s basically exactly how I thought Littlemart would be lol
Thanks, i wanted to get the type of store little mart is on the books. As we got to see preens tech store in Chrissy.
I like that it also showed some of the stuff pre-store too.
It’d be cool to see heather at somepoint in either Smallara, Good Girlfriend, or Madisons world and see if she has regrets about splitting with Mark. Even just briefly, it’d be interesting to see her interact with Mallory and just feel bad for not putting in more effort into it or something
Loved It
I’m glad you enjoyed. It was fun to write
0) I appreciate the dates listed clearly but I do have more questions regarding the timeline, starting with Character’s full names.
1) “A large display of Sarandipty and her spokeslittle stood at the entryway to the aisle” So Jordan’s considered so inconsequential that his name or streamer name isn’t with learning?
2) “For the first time, Mark fully understood he was no longer her partner; he was now her burden” I’m already sympathetic to him.
3) “One counselor, a gentle woman named Elise, spent hours with him, discussing not just the logistics but his feelings and fears.” It’s good that the littles receive counselling, we’ve seen how hard it can be for a little without it.
4.1) “Then came “Little Training,” a program designed to help Littles adapt to their new circumstances while preserving their dignity and individuality” It teaches them to serve and obey.
4.2) “Generitech prided itself on a curriculum that emphasized mutual respect and personal growth, rather than mere compliance. The instructors approached each Little as a unique individual, tailoring their guidance to suit different personalities and needs” I don’t have nearly enough trust for Genritech, but I’m sure that’s how they present their training
5) “The trainers encouraged open dialogue, allowing the Littles to express their frustrations and hopes” this feels like they’re setting up false expectations for the outside world.
6) “Elise handed Mark his certificate” so is Elise handing him a normal or little sized certificate?
7) “You’re not being abandoned. We want to make sure you find a home where you’ll be happy.” Abandonment won’t happen until after your sold.
8) “he was spared from the tapping and slapping of excited young children who didn’t understand what it meant to be a Little” that tapping would be infuriating.
9) “Generitech had ensured his meager personal items were transferred here, including littlle sized versions of the books he loved and a few photographs they had shrunk down for him from his old life” that’s actually nicer than I was expecting them to be.
10) “sipping his coffee. A luxury he was glad he could still enjoy as a little” little drinks are a good improvement, would little coffee still be caffeinated or would caffeine have different effects on littles?
11) “Including his favorite the Oreo pellets. Although they weren’t as healthy as others.” Nice, but why are they less healthy?
12) “trying to provoke a reaction from the Littles inside.” that’s typical teen behavour.
13) “The disappointment settled into him gradually, dulling his optimism bit by bit until he began to expect the letdown as part of the routine” that is the effect of this process repeating.
14) “The woman smiled as she pointed toward him, her eyes meeting his through the glass. Mark raised a hand in a hesitant wave… As she leaned toward her partner, whispering something he couldn’t quite catch, the man’s expression grew doubtful” Were they looking for a specific little Mark happened to resemble?
15) Sam and Kara sound like the kind of Employees the Gracewoods want.
16) “Mark found himself counting the hours, creating small rituals to break the monotony” that’d definitely help with boredom.
17) “he’d settle in the reading nook, immersing himself in novels that transported him to distant worlds” I wonder if he has any books for littles by littles in his collection.
18) “As the days wore on, he found himself slipping into an emotional numbness, a state where the sting of disappointment faded, replaced by a hollow resignation” been there, not fun.
19) “The Blue streaks in her hair drew Mark’s attention” Ah yes, the chick from the Image
20) “You seem a bit down today. Want to talk about it?” Kara checking in on him is so sweet.
21) “Sometimes people need time to make such an important decision. Maybe she’ll come back.” That’s a good way to rekindle hope with out making false promises.
22) “To cope, he began creating imaginary lives for the people who walked by” I do that when I’m bored too.
23) “We have a program where Littles can engage in community activities outside the store” That’d be nice for the long-term shelf stockers.
24.1) “Sam arranged for Mark to participate in a local community garden project” Littles gardening, that’s an interesting thought.
24.2) “Mark spent the afternoon planting seedlings” Interesting choice, I’d assume Grant did the most, Mark being more of a symbolic aid
25) “by the time they returned to Little Mart, Mark felt a renewed sense of vitality.” goal achieved
26) “The contrast between the vibrant world outside and the stagnant waiting inside intensified his longing for a permanent change.” that’s fair
27) “Writing became his solace, a way to process the complexities of his situation. The pages filled with musings, sketches, and fragments of poetry” He’s a very soulful little.
28) “I’m glad we’re talking now,” He gets his second chance.
29) “I’ve been considering becoming a guardian,” she admitted. “But I wanted to make sure I was ready, to provide the kind of support and respect a Little deserves. Guardian Training doesn’t fully prepare you fully for that. But, I believe you don’t truly become a guardian until you take that last step and adopt.” She sounds like she’d make a great guardian.
30) ““To offer someone companionship and understanding… Someone like you.” Hey, Mark’s someone like Mark!
31) “We’ll reach out to her, see if she’d like to proceed with the adoption process.” Littlemart can do that?
32) Lily adopting him was a good ending.
33) “Remember, our support doesn’t end here. If you ever need anything, we’re just a call or email away. We’re in your tablet.” It’s good that he has support even now that he has a Guardian, is this standard ot special because they like Mark more than others?
34) “Thank you for being someone worth waiting for,” Oh, she’s a sweetheart.
35) “Mark embraced the journey before him, ready to write the next pages of his story.” Unlike Asuka who will not be writing any more chapters of Mark’s story.
4.1) “Then came “Little Training,” a program designed to help Littles adapt to their new circumstances while preserving their dignity and individuality” It teaches them to serve and obey.
we need a episode of what little training looks like. Preema tech is probably more inhumane, but Generitech is probably legit on who to navigate life as a little, where the emphasis is being a little vs being a servant
4.2) “Generitech prided itself on a curriculum that emphasized mutual respect and personal growth, rather than mere compliance. The instructors approached each Little as a unique individual, tailoring their guidance to suit different personalities and needs” I don’t have nearly enough trust for Genritech, but I’m sure that’s how they present their training
lol Generitech to me seems to be the light in the darkness as far as the US goes. Real World corporations that have this much connection to the US govt. are abohorrently corrupt, but as far as generitech goes in this story, they seem 100% authentic and caring.
5) “The trainers encouraged open dialogue, allowing the Littles to express their frustrations and hopes” this feels like they’re setting up false expectations for the outside world.
This I think is true. I don’t thing gaurdians and people in general have been able to remove the government driven propoganda from their minds to see littles for what they are, biologically different with very, very human personalities and emotions
10) “sipping his coffee. A luxury he was glad he could still enjoy as a little” little drinks are a good improvement, would little coffee still be caffeinated or would caffeine have different effects on littles?
I was curious about this as well. I thought Littles couldn’t drink coffee. it didn’t even seem like the cafe that Sarah took Jordan to would offer little coffee
15) Sam and Kara sound like the kind of Employees the Gracewoods want.
I think that is what the gracewoods algorithm discovers
17)“he’d settle in the reading nook, immersing himself in novels that transported him to distant worlds” I wonder if he has any books for littles by littles in his collection.
in 2024, that is a very, very good question. I want to see what little culture looks like at this point
20)“You seem a bit down today. Want to talk about it?” Kara checking in on him is so sweet.
I like to think that’s common amongst little and the littlemart employees
23) “We have a program where Littles can engage in community activities outside the store” That’d be nice for the long-term shelf stockers.
agreed. plus it builds on the non-canon stories J-Vader has made. which is good. I want to include stuff like that in my own.
28) “I’m glad we’re talking now,” He gets his second chance.
I think he was trying to encourage Lily. she seemed really shy and to me probably thought it wasn’t appropriate
33) “Remember, our support doesn’t end here. If you ever need anything, we’re just a call or email away. We’re in your tablet.” It’s good that he has support even now that he has a Guardian, is this standard ot special because they like Mark more than others?
If Asuka lets it, Tonya did give her info to Roni and Joey, so it could be standard. maybe they give employee’s sections of littles to interact with and befriend, and it’s both part of the job and a real connection. I could see them wanting to be much closer but not wanting to bond and ruin that chance for a future owner
35) “Mark embraced the journey before him, ready to write the next pages of his story.” Unlike Asuka who will not be writing any more chapters of Mark’s story.
oh snap lmfao is Asuka gonna take that laying down?!
4.1) One thing that Genritech teaches is Littles are to be awake before their Guardian “ready to serve”. We also know that obedience classes are offered so I don’t think servitude is an inaccurate way to look at it.
4.2) I do agree that it’s better than the alternative, but they still profit from the exploitation of Littles more than anyone else. I trust the Gracewoods, but not Genritech as a whole.
5) I think so too, Most people on the Cindy to Chloe scale fall between Madison and Sara I fear.
10) Littles can’t drink regular coffee, and most Cafés wouldn’t stock Little Beverages, though Sara did buy Jordan a coffee.
“Can I also get a littlecino for my underbred?” – Sara 412
So, it’s not really new, I’m wondering if he can make himself one in his habitat or if a staff member makes them for all the littles,
17) I agree, though I still think it’d mostly be 95% human culture.
20) That is a nice thought.
23) I liked those Stories.
28) Plus make her not feel guilty for not talking then.
33) I think Tonya was doing that as a Paralegal not as a caregiver. I’d have thought there’d be specific employess assigned to the littles as well, though any employee can socialise with them, I agree there’d be no bonding though.
35) Lol, I made a playful Jab at a decision he made, not an attach on a loved one. But I am curious for his response.
4.1) Obedience classes are offered though because people are wearing to pay for them. So they are separate the fools from there money and use the payments to better the lives of the species they are attempting to oppress.
4.2) Is it really profiting though when the money made goes towards the training, educating, feeding, of littles along with supporting of little cities? Also used in the creation of littles tools and little products. The creation of a safe distribution system. etc. All those things that benefit littles which generitech does aren’t free and its not like they are things the government would do.
I’m not sure if exploiting is a fair charge.
5) Some things are done just for the benefit of the little out of respect of there species. Just because others may mistreat them. It doesn’t mean they shouldn’t be treated respectfully and trained and educated with the respect there species deserves and if someone else is going to mistreat them shame on them. It’s not for generitech to prepare someone for a life of abuse and mistreatment. All they can do is try to help them as the beings they are when they are with them and try to help and uplift them as they can and hope and try to put there littles in the best homes they can. Beyond that its on the person taking the little not Generitech.
10) The intent was he was able to make it for himself inside the kitchen area. There are little versions of coffee that are made for littles. It is caffinated the dosage is different.
Generitech is slowly making as many little variants of things they can as people will obviously buy them. In a world where people buy cookies and other real food along with clothes and shoes for there dogs. They would most definitely buy full on little variants of things.
17) They were his favorite books so mostly human books as those are what he was familiar with but he would also read newer little fiction.
33) Well they woudln’t be allowed to bond with them. But its both. They care about the little they sell and want them in good homes. So they do follow up and reach out. But just like anyone else they could develop a friendship with them.
35) Well the statement in the context lethal wrote it isn’t exactly true. As this line of stories is designed to be about the little mart experience and surrounding that. So in the realm of this story it is done as mark was sold.
A story specifically about Mark and Lily would be a wholly different story. It would be its own side story like good girlfriend. So while its not on the current agenda. I did leave myself an out if I so desire to write it. But I don’t have an actual story to tell with them at this time.
Sorry the full reply took longer. I needed to come out of the food coma.
1) I appreciate the dates listed clearly but I do have more questions regarding the timeline, starting with Character’s full names.
Lily Hart and Mark Adler. Elise Melonbrook, 25.
1) “A large display of Sarandipty and her spokeslittle stood at the entryway to the aisle” So Jordan’s considered so inconsequential that his name or streamer name isn’t with learning?
I wouldn’t say inconsequential he just wasn’t listed by name specifically in that paragraph.
2) “For the first time, Mark fully understood he was no longer her partner; he was now her burden” I’m already sympathetic to him.
That was the goal and hope that his situation would make the reader click with mark and he’d be a sympathetic protagonist. An AntiCindy if you will.
3) “One counselor, a gentle woman named Elise, spent hours with him, discussing not just the logistics but his feelings and fears.” It’s good that the littles receive counselling, we’ve seen how hard it can be for a little without it.
Generitech goes out of there way to help counsel the littles that are brought to them. As tehy try to do right by the little as they know the government won’t.
6) “Elise handed Mark his certificate” so is Elise handing him a normal or little sized certificate?
It would be little sized. The full-sized one is on record with Generitech, and a copy would be provided to his guardian at the time of adoption.
7) “You’re not being abandoned. We want to make sure you find a home where you’ll be happy.” Abandonment won’t happen until after your sold.
Generitech tries there best with the littles they are charged with. Obviously they aren’t perfect and littles fall through the cracks inevitably but they do try not to abandon outright if they’ve gone through the generitech system like Mark has.
8) “he was spared from the tapping and slapping of excited young children who didn’t understand what it meant to be a Little” that tapping would be infuriating.
Yes especially because the majority wouldn’t understand. You’d hope there parents or older siblings would step in to stop them. But the damage would probably be done by then as it would have already occurred at leat once.
9) “Generitech had ensured his meager personal items were transferred here, including littlle sized versions of the books he loved and a few photographs they had shrunk down for him from his old life” that’s actually nicer than I was expecting them to be.
I feel like you have low expectations for generitech. Which is fair. Although they are kind fo the antithesis to the government but they also have to work with the government so its a balance that has to be made. As they can’t go to far as they inevitably have to work with the government.
11) “Including his favorite the Oreo pellets. Although they weren’t as healthy as others.” Nice, but why are they less healthy?
THey have more sugar in them. The pellets have a variance of healthiness to them. Each pellet flavor/type has its own unique healthiness to it. As the varities exist to have purpose. Similar to how normal food has a degree of health or unhealthiness to it. Granted the pellets do keep a degree of healthiness to htem much more so then people food but there is a variance.
12) “trying to provoke a reaction from the Littles inside.” that’s typical teen behavour.
Thats kind of what I was going for. Teens being teens. Although some would also come with the intent to buy. One thing I realized after I wrote all this is a didn’t really illustrate/depict the other littles being bought and sold around him. Like it wasn’t a feeding frenzy of activities but adoption and such were happening.
13) “The disappointment settled into him gradually, dulling his optimism bit by bit until he began to expect the letdown as part of the routine” that is the effect of this process repeating.
It is, the intent was to kind of mimic the adoption process and have that expierence of waiting and being letdown. As the intent atleat at Generitech is a match goes both ways. Where PreemaTech is more a product so guardian is just selecting a little and like adopting any other kind of pet it just for hte most part happens.
Where at Generitech you see that there was a process it took several days before Lily could take him home. As there was a discussion with lily along with Payment and such.
14) “The woman smiled as she pointed toward him, her eyes meeting his through the glass. Mark raised a hand in a hesitant wave… As she leaned toward her partner, whispering something he couldn’t quite catch, the man’s expression grew doubtful” Were they looking for a specific little Mark happened to resemble?
It’s unknown to Mark and the reader. So just like Mark is kind of left to fill in the blank the thought was the reader would have to fill in the blank.
15) Sam and Kara sound like the kind of Employees the Gracewoods want.
They are. There is a thorough process you go through to be a generitech employee as they pay at higher wage. Much moreso then other places. As they hire people who are looking for a career and a willingness to advance through Generitech or its family of companies. Generitech has a relatively low turnover and normally they get flooded with applicants because they look for certain type of person above any other qualification as the belief is they can train a skill but you can’t train someone to be a good person, or have good values, or be caring. Not that people can’t change or grow, but you get the idea.
16) “Mark found himself counting the hours, creating small rituals to break the monotony” that’d definitely help with boredom.
Yes, a routine does wonders. As you can kind of plan your day around it.
18) “As the days wore on, he found himself slipping into an emotional numbness, a state where the sting of disappointment faded, replaced by a hollow resignation” been there, not fun.
I think this would almost be worst part of being a little. Moreso in alot of ways then being with a imperfect guardian.
19) “The Blue streaks in her hair drew Mark’s attention” Ah yes, the chick from the Image
Yes it is. I thought about trying to do a littlemart focused image but I decided to picture hte guardian as then it gives people a good idea of her as a person. Especially if she ever shows up elsewhere.
20) “You seem a bit down today. Want to talk about it?” Kara checking in on him is so sweet.
Kara was created as a good person. she cares about the littles tries to get to know them and isn’t afraid to make friends with them if there a connection or click.
21) “Sometimes people need time to make such an important decision. Maybe she’ll come back.” That’s a good way to rekindle hope with out making false promises.
A important skill to have. You don’t want to overpromise but you also don’t want to crush a little soul. So being able to gently put things into words would be a valuable skill.
22) “To cope, he began creating imaginary lives for the people who walked by” I do that when I’m bored too.
I think alot of people do some form of it. Be it people watching or making stories about them to pass time. It felt relateable
23) “We have a program where Littles can engage in community activities outside the store” That’d be nice for the long-term shelf stockers.
Its a program that alot of Littlemarts use as it also helps get generitech employees and companies into the community. As being part of the community is important to Generitech and its companies. This also has the benefit of helping the littles get out and connect with people as well. Guardians and non guardians.
24.1) “Sam arranged for Mark to participate in a local community garden project” Littles gardening, that’s an interesting thought.
I liked it because it was something simple, outdoors, yet something a little could do various tasks in without it being overly difficult. As seedlings are small, moving dirt would easyish but woyuld probably be mostly done by the normal people where hte little could help with getting the seedling into place amongst other things. c
24.2) “Mark spent the afternoon planting seedlings” Interesting choice, I’d assume Grant did the most, Mark being more of a symbolic aid
Well people who are pro little are the one who generally come out to the events like this. So there is more of a willingness to help integrate the little as much as possible even if its not the most efficient use. its not meant to be either. It’s meant to be community-focused and uplifting for the people and the littles.
The intent is to further show the good nature of Generitech through actual actions and not just saying they are good people trust me.
25) “by the time they returned to Little Mart, Mark felt a renewed sense of vitality.” goal achieved
Yes it was.
26) “The contrast between the vibrant world outside and the stagnant waiting inside intensified his longing for a permanent change.” that’s fair
I agree it would be for anyone. As even for Mark who was at little mart for a bit in the scheme of things it wasn’t all that long when you consider the entirety of ones life. Its like all of us where most people have a spell of badluck at some point in there life and while it sucks in the moment. When you look back on it. It was never as long a time as a person felt that it was.
27) “Writing became his solace, a way to process the complexities of his situation. The pages filled with musings, sketches, and fragments of poetry” He’s a very soulful little.
He is, I like depicting different types of littles. As i feel like it adds dimension to them. which adds a further degree of realism to them. So when they appear in other stories or even in the story they are in. It’s not just throwaway character 1 who is a vehicle to demonstrate something.
28) “I’m glad we’re talking now,” He gets his second chance.
It was awkward before. They were both a bit shy about it. He didn’t say anything and neither did she. It’s kind of a second chance for both. I wanted it to be like a sometimes fate or life finds a way.
29) “I’ve been considering becoming a guardian,” she admitted. “But I wanted to make sure I was ready, to provide the kind of support and respect a Little deserves. Guardian Training doesn’t fully prepare you fully for that. But, I believe you don’t truly become a guardian until you take that last step and adopt.” She sounds like she’d make a great guardian.
Lily is the kind of person to really think about something before she does it. Even after going through training and dedicating the time and energy to be a guardian she still had to reflect and think on it before really deciding to do it and take that step to adopt mark.
30) ““To offer someone companionship and understanding… Someone like you.” Hey, Mark’s someone like Mark!
she was definitely feeling the connection as well. Which is a big part of the generitech way. Granted some are more in store meetings but they have rooms where a prospective guardian and little can go to and talk which is abit more private and comfortable and not on the main floor.
31) “We’ll reach out to her, see if she’d like to proceed with the adoption process.” Littlemart can do that?
Yeah, Littlemart is a part of Generitech. Generitech has alot of sway which is why even though they are a bit antigovernment in there beliefs especially now with the governments stance on littles. The government still works with them. As there is a degree of need and reliance on some of the generitech backend and companies.
32) Lily adopting him was a good ending.
Yes, I thought it would be nice to show there is a goodness and happier outcomes. As sometimes people can think the stories can be a bit overly dark. So i wanted to do another story that is more lighthearted in nature for those that feel Smallara prime and Madison’s world are to heavy handed or dystopian. Granted those individuals may not see this story which is fine. It is also nice to further round out the world with stories like this, Chrissy, brothers, etc. Showing variety in guaridans, people and beliefs.
34) “Thank you for being someone worth waiting for,” Oh, she’s a sweetheart.
She is, she’s a good match for mark as they are similar in alot of ways. She’s a good person and sometimes good things happen to good people.
8) I volunteered at a museum\somewhat interactive display type of thing. I can tell you for certain, parent’s won’t do shit lmao. I saw so many kids touching exhibits where parent’s wouldn’t do anything\do it themselves, and I’d have to be the one to yell at them.
That sounds about right.
Amazing story!
1. Just one question, do guardians and little get into relationships? Is it frowned upon?
2. I know if my wife became a little I would still continue our relationship
3. I know Mallory and Gavin have a relationship and I think that’s amazing
Really loved this story
1) If a little was born human then they are allowed to be in a relationship with a human with no issue. But it’s highly discouraged if the Little is smallborn.
It should be noted that the only Little/Human relationships we know about were already together pre-infection.
I do think there’d be people (Like Cindy Wesson) who’d frown upon that kind of relationship regardless, though.
2) That seems fairly normal, Mal and Gavin still kept up their relationship after Gavin’s infection, as did Tamara’s Parents
3) They did keep up their relationship, but it’s a rather toxic relationship, not exactly something to aspire towards. lol
1. I understand as if a little and guardian started to develop feelings then I dont understand why they couldn’t have a relationship?
2. Yes as I wouldn’t abandon my wife as I love her and would want our marriage to keep going and not end
I would imagine some marriages would have the best intentions and mo e on but to watch your partner move on while your their little would be soul crushing
3. Yrs it is a bit toxic but I know she loves and cares for Gavin
Thanks.
1) Well Little/Guardian relationships are considered Taboo. However, society generally is more accepting if its a pre-existing relationship.
So a relationship with a smallborn, someone who is born as a little would be viewed similar in society terms as dating a sibling as far as how its viewed.
2) in your situation it would be acceptable but as lethal pointed out there always going to people like Cindy who would frown upon the relationship regardless. SHe would say it would be like a farmer having a relationship with his goat.
3) Gavin and Mallory are a good example of a pre-existing relationship.
I would love to see long term relationships between Littles and humans to see how the littles use their size to their advantages to do things that normal sized people cant do to satisfy and able to be close to their partner at all times. i Think with your imagination I cant wait for that day lol
for the most part its not all that common. So, any depiction would be the exception more than the rule.
However, I’m sure there will be a tale that does something along those lines at some point.
So does that mean Gavin and Mallory would have sex if they wanted to?
I mean anyone can have sex with anyone or thing if they want or desire to. However, just like in life actions have consequences sometimes good, sometimes bad. Such a choice would never be free of consequence. Just like in reality.
Given the view and status of littles in society. Most would not partake in such a thing.
Not to mention the obvious risks. If the little was killed or injured to the point of medical attention being needed for the injury. Very real questions would be asked in most countries outside of third world countries which in this world are a bit more lawless.
1. My take was more on relationships rather than actual sex, for me if mark and lily start to get close then I don’t understand why they couldnt form a relationship! And be a couple.
2.I kinda get the smallborn one but if a smallborn and guardian are the same age and develop feelings I don’t see how they couldn’t be together!
3. Look less than 60-70 years ago gay and interracial couples were frowned upon and even illegal but as society progresses and matured it’s now the norm, then I can’t see why not in the smallara universe
I agree, littles and humans can have relationships and find ways to have a sex life because humans are know for adapting.=)
You would think there would be tiny sex classes for how to handle them safely during that activity. They have other classes for other kinds of handling.
I can totally hear Mallory.
“Hey babe, I am going to take a class on how to handle you during sex.”
“Um, Mallory”
“It’s the best idea you’ve ever heard? I know babe, I am willing to do anything to bring our relationship up to the next level.”
😂😂 perfect 😂