Sara dropped the bowtie down to Jordan before grabbing the rest of his tuxedo and giving it to him. Jordan looked at the tuxedo, and despite its small size, the fabric felt rich and posh. The only suit he had ever worn was from a discount store, something cheap and ill-fitting that he had only worn because he had to. This was the furthest thing from that possible. The reality was that this tiny suit was more expensive than his entire wardrobe pre-infection of Smallara.
Everything about the tuxedo exuded quality. The fabric was smooth under his fingers, the stitching meticulous, the buttons crafted with actual detail instead of being cheaply glued on. The inside lining was silky and cool against his skin, making him feel like he was slipping into something luxurious in a way he had never experienced before. As he put it on, he couldn’t help but wonder just how much Sara had spent on this.
“I feel like I need to know what this cost,” Jordan muttered as he slid his arms into the jacket, feeling how perfectly it fit him. The sleeves were the right length, the shoulders structured just enough to make him look sharp instead of swallowed by fabric. It was tailored exactly to his proportions.
“Oh, don’t worry your wittle head about that,” Sara cooed, smiling as she adjusted her earrings in the mirror. “Let’s just say it was an investment in your adorable future.”
Jordan sighed, straightening the tiny cuffs of his sleeves. “So… a lot, then.”
Ellie, lounging nearby, smirked. “Oh, Jordy, you’re basically wearing what a normal person would spend on a custom-tailored wedding suit. And let’s be real, you wear it better than most of them would.”
Jordan groaned. “That is insane. Who spends that much on something this small?”
Stephanie leaned in, giving him a once-over. “Rich girls who treat their Littles like a little prince. You’re lucky, though. Some girls would put you in something way tackier. At least Sara has taste.”
Jordan rolled his eyes as Sara turned back toward him, tilting her head in approval. “You look absolutely precious, Jordy. Like a tiny secret agent.”
Ellie nodded in agreement. “Yeah, all you need is a little martini glass and you’re basically James Bond.”
Stephanie giggled. “More like James Short.”
Jordan groaned louder. “I hate all of you.”
Sara ignored his fashion complaints, reaching out and adjusting his bowtie, ensuring it was perfectly symmetrical. Her fingers, despite their size compared to him, were delicate and precise, gently nudging the fabric into place. “There. Now you’re perfect.”
He sighed, adjusting the collar. He had to admit, grudgingly, that it was comfortable. The fit was impeccable, and as much as he wanted to complain, it was hard not to feel at least a little cool wearing something this nice. Still, the idea of being treated like a doll was starting to wear on him.
“I don’t suppose I get to opt out of this party?”
“Not a chance,” Sara said sweetly, scooping him up carefully into her hand. “Besides, you’re going to have so much fun.”
Jordan highly doubted that, but there was no escaping it now. As Sara carefully set him onto her shoulder, where he was securely positioned against the strap of her dress, he resigned himself to the night ahead.
He looked down from his perch and took in the sight of Sara’s dress for the first time. It was stunning, an elegant deep purple gown that shimmered slightly in the light. The fabric draped perfectly, accentuating her figure in a way that made it clear this wasn’t just an expensive dress; it was custom-tailored for her. It made sense, someone like Chloe wouldn’t throw an event without expecting her guests to show up looking their absolute best.
“Okay, I get why you needed to dress up,” Jordan admitted, shifting slightly to find a more stable position on her shoulder. “But do I really need to be in a tux? It’s not like anyone’s going to be looking at me.”
“Oh, Jordy,” Ellie said with a smirk. “You clearly don’t understand how these events work. You’re going to be the conversation piece. Do you have any idea how many girls are going to want to fawn over you?”
Jordan paled. “That’s… not a selling point.”
Sara giggled. “Oh, but it is. You’re my adorable little gentleman, and I intend to show you off.”
Jordan muttered something under his breath, but there was no point in fighting it anymore.
Stephanie glanced at her phone. “Alright, ladies, we need to wrap it up. Chloe just texted, guests are already arriving.”
Sara took one last look at herself in the mirror, adjusting her hair slightly before nodding. “Alright, let’s go.”
As they made their way downstairs, Jordan held onto Sara’s dress strap tightly, preparing himself for whatever insanity awaited him at the party. One thing was certain, this was going to be a very long night.
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I HAVE RETURNED!!!! And wow this is so good to see and Jordan I feel you I hate wearing fancy ties, and what not but if it makes me look cool then fuck it lol
This party sounds like it going to be fun…..maybe I don’t know the ones I been to usually don’t interest me lol
Karaoke time and I want this to happen lol – Jordan forced to sing a song for example ( call me maybe), ( girls like you), or ( maps) and turns out he has a good voice that wows Kelli.
Dance floor – Kelli and Jordan slow dancing as Jordan get nervous while Kelli is impressed by his dance moves
At last but not least kiss in the cheek I better see or so help me god I’ll be piss ( I already got piss off by marvel and that stupid 5 hour chair stream they did yesterday)
Great job
Kelisa might be a thing at the party….😏😏😏
That would be a fun little side action but at the end I am into Kelli and Jordan lol.
That’s basically besmirching his family name. Excited to See you two duel it out
YOU BASTARD!!!!
muwahahaha
lol you might as well just walk into his house put your feet up and tell him to make you a sandwich
LOL
I like everything you said but I want to see the larger Kelli lift him up and give him a big kiss in front of everyone after the dance showing off little woman are in charge not little men and Kelli is taking what she wants in front of all the giants lol.
Welcome back. They should arrive at the party next week. So you can start seeing how things unfold.
PARTY
I stopped dealing with marvel after Disney’s messed them up. But I stopped collecting comics in college 30 years ago until I just started collecting the ripaverse indie comic company stuff. I feel your pain lol
1) Just the picture is making me jealous of Joran lol.
2) For me I have never met anyone who complains so much about being treated to well buy beautiful woman. Even my friends that had crazy but hot girlfriends never complained like that lol.
3) I like the sexy overtones because like I said before these woman are more mature then 90% of the guys I know even in my older work place and Jordan is their fashion and social focus so he will get beautiful giant woman towering over him with their nice smell with his advanced smell getting him ready for Kelli.
4) It will be interesting to see Kayla dressed up I’m guessing in one of Kelli’s dresses. She is hot like Kelli but is always trying to hide it, I would love to see a chapter of Kelli running all over Kayla making her look beautiful and both having a loving sister moment when they are done.
5) I am so excited for the party now, I am a little weirded out on Jordans lack of excitement because It was so far away from me and my friends in our 20’s but it just shows even in that universe god works in crazy ways to help people because matching Jordan with so many rich beautiful worldly woman that can educate him by giving him so many life experiences is truly great.
Sometimes I feel bad for him because it sounds like my daughter had more experiences before 6 around the world then Jordan lol.
6) Now I am super excited for the party lol. PARTY
1) There are worse lifes to live that is for certain
2) Well I think it comes form its just not how he used to living. People get used to a certain style of life so when things fall out what is considerd your norm they tend to make feelings felt. I mean Sara’s life and activities are different then what I do. I would be a better match with Kayla in that i’m more of a gamer and I don’t like going out and doign a bunch of things. I find it socially exhausting. So if i was thrust into it by someone like sara regardless of how she looks. I wouldn’t enjoy it personally.
3) Ellie, Chloe, Sara, etc. They would be to a degree semi famous. Even Hailey from the brothers is a bonafide celeb in this world. So with that does generally come a maturity as you are under more a microscrope. If they go out and act crazy it would get reported adn reflect back on their families and business entities as a whole. Sara and Hailey it could effect sponorships, advertising revenue, etc. So they have financial considerations.
4) Canonically Kayla doesn’t like dresses or dressing up. So time will tell what she is does.
5) Jordan doesn’t generally go to this kind of parties. One persons fun is another persons chore.
6) its coming soon.
2) I guess your right, I guess I never knew how lucky I was with the people around me in school until I find how other people live.
3) So that makes my point even more, Jordan is more like a kid to these girls not just from size but experience and knowledge.
4) She can still try for a day with Kellis help. I understand it is not her normal thing, but dressing up isn’t normal for most people.
5) Hopefully he is able to make it a great time with the beautiful giant woman and get to be with a amazing girl like Kelli. Since Little woman are the alpha’s of the littles, he gets to chill and let Kelli make all the moves and decisions, it is perfect for him. Living alone is hard especially with what he is dealing with. Being able to facetime Kelli anytime and sometimes being able to be physical with her will make his life so much better.
6) cant wait
1.1) “buttons crafted with actual detail instead of being cheaply glued on.” who glues buttons on”
1.2) “The inside lining was silky and cool against his skin, making him feel like he was slipping into something luxurious in a way he had never experienced before.” well, at least that doesn’t sound uncomfortable.
2.1) “Oh, Jordy, you’re basically wearing what a normal person would spend on a custom-tailored wedding suit.” that’s a damn lot for a suit to go to a high school party in,
2.2) “And let’s be real, you wear it better than most of them would.” compliments are always nice.
3) “Who spends that much on something this small?” – “Rich girls who treat their Littles like a little prince.” than why’d Sara get him one?
4.1) “you’re basically James Bond.” Stephanie giggled. “More like James Short.” Steph is realy laying it on thick lately.
4.2) “I hate all of you.” hey, he hadn’t said that in a few chapters.
5.1) “He had to admit, grudgingly, that it was comfortable” Well that’s important; I was worried he’d be stuck in a monkey suit he’d have trouble finding comfort in.
5.2) “the idea of being treated like a doll was starting to wear on him.” as it would for most littles.
6) “I don’t suppose I get to opt out of this party?” that doesn’t sound like an option he’d get, especially after Sara spent so much getting him that suit.
7) “He looked down from his perch and took in the sight of Sara’s dress for the first time. It was stunning, an elegant deep purple gown that shimmered slightly in the light. The fabric draped perfectly, accentuating her figure in a way that made it clear this wasn’t just an expensive dress; it was custom-tailored for her” I do hope we get to see their outfits in full; I’m very curious to see how fancy they all are.
8.1) “But do I really need to be in a tux? It’s not like anyone’s going to be looking at me.” I feel like Littles are attention-grabbers, even to people who’ve seen them before.
8.2) “You clearly don’t understand how these events work. You’re going to be the conversation piece. Do you have any idea how many girls are going to want to fawn over you?” my point exactly.
9) “Oh, but it is. You’re my adorable little gentleman, and I intend to show you off.” if Sara wants a gentleman she could stand to act more ladylike.
1) Adhesive is probably a better word. In cheaper made clothign they are not sewn on.
1.2) You really think sara would cheap out on something like this?
2) It is but Sara does go to alot of parties so its not a atypical expense especially when your close with the likes Ellie and Chloe. It wouldn’t be odd for Sara being at many very high end parties
2.2) Everyone likes a compliment.
3) Sara said herself she has spent alot of money on Jordan so was having some things sent to Chloe’s. Even if you have to admit Sara has financially provided Jordan with generally what he needs. Not everything immediately but she has made the effort.
4) She is getting more comfortable with Jordan. A Familiarity would lead to camaraderie
5) Sara made sure of that. That is also why in early section Sara measured him. She specifically needed his sizes for the suit.
5.2) Not even most litltles most guys. It can wear thin if you have ever gone shopping with a woman who is picking out clothes for you. Its a expierence.
6) You are correct. She also told him about it in advance. She said it was fancy dress up party. its not like she sprung this on him.
7) You should see the dresses. They are generally nicer dress models that I have. I don’t have as much formal wear as I do every day style clothing. As I don’t use fancy clothing as much so I just haven’t bought as much.
8) You have hte right of it. People are generally curious about them. I liken it to how people like to watch animals and birds. There is a certain level of fascination in it,
8.2) yup you called it.
9) She already has the parent do i say not as I do mentality down lol.
1.1) Never seen an adhesive button lol.
1.2) Expensive doesn’t aways mean comfortable.
2.1) The did mention “Chloe’s stuffy parties” before.
3) Still far from prince treatment.
4.1) Still seemed mean though.
5.1) She measured him for a dare while streaming, I thought she got his clothing size from the clothes she took off him without his consent.
5.2) True.
6) That’s true.
7) I’d like to see it, I hope we get a group shot of all the girls in the coming chapters.
8.1) It’d be hard for someone like Jordan.
9) Like all women
My comments here really pertain to your whole Smallara world that you have created. I only recently discovered this site and have been reading (enthusiastically) all of your stories set in this world. I still have a few to finish, but I have completely finished the Smallara main story line and the Madison’s World Redux. I have a few comments and questions and seems that listing them in numbered format is the common technique, so here I go:
Well I have more comments/questions, but I don’t want to be pushy, so I will wait for your response to this and hope it is well received.
Thanks for the great entertainment!
0) Thank you so much. I’m glad you enjoyed them enough to read through it all. Smallara I’ve been working on a few years now so quite a few episodes have been written.
1) I have and obviously not all countries follow america’s line of thinking. Englad actually has “house boy’ and “house girl” is what they are called where they littles work more as employees of the people in exchange for room, board, protection. They would also get some funds for expenses.
I have thought about having a country that treats the littles as more equal. In my head It was always Netherlands or Sweden. As traditionally Canada and U.S. had really close ties. So upon creation of the story I just kept US and Canada as very close.
2) The cure is presented at the start as a way in which littles can be reversed. As that is what the government presented to the people. The cure does revert the size but the issue is when infection takes place initially the cellular mass is lost and the little body undergoes a internal metaphorisis. As the little body and a traditional human body is not one to one. So when the cure regrows the person the new little body rejects the fact cells and the mass which is added back into the person is lost.
So you do have the right of it. the medication is just a stop gap. Nothing can truly stop a person who is vulnerable to Smallara from catching Smallara. And once infected they will always end up Small. No level of science exists can stop it from happening.
3) Well thought process is that this is a converging point for two species. As time goes on littles and people will further separate into distinct species with time kind of erasing the original connections we have now. Where 20th generation little hearing about something like we used to be the same size as them would seem like a fairy tale.
However the future is always ever changing. So life as it is now isn’t locked into how it would be in the future. You have places like generitech building htem little cities to live in. So you do have populations of littles living a much more tradtional life compared to Jordan.
Im not fully sure what you mean by salvation. but I assume life altering change for the good. I would say its possible. Its also possible but that anything like that would be a ways off.
4) It’s not engineered as canonically its existed on the planet for hundreds of years. Infection rates just started spreading more rapidly as humans continued to expand into places they traditionally haven’t.
Now where a conspiracy fan in you could be interested in would be in how much energy has been put into actually stopping it and was the spread of it helped by any entities for profit. As their are countries businesses who have gained by Smallara spreading.
5) I would say yes. Good Girlfriend has Mallory who is immune dating Gavin who is a little. It does happen. I wouldn’t say its common outside of situations where its pre-existing relationship.
6) Well I wouldn’t say illiterate persay but littles would be relient on the education provided to them by the system and by the guardians. Generitech provides littles with a base level education.The guarians can then pay for littles who have higher levels or specialized educations. That was kind of eluded to in Madison’s world with Brooklyn’s little kind of providing an idea of what a more developed system would be like.
However, there would be a general loss by the average little but there would be many littles specialized who would have a high level of education. Generitech has littles who can pilot machines. So there is a diversity in education.
7) Correct as the way the world works. People have been evolving to become immune for hundreds of years we are at a stage now where the people who aren’t immune is dwindling. As people who are immune are still carriers of the virus it just doesn’t do anything to them. So in the near future say 50 years or less as i don’t have an exact time it happens. There won’t be people left who are vulnerable.
Globally littles breed now, generitech does this as well in littles cities they have whole system to accommodate this. Littles because of how their bodies evolve to typically birth multiple littles unlike traditional humans who generally bith one child as the norm. So the number of litltes increases quite rapidly and they do continue to grow their population as a new species on the planet.
8) Thats more of a religious questions but the intent is that they do. As it is believed that the human body dies and the little version is actually the person reborn as a little. So people mourn the passing of the person and their human form. It is generally believed that titles have souls the debate comes in on if its the same as the human soul who was in the human form of the body who passed or if the reborn little is a new soul with the just memories of the human form.
However in time it is another debate that will lose purpose as Smallborns while have wold have souls wouldn’t have a human form the little form is their natural form. So its not as much of a debate as time progresses.
9) Canonically, the suicide rates are low amongst littles. Especially those who were born littles. As their size is just normal to them. So there are littles who have killed themselves but its a very small percentage. I have acknowledges it exists but I haven’t wrote on the topic of it in detail.
10) I use Daz studio for my renders. As the software is free but models, scenes, sets, clothing, hair, etc you have to buy sadly. But I feel it provides a good enough balance of to depict the scenes and give the reader the visualization of want while still being able to write the stories i want to write. As the writing is what i especially like to do.
Timewise it varies i have found ways to speed up the process by having basically sets if you notice. Like th school is a set, Sara’s Room, Kayla’s room, Sara’s car, etc. School uniforms and such all provide set pieces to streamline the process. As the long part is putting the scenes together but its much quicker if i spend the couple hours getting the items into Madison’s room that I want so its depicted how I want. Then I save the preset. of items. So ic an just load Madison’s room and make modifications to fit the scene.
So the amount of time can vary. Some scenes take 15 minutes to put together others can take a couple hours. The long part is rendering as that utilizes your GPU and/or CPU depending on how you chose to Render. Obviously the more spend on your CPU in allowing to more cores the faster it is. GPU’s your looking at the number of Nvidia cuda cores along with the iray technology in how long it takes to render. It can be as little as. few minutes to 8 hours or more depending on the scene and the hardware you have to render.
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Feel free to ask any questions you have. I will try answer them as best i can.
5) Ha Ha. I’m sure Mallory sees the relationship as a true romance, but I don’t think Gavin sees it that way! My impression is Gavin is making the best of the situation, knowing it could be a lot worse. I would like to see a true romance that is shared equally by both parties. ( I truly feel sorry for Gavin, but he certainly has it better than Madison’s mother 🙂 )
8) I’m not sure what you said here. Did you mean that when the Little contracts Smallara they technically die and there soul goes wherever souls go? Did you mean that Smallborns do or do not have a soul. I realize that at least in Madison’s World they state that the humans are meant to rule over all non-human life, so I would expect them to regard the Littles as soulless. If so are they right from your POV? (note: I’m not trying to get into a religious debate here, just curious as to what you have determined for this world).
10) Having not used DAZ (or similar), do you describe the expressions on the faces to the software and the stance of the figure, or do you click and drag manipulation points (if this is getting to involved, I understand, I guess I could always go look at DAZ for myself.)
5) I would say gavin is mixed. As he doesn’t like how controlling mallory is as that was his problem before. He does have feelings for but you are right it isn’t an ideally realized romance you would get out of a more traditional love story.
8) Well its subject partly to the in world characters belief. Littles do have souls. People just debate if when a person is infected if the same soul that inhibited the human body also inhibits the littles body.
As some people believe when the person is infected and shrinking occurs the human soul goes to heaven basically and a new soul is inside of the littles body.
There is debate inside of the universe as to which outcome happens. However all people believe they have souls as do all living creatures.
the belief by Cindy and people who are like minded is that humans have dominion overall. So, while all creatures have souls, humans have dominion over all other species. In basically a 1. god 2. Mankind. 3. all other life forms tiered system.
10) You have dials in which you can adjust to create expressions you can also purchase expressions where people have already gone through the effort for you. You can also by content that adds greater detailed level.
The stances you can modify in a similar manner or you can buy pose packs that come with a group of poses. I generally use a pose pack to get the character in the ballpark of what of I want then refine it to fit my needs.
I couldn’t help but notice you mentioned Sarah’s dress strap twice in the story. But in the photo she has no such straps on her dress.
I write before I render. The renders are just an artistic expression of the written text. So you will get differences like that.
As the renders are really only for the user benefit. All things being equal I would cut them out as it’s just more work for me which gets in the way of writing. However there are people who like the renders so they exist for them. But they are a depiction of what happens but there will always be differences.
However the difference will generally be immaterial differences like the strap on Sara’s dress or a color difference. Which is just from writing it out and then not having the color available as a texture set.
Which I could make but it would cut down on production. So it would be a balance of is the 5 days a week episodes more enjoyable to the readers/users or is creating a strap, or making sure the depictions are 100% 1 to 1.
I generally lean towards making the content then the 1 to 1. But I do generally try to get them as close to one another as I can.
A little inside baseball. I use to render first then write but I found it very restricting as then I was having to go in at times and insert additional renders which them kind of bogged down the process. As then I had 20 renders made and then one render was all the sudden for something 20 slides back or a series of slides were further back then what was rendered.
So i switched it to writing first and then rendering. There are also just less formal dresses modeled then I realized. I did attempt to buy one like i did Jordan’s suit but none of the ones i coudl find looked nice for how i envisioned sara’s dress being. The dress you see is more what I had in mind stylistically. Not perfect obviously as it doesn’t have straps. I thought of using a bra strap but that just looked weird for a formal affair.