Charity looked up at the underside of her desk.
What had once been a familiar piece of furniture, wood grained and scuffed from years of careless elbows, now loomed above her like the foundation of a forgotten cathedral. Support beams stretched outward in rigid lines, casting harsh, angular shadows across the coarse terrain beneath her. Dust clung to every surface, cobwebs forming delicate bridges between the metal braces. She had cleaned that desk last week. At her normal size, it had looked spotless.
Now, it looked ancient.
The wood above her was distant, impossibly high, stained a deep mahogany that swallowed the ambient light. She could see scratches from her chair wheels etched into the bottom, a network of fine scars she’d never noticed before. They were deep now, monumental, each one wide enough to lose her footing if she stepped wrong. The bolts holding the desk together were the size of her head. She didn’t even want to imagine what the actual desktop looked like from here, probably the size of a parking lot.
She knew she couldn’t stay.
Her room was quiet. Still. Lifeless. It felt more like a tomb than a refuge now. The silence wasn’t comforting, it was predatory. The air was too dry, and every breath caught in her throat like she was breathing through a straw. Her lips were cracked. Her throat ached. She hadn’t eaten since yesterday afternoon, and who knew how long it would be before anyone came into her room?
If anyone came at all.
They might think she was with a friend. Out shopping. At the gym. For all anyone knew, Charity Stevens had vanished. And at six inches tall, she very well might as well have.
She needed water. Food. Shelter.
And for that… she had to move.
With effort, she uncurled her legs from beneath her. The motion sent sparks of pain through her calves. Her muscles were stiff, not because of overuse, but underuse. Her body was still adjusting. Shrinking wasn’t just a matter of scale; it was a complete biological reset. Every tendon, every ligament, every joint had been rewritten. She was still herself, but everything felt… off. Like wearing someone else’s skin.
She placed her palms flat on the carpet and pushed up. Her arms trembled. Her knees wobbled. But she managed to stand.
The world tilted slightly before steadying.
The carpet wasn’t carpet. Not anymore.
It was a dense jungle of tangled fibers, each strand as thick as her wrist. They bent under her weight but didn’t break. She could feel them shifting beneath her bare feet, brushing against her ankles and calves with every step. It made walking feel like trudging through tall grass, resistance in every direction. She had to lift her feet higher than she was used to, forcing her to adjust her balance with each step.
This is going to take forever.
Her mind whispered the truth before she could push it down. Even simple movement would be exhausting. Distance wasn’t measured in feet anymore, but in hours. And the room she once considered her own, her sanctuary, was now a labyrinth.
She took a few more steps. Every muscle in her thighs protested. Her spine ached with the effort of standing upright.
After what felt like minutes of trudging, she looked up.
Still beneath the desk.
Still surrounded by its hulking legs, each one a thick wooden pillar rooted deep into the carpeted ground. The chair loomed nearby, but it might as well have been a mile away. Its wheels were suspended in air, the plastic base like a landing pad from a spaceship. She could see the curve of the seat high above, far beyond her reach.
She bit down on her lip.
“I need to move faster,” she whispered, her voice hoarse and cracked.
But there was no faster. There was only forward. One slow, agonizing step at a time.
The space beyond the desk was dark. Dust motes hung in the air, illuminated by slivers of sunlight breaking through the blinds. Every sound , every creak of the house, every faint groan of wood settling, felt enormous. She kept expecting something to move. For a foot to slam down from above. For the walls to shake. For Sara’s voice to echo from the doorway.
But nothing came.
Just the ticking of her clock on the nightstand above, each tick a distant hammer strike.
Just the knowledge that she was alone.
That she was a mere five to six inches tall.
And that every decision from here forward could be the one that got her stepped on… or saved.
This perspective shot is amazing, with the chair looming in the distance like that. I can’t wait to see Charity meet an immune person because that’s going to give off the sense of scale here in this world.
I also love the description of things like the room being described as a tomb and the carpet being a dense jungle.
I love this story so much.
Thanks, i really wanted to show off the scale of the world and give it a slower more methodical pace compared to Jordan which was more blockbuster move feel where it was moved along pretty quick.
Charity encountering a person has been fun to write. I just got done writing that last night but still needs to be edited.
How far ahead are you with this story?
Written i wrote episode 20 last night. Rendering wise I have to make and render all of next weeks images.
I still hope sara goes to find her and like jordan, throws herself at her feet.
At this point sara doesn’t even know anything has happened let alone search for her.
0) our first look at tiny Charity, nice.
1) “She hadn’t eaten since yesterday afternoon, and who knew how long it would be before anyone came into her room? If anyone came at all” Surely with her vulnerability being so well known, she’d have set up for someone to check on her.
2) “For all anyone knew, Charity Stevens had vanished. And at six inches tall, she very well might as well have.” Not a bad idea, if she changed her name, it’s be like she vanished, and she could try to enter the system without Sara, or any former enemy noticing.
3) “The motion sent sparks of pain through her calves. Her muscles were stiff, not because of overuse, but underuse. Her body was still adjusting. Shrinking wasn’t just a matter of scale; it was a complete biological reset. Every tendon, every ligament, every joint had been rewritten. She was still herself, but everything felt… off. Like wearing someone else’s skin” I imagine that’d be the same as any Little’s experience, but in my head canon using the cure makes that experience worse for a short time.
4) “She kept expecting something to move. For a foot to slam down from above. For the walls to shake. For Sara’s voice to echo from the doorway.” those are some fair enough fears, except for expecting Sara to show up, that’s just paranoia.
5) “Just the knowledge that she was alone. That she was a mere five to six inches tall. And that every decision from here forward could be the one that got her stepped on… or saved” Being alone does at least make her less likely to be stepped on.
0) technically second shes laying down in the carpet on the first but i had her laying down so the carpet ended up going much taller above her. So you can just barely make out some color blips amongst the white/cream carpeting if you look carefully enough.
1) Well with the way smallara is its not gauranteed she would be at home when it occurs so after a period of time people would start looking but it could be upto a few days.
2) It would be difficult as the hospital, government, generitech would need to know her social security number which would then idfentify her accurately. She could claim shes not american but then she would sitll hvae some kind of government id to identify herself. So ultimately she wouldn’t get far as she hospital, government, generitech, etc. would need her actual information such as social security number, government id, etc. It would be just as hard as it would for you to basically become someone else be able able to validate that to the government.
As things happen like the equiviilent of a death certificate for legal purposes. As property is transferred or liquidated or bequeathed. Its a process.
3) this is pretty much what every little goes through because its a loss of matter, the body is being restructured and fundamentally changed as the organs and body of a little work differently and over time evolve differntly. So it is a fairy painful process and your body is tired, and sore and you hurt allover, you lack alot of energy becuase its a full on metamoprhosis. There is a point in the series wher you get more informaiton on this and how it works.
4) Paranoia is hightened because of all the very real fears and she feels more vulnerable then she ever has before. So she is kind of seeing ghosts so to speak.
5) Also much harder to be discovered though. kind of a double edged sword on that one.
0) I legit thought that was a POV shot.
1) She could have arranged a little phone for herself to be ready.
2) I was just suggesting a name change, since apparently those are easier for littles, lol
3) looking forward to learning more.
4) Valid
5) also Valid
0) it basically turned into that. I didn’t realize when i rendered you wouldn’t really be able to see her.
1) I thought about having a tin or something by the door where she had set stuff aside but I also thought it would kind of ruin the kind of story I wanted to tell.
2) Oh, i see that now re-reading it. I was thinking you meant she was gonna try to fool the government with a false identity or something.
3) I don’t remember how many epsidoes it is but there a stretch where each episode focuses on a different part of the transformation to a little.
Asuka cmon man!!! The suspense!!
Do you know where we could all discuss this?? On a discord 😏😎🤣
lol
Planting the seed 🤣😎