Charity sat slumped at the halfway point of the stairs, legs splayed, chest rising and falling with exertion. Sweat clung to her temples in sticky beads. The carpet fibers that had clung to her clothes were now shedding in patches, leaving faint trails along the edges of each step. She looked back at the towering slope she’d descended and blinked in disbelief. From this perch, it seemed impossible she had climbed down even a single stair, let alone half the flight. She felt pride well up in her chest, a small, flickering ember of accomplishment in an otherwise crumbling life.
And then the air changed.
It was subtle at first. A faint tremble beneath her bare feet. A low pressure drop that she might have dismissed as the house settling, until it came again, this time deeper, fuller, like the house itself exhaled.
She stilled, every sense sharpening.
Another boom. But not quite a sound. More a pulse. A vibration that moved through her ribs and into her spine like distant thunder. The floor vibrated a heartbeat behind it, and the wood of the stairs groaned faintly in response.
Then, Thoom.
The noise returned, heavier now. Rhythmic. Predictable. Growing.
Charity’s breath hitched. Her heart clenched.
The sound, Thoom. Thoom. Thoom, was no longer an abstract tremor. It was footfalls. Approaching. Massive. Purposeful.
She turned, driven by some buried instinct, her head craning toward the base of the stairs. At first, there was nothing, just the still hallway, warm afternoon light spilling through the windows onto the Persian rug below. And then, movement.
A shape emerged from the light, large and fluid and terrifying in its grace. A leg. Then another. Wrapped in loose fitting cotton of sweatpants. The fabric swaying with every step. Above them, a torso swayed in rhythm, and arms dangled with casual power. A ponytail bounced with each step, snapping lightly in the air like a whip behind her. The giant figure cut across the hallway like a passing storm.
Charity’s jaw slackened.
From her vantage halfway up the stairs, the figure didn’t even appear fully human. It was too tall, too immense, too composed of motion and sound and force. Her feet, once just shoes Charity ignored by the doorway, were now the size of giant mattresses slapping against the Persian rug, each sole compressing the fabric so thoroughly that dust rose in its wake. Tiny flecks that would have once been invisible sparkled in the light before tumbling back down like glittering ash.
She squinted.
Alejandra.
It was Alejandra.
Seventeen. Maybe eighteen. The cleaning girl her father had insisted they keep on. The one with the thick accent and tired eyes. Charity had never thought much of her beyond how cheaply she worked. She had never even bothered to learn her last name.
Charity felt rooted to the spot, every muscle in her tiny frame rigid with an instinctive, ancient fear she never knew she possessed. Her heart hammered violently against her ribs, each beat reverberating through her diminutive body like a hummingbird trapped within her chest. Her breath came in shallow, rapid gasps, each inhalation tasting faintly of dust stirred from the floor around her. She watched, eyes wide and glossy, fixated helplessly on the titanic figure now beginning its ascent toward her.
From her shrunken vantage point, Alejandra seemed impossible, a being sculpted from monumental stone rather than flesh and bone. The staircase, once so mundane, had become a vast amphitheater, and Alejandra was its goddess, ascending steadily from the world below. Her every movement was slow, deliberate, graceful yet devastating in scale. Charity’s pulse quickened further as she realized the cleaner’s single step felt as if it covered more distance than Charity had painstakingly traveled in an entire afternoon.
Alejandra’s sneakers, worn, faded Converse, appeared immense and heavy, each sole wide enough to flatten a car beneath it effortlessly. The fabric at the toes was slightly frayed, threads that at her normal size would have been invisible now seemed like ropes hanging loosely off the edge of a dock. A faint sheen of dust clung to them, shimmering softly in the distant glow of sunlight filtering through hallway windows. Charity stared at the minuscule details magnified grotesquely by her perspective: tiny bits of grime stuck to the rubber edges, minute flecks of dried mud from walks outside, a stray hair trapped beneath one of the eyelets, each a testament to Alejandra’s casual, unthinking dominion over a world that now dwarfed Charity.
The sneaker lifted slowly into the air, a massive shadow drifting upward like an enormous cloud blotting out the sun. Charity’s breath caught, her entire body instinctively bracing itself, rigid and frozen as though petrified. Her eyes traced the colossal leg upward: powerful calves flexed gently beneath loose-fitting pants, denim worn and faded, stitched hems brushing rhythmically with each motion. Further upward, the curve of hips that once seemed so uninteresting now moved with ponderous fluidity, swaying slightly to counterbalance each earth-shaking step. Alejandra’s torso, distant yet enormous, shifted subtly beneath the fabric of her faded T-shirt, her chest rising and falling in calm, measured breaths that were effortless, unaware, entirely oblivious to the tiny creature’s panic mere feet above her.
The sound was deafening now, a rhythmic, pulsing heartbeat of thunderous impacts reverberating through every fiber of Charity’s body.
THOOM… THOOM… THOOM…
Each footfall compressed the plush, luxurious Persian carpet, its rich patterns warping dramatically under Alejandra’s casual weight. The rug’s fibers bent like wheat beneath a windstorm, each thread flattened and then slowly springing back up as the immense pressure passed. A tiny cloud of displaced dust and fibers danced upward with every impact, catching sunlight and sparkling briefly before gently descending back down. The stairwell around Charity vibrated sympathetically, a low-frequency hum transmitted through wood and plaster, rattling imperceptibly at first, then more violently as Alejandra grew closer.
Charity screamed again, her throat raw and aching, voice splintering into a thin, desperate rasp. “Alejandra! Look down! Please!” But her cries were swallowed instantly by the massive footsteps, drowned by the pulsing rhythm of Alejandra’s indifferent ascent. Two white earbuds, snugly nestled within the cavernous ears above, sealed Charity’s fate, blocking out the tiny, helpless sound of her voice. Alejandra moved forward unaware, her head gently bobbing in rhythm with unheard music, utterly disconnected from the desperate life-or-death struggle happening just inches beneath her.
Charity stumbled backward, legs quivering violently, nearly buckling beneath her as she retreated toward the stair behind her. Her bare feet slid slightly on the polished wood surface, wood she herself had helped choosing once, never imagining it would betray her like this. Her back struck the walls vertical rise, the edge pressing sharply between her shoulder blades, an abrupt reminder of her newfound fragility. Her breath came faster, panicked now, each gasping inhalation edged with desperation. She had nowhere left to go, no space left to retreat to. She was trapped on this landing, a tiny, helpless spectator awaiting a cataclysm she could neither halt nor escape as she was jarred forward
Alejandra’s foot rose once more, higher now, climbing the stair with effortless grace. It hovered momentarily above Charity, an enormous, shadowy canopy suspended ominously overhead. Charity stared upward, transfixed, utterly overwhelmed by the sight: worn rubber treads marred by tiny rocks and debris, a faint crescent-shaped scuff from some earlier stumble, a partially detached bit of dried chewing gum stubbornly clinging to the side of the sole. Each detail, mundane at her normal size, now loomed like a terrible, unknowable landscape, etched permanently into her memory.
Then the foot descended.
Charity’s entire body stiffened, her muscles tensing in blind terror, bracing against inevitable annihilation. The sneaker rushed toward her in slow, relentless motion, a world-ending event unfolding with cruel, deliberate patience.
BOOOOOOM!
Alejandra’s foot landed mere inches away, a colossal, seismic impact that blasted Charity off her feet, throwing her violently sideways. The force rippled through the stair, through Charity’s tiny body, resonating deep within her chest cavity. The displaced air surged outward in an explosive gust, sending Charity tumbling helplessly, her tiny form rolling across the stair’s hard surface, limbs flailing, hair whipping around her face. Dust and grit rose in a choking cloud, her eyes stinging, her lungs spasming as she fought to draw breath.
The echo of the impact reverberated around her skull, a deafening roar that gradually faded to a ringing, distant hum. Charity lay sprawled on her side, trembling violently, her limbs twitching uncontrollably as the shock slowly subsided. Her vision blurred momentarily with tears of shock and terror, eyes wide and unfocused. She gasped desperately for air, the clean scent of wood polish and floor cleaner mingling sharply with the faint acrid aroma of sneaker rubber now dangerously close.
For a moment she could do nothing but lie there, stunned, staring blankly at the vast shape beside her. She traced the immense curve of Alejandra’s shoe upward, past casual sweatpants which covered her legs stretching skyward, toward a distant, oblivious face high above. Her heartbeat was deafening in her ears, every nerve-ending raw and overwhelmed. Charity understood in that harrowing instant just how infinitesimal she had become, how completely her world had changed. The young woman standing above her, whom Charity had scarcely acknowledged in her former life, now had power beyond measure, power she wielded unknowingly, without intention or awareness.
Slowly, the foot lifted again, a ponderous and deliberate action that briefly pulled the sneaker’s sole upward into clear view before carrying it onward to the next step. Charity watched helplessly, still sprawled on the ground, as Alejandra continued her ascent, completely unaware of the tiny, trembling creature left stunned in her wake.
Each step gradually faded, the vibrations weakening until they were just distant echoes, leaving Charity alone on the staircase once more. Yet the experience lingered profoundly in her mind and body, a painful, vivid reminder of her new, terrifying reality.
She drew her knees slowly to her chest, hugging them tightly, still trembling as she sat on the cold, unforgiving surface of the stair. Her breath gradually steadied, though her body still shivered uncontrollably. Tears traced silent paths down her dusty cheeks as the profound sense of vulnerability settled over her.
This was her world now, massive, merciless, indifferent.
And she was utterly powerless within it.
Well then guess we found charity new guardian then ? And damn that scene alone was terrifying but then again who knows what will happen
If she can even afford Charity.
she can with Charity’s money. what’s hers is the guardians.
Being a little is not for the faint of heart. Im glad it came out a bit terrifying as that’s what I was going for. I wanted to kind of verbally illustrate the level of fear a little have and how it builds from something so mundane.
Holy shit that was intense, the build up to it was perfect Charity sensing Alejandra before seeing her, let’s just hope that Charity can get help before its too late. Man, this story is so good.
Im glad you are enjoying it and the build ups have been worth it. Still a ways to go in this story but I’m pretty happy with how it turned out.
I think the slower build makes this more of a payoff scene as you really got to feel her journey and the process that led to this point.
Sounds like a good person to get her money and take care of her like a good guardian parent. I cant wait to hear the new girl put charity in her place lol. charity will have to go to a center waiting for her new guardian to get trained. Looks like the new guardian will be cuter then charity when clean up and in what cloths she wants and that will hurt her pride also. or did her dad make a deal with the girl to take care of his girl and get her pre trained?
Will she be able to claim her? That’s if she notices her
There’s a high chance she won’t be able to afford her. Littles are expensive, and cleaners aren’t well known for being loaded.
she can with Charity’s money. what’s hers is the guardians.
Legally speaking while if she would claim charity as her little she wouldn’t legally have access to charity’s assets or money until she was claimed and legally processed through the system.
Sara when she claimed jordan had to pay for everything and pay for jordans debts before she could claim him or any of his assets.
So while selling of his home and such and unneeded items would net her a return longterm. Having the money upfront was a key part but often overlooked.
Sara through her streaming and endorsements and sponsor streams and such was making enough money to have things tucked away canonically along with her parents being able to offset some of the cost as well.
Lethal is right in regards to U.S. law and little ownership. The hard part for average people and below is the upfront investment. As even in situations such as these the majority of the cost in the U.S. is in the filing fees and procedures that go to the government. The actual unit cost of the little is dramatically smaller. Generitech makes more money off little accessories, clothes, furniture, habitats, pellets, etc. then they do the littles.
So depending on the maids financial situation or her families financial situation a little could be out of reach. But difficult to say with the information that has been given so far in the story.
If she was charity’s dads illegitimate kid, and her half big sister. she might have money left by their dad to own her little sister
that ship has sailed though. This whole story is already written.
ships can always be rerouted by great captains lol
I’m glad she is 18+ so you can have more real world options without you feeling creepy
0) 18 chapters before seeing another person is impressive.
1) “Another boom. But not quite a sound. More a pulse. A vibration that moved through her ribs and into her spine like distant thunder. The floor vibrated a heartbeat behind it, and the wood of the stairs groaned faintly in response.” I’m guessing this is the person I saw in the image. I like how something as simple as an approaching person is able to be such a wildly different experience for her.
2.1) “The cleaning girl her father had insisted they keep on.” Perhaps an affair partner? Or (given her age) maybe the progeny of one, Charity’s secret half-sister?
2.2) “The one with the thick accent and tired eyes” Sounds like that Latina maid several comments have suggested she be paired with.
2.3) “Seventeen. Maybe eighteen… Charity had never thought much of her beyond how cheaply she worked. She had never even bothered to learn her last name.” When I first read the numbers, I actually thought Charity had mentally numbered the help.
3) “From her shrunken vantage point, Alejandra seemed impossible, a being sculpted from monumental stone rather than flesh and bone. The staircase, once so mundane, had become a vast amphitheater, and Alejandra was its goddess, ascending steadily from the world below” it makes sense that someone that small would likewise have trouble seeing the giant humans as the same, in a similar way that giant humans look down on Littles and struggle to see them as the same.
4) “Charity’s pulse quickened further as she realized the cleaner’s single step felt as if it covered more distance than Charity had painstakingly traveled in an entire afternoon” not quite, but she could do it in less than a minute, and that’d feel just as bad.
5) “Two white earbuds, snugly nestled within the cavernous ears above, sealed Charity’s fate, blocking out the tiny, helpless sound of her voice” Aww, too bad, I guess Charity’s gonna need to wait longer.
6) “Charity stared upward, transfixed, utterly overwhelmed” That would be quite a sight to see, it’s just like her dreams only not with Sara.
7) “Each detail, mundane at her normal size, now loomed like a terrible, unknowable landscape, etched permanently into her memory.” tiny people love noticing everything.
8) “sending Charity tumbling helplessly, her tiny form rolling across the stair’s hard surface,” that could easily have gotten her killed, sent off the edge.
9) “Charity understood in that harrowing instant just how infinitesimal she had become, how completely her world had changed” That’s something only meeting a giant human can teach.
10.1) “She drew her knees slowly to her chest, hugging them tightly, still trembling as she sat on the cold, unforgiving surface of the stair.” That’s all she really can do until she processes this.
10.2) “This was her world now, massive, merciless, indifferent. And she was utterly powerless within it.” Just how she made her many victims feel
I loved the idea of a Latin maid because I’ve know many Latin woman through my years and they were very kind and loving and very maternal I learned when I was a young worker lol. She will I think well give charity the love and stable home life she needs to be a better person and maybe ask for forgiveness down the road from Sara.
I agree with 2.2 but I know people creepy enough to do 2.1. She is getting daddy’s money from her very little sister that she will be taking care of for the next 100 years lol. Time to cash that giant house in and bank the money Charity was using to do all her other stuff.
0) yeah i wanted to do something different with the charity story. So her character has a bit more to her and you really get to see the process play out and how it works.
1) You are correct. The person pictured is the person featured in the picture. I wanted to really build the tension and immerse the reader in this first contact situation. As after awhile it would become normal for her. But the first time it happens and first time you see it. Your brain still kind of wired into thinking you are a person. It would be jarring and unreal. So I wanted to capture that feeling.
2.1) not an affair or anything like that. I never even considered a secret sister angle from Charity’s father sleeping around or something. That would have been an amazing angle to work from. Would have been a bit different of a story if that was the case. But sadly that is not what happens.
Its a different reason then that.
2.2) She is Latina. It was more coincidental then anything else. I had it written that way before people started talking about it. I did think it was a bit funny people were guessing that.
2.3) damn that would have been a charity thing to do. That was a missed opportunity on my part. I gotta write these down you are spittin’ gold today.
Its so easy to get deep into the creative process you don’t think of things that seem so logical to someone else as you are so far in it as a creator.
3) that was my thought as well. As I wanted to touch on how littles can dehumanize people/biggles/tallies the same way can dehumanize littles. Its not necessarily equal as the titles are coming at it from a position of weakness similar to a minority in a racial discussion in which even if the minority is discriminating against the non-minority it doesn’t work the same way as the miniority doesn’t have the same power. So the dynamic doesn’t hold. Not that it makes it right from either side but the effectiveness of it is not equal.
4) It would as she worked so hard to get from deep in her bedroom to halfway down the stairs and any person could cover that distance in like you said a minute or less without even thinking or trying.
5) Yup, it seemed normal for a job like that to have some kind of music or something to listen to as you work. As it would be mostly independent. Especially now with just charity in the house. The interaction they would have would be minimal. So it would be mostly just cleaning to maintain.
6) it would be impressive to see something like that. I think it would be one of those you would try to imagine in your mind but nothing would do it justice till you actually saw it. Kind of like seeing an alien. you can imagine it but actually seeing one would be very different almost unsettling in some ways.
7) easier to see the little details as they aren’t so little to them anymore.
8) Very as they have those floating stairs that are getting to be popular in the fancier homes. The railing is so large it wouldn’t be helpful to her it was designed for people not littles.
9) most certainly. That on the job training.
10) It would be a lot to process that is for sure.
10.2) Ironically yes.
0) It’s certainly different.
1) To be honest, it may have worked better if we didn’t actually see Alejandra until next chapter, because I started reading this one knowing a human would show up. Charity is sill a person, so it makes sense her brain would still think she is.
2.1) That I’ll admit was a wild guess, but I’m thrilled you enjoyed it. I’m looking forward to seeing the real one.
2.2) I know, but it was an interesting coincidence.
2.3) I’m glad you liked that too. I like that I can see things you overlooked and vice versa
3) It’s dehumanising, but almost in a positive way, she’s revering Alejandra not hating her.
I know real-life minorities do something similar, but also sometimes minorities will use that as an excuse to be hateful and bigoted. I’m sure there are or will be anti-human Littles in this world at some point.
5) I put my music on when I clean, it really helps with the task.
6) Vary true, one of the few times expectation would surpass reality.
8) Exactly what I was referring to.
9) There’s nothing like it.
0) I probably wouldn’t start out every story like this but its nice to do different things.
1) If you want to know the truth I swapped the images the slide was supposed to be with episode 20 as that was my original thought but there was no correlation between the events. So I swapped them around.
3) yeah I agree I was going from roman/greek mythology thing with the writing and describing the staircase as an amphitheater and how the roman and greek gods were often depicted as larger then life.
5) So do I. it was relatable to me as when I’m cleaning I can get in my own world sometimes and just vibing along. That was what I was picturing with Alejandra.
6) 100%
8) It actually took a bit of effort to find a staircase similar to what I was writing. The one pictured isn’t quite what I had in mind, but it’s pretty close and works to give the visual the general idea of what I was going for with the floating staircase. As the Stevens liked nice things
9) yup
Asuka,
Getting close to finishing consolidating Smallara Prime, but just noticed the Episodes go from 557 to 560. I cannot find 558 or 559. Did they ever exist?
It could just be the Arrows not working, try using the search bar. (if you’re on mobile, you’ll need to put your phone in landscape for it to appear.) or they’re currently on the website’s page 9.
I posted a reply to myself and it did not post and then I posted again and now I see 2 posts pending approval (probably because I included URLs for the missing Episodes)
So at the risk of being redundant, here is the same info without the URLs 🙂
I found the missing episodes by hacking the URL. The main index does not have these chapters either, so right now new readers will miss out.
SOOOO!!!! I have it all consolidated now! You should probably get a copy from me for your records.
BTW: 337,557 words. 8,232 paragraphs (this includes the Episode titles).
not sure why those were flagged. Its an automated system that does it. Lethal has gotten flagged once before a long time ago. I went and approved the posts so they are no visible.
Hey, I found them, but I had to hack the URL to find them.
https://smallara.com/2025/04/16/smallara-episode-558/
https://smallara.com/2025/04/17/smallara-episode-559/
These URLs are not in the normal links at the end of the chapters. So new readers will not find them.
They are not in the main index either, it just jumps from 557 to 560.
SOOOO!!!! I have it all consolidated now! You should probably get a copy from me for your records.
BTW: 337,557 words. 8,232 paragraphs (this includes the Episode titles).
odd I will have to look into why those are hidden. they shoouldn’t be
Figurd it out. When you pointed out the other issue with the links not working I corrected it for the whole site so the link structure worked based on the categories for the automatic next chapter feature.
Which is working correctly I just forgot to categorize those two episodes into the Smallara category. So they were in uncategorized bank.
Thanks for letting me know so I could fix.
I replied to this already, but it did not seem to post, so here is some new info…
I found the missing episodes by hacking the URL. The main index does not have these chapters either, so right now new readers will miss out.
Here are the missing episode URLs:
https://smallara.com/2025/04/16/smallara-episode-558/
https://smallara.com/2025/04/17/smallara-episode-559/
I finished the consolidation!!!!!
337,057 words and 8,232 paragraphs (including the Episode headings).
You should get a copy of this for your own records.