Charity 59

Whispers of a Former Life: Episode 59

Alejandra could feel tiny tremors through the pads of her fingers. Her Patrona balanced carefully in her palm, a trembling, tense little bundle of silk hair and false pride, soft enough to crush if she so much as closed her fist. 

She stood at the front of Renata’s family stall, feeling the warmth radiate up from the heated countertop. A thoughtful touch her best friend’s parents had insisted on, it calmed skittish Littles, made them easier to handle during feedings. Smart, practical. Just like the Perez family had always been. 

Renata’s laughter, that bubbly sing song that had carried Alejandra through so many late shifts and heartbreaks, rang out when she finally got a proper look at Charity. 

“¡Ay, Ale! She’s tiny! Look at that face. She’s not giving you trouble, is she?” Renata teased, dark eyes sparkling under her heavy bangs as she leaned close, inspecting Alejandra’s trembling treasure with the easy confidence of a girl raised around Littles her whole life. 

Alejandra’s thumb brushed deliberately along the line of Charity’s collar, an idle caress but also a silent warning: Stay calm. Obey. She felt Charity’s tiny chest shudder under that touch. Good. 

“She’s learning.” Alejandra’s voice was steady, almost bored. She didn’t need to brag. The proof sat in her hand, soft and breakable. She let her palm tilt just slightly, just enough that Charity had to shift her balance, clutching at the base of her thumb to stay upright. That helpless flinch made Renata snort with delight. 

“Bring her closer. Ándale,” Renata murmured, half command, half coo. 

Alejandra lifted her hand to hover just above the warm counter and felt Charity’s tiny fists press into her skin, a silent plea not to drop her, not to let her go too fast. Another lesson: She needs me for everything now. She’d savor every small reminder. 

She lowered her palm until Charity’s bare feet brushed the heated countertop. The moment her little ward stood solid, Alejandra kept her hand right there at her back, a living barricade ensuring she didn’t so much as think of bolting. 

Renata rummaged in one of the clear jars near the front, delicate nails clinking glass and paper. Alejandra didn’t miss the subtle shift in her friend’s posture: all warmth for her, all patient authority for the trembling Little between them. Renata knew exactly what this was. A friend sharing her new trophy. 

“Alright, sweetheart,” Renata purred, her Spanish accent thickening on purpose, knowing how it curled around foreign ears like silk and steel at once. “Let’s have you try out some pellets, see how your tummy likes ‘em, ¿sí, mi amor? 

Alejandra watched the way Charity’s shoulders stiffened at the word tummy. So childish. So perfect. 

She bent forward slightly, breath ruffling Charity’s hair. Answer her. Obey. The collar’s ID tag caught the light, Patrona. Alejandra Jiménez, Guardian. All legal. All hers. 

“…Yes, Miss Renata,” Charity whispered. The words slithered out like poison swallowed the wrong way. Alejandra almost laughed, this girl used to bark orders at me about streaks on the baseboards. Now she begged for permission to eat. 

Renata’s grin softened only a fraction. She plucked one of her family’s homemade pellets, not the fancy Generitech ones Charity’s father would’ve insisted on, but the humble Perez blend, pressed by hand in their shop behind the market. Cheap. Reliable. Perfect for spoiled mouths that needed humbling. 

“Open up, baby girl,” Renata crooned, thumb brushing Charity’s chin. Alejandra felt a small flicker of pride at how Charity obeyed, lips trembling apart, lashes fluttering shut like a scolded puppy. She couldn’t help herself: she rubbed a small, affectionate circle between Charity’s shoulder blades. Guardian training from Mexico drilled it in early, always reward compliance. Even a king becomes a dog when he learns where the treats come from. 

The pellet vanished past pink lips. For a heartbeat, Alejandra waited for the gag, the defiant spit. She wanted it. She wanted to see the fight one more time so she could crush it lovingly. But then… the chew. The pause. The flicker of surprise behind those lowered lashes when taste flooded her tiny mouth. 

Alejandra’s grin spread slow and hungry. Ah… so it works on you too, princesa. 

Renata glanced up, mischief sparkling. “Did she try pellets before?” 

Alejandra tilted her head, dark braid swishing against her hoodie. “Once. Said it was like chalk. Spat it out. Thought it was funny.” 

Renata chuckled, fingers tapping her digital ledger as she logged the sample. “Not so funny now, huh, chiquita?” 

Charity made a soft noise, a whimper more felt than heard. Alejandra felt it in her palm, where she still rested her hand firm and possessive on Charity’s back. She pressed her thumb deeper, enough to remind her who owned this moment. 

“There we go. Good girl, Patrona,” Alejandra murmured low, Spanish rolling lazy off her tongue. She almost purred the nickname now, half mockery, half brand. 

She watched every swallow. Every tiny twitch of shame. When Renata’s screen beeped with the log entry, Alejandra tapped the counter lightly, a silent signal. Done. Lesson learned. Back to your place. 

Charity hesitated just half a breath. Then she crawled obediently back toward Alejandra’s waiting palm, her tiny collar jingling once. Beautiful. Humble. Perfect. 

Renata leaned over, pressing a sisterly kiss to Alejandra’s temple as she handed her a fresh pouch of the same pellets. “No charge. First bag’s a gift. You take care of her, ¿sí? Make her eat. Good bones, good skin, good Little.” 

Alejandra laughed softly, the sound rumbling through her chest. She tucked the bag into her new backpack, then curled her palm tighter around Charity’s middle, a gentle but unyielding cage of warm skin. 

“Trust me, amiga. I’ll take very good care of her. She’ll never forget her place again.” 

With that, she lifted her new treasure back to her shoulder, feeling the slight weight settle into the hollow near her collarbone, right where everyone could see who she belonged to. 

Patrona. A word dripping irony and victory all at once. 

And when Charity shifted, trembling, breath brushing her neck, Alejandra only smiled, her thumb brushing once more over the delicate curve of a silk soft knee. 

 

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C M
C M
13 days ago

A: Once. Said it was like chalk. Spat it out. Thought it was funny. – How’d Al know about that?

B: She’ll never forget her place again – That’s ominous af

C M
C M
Reply to  Asukafan2001
13 days ago

B: that’s true. goes back to yesterday that it probably sounds ominous because of charity’s pov but maybe it was more playful than anything. Granted, Al is still enjoying the change, but she probably will be more receptive when the novelty wears off

washsnowghost
13 days ago

it seems like charity has learned her lesson and now new episodes are just Al being a bully until hopefully charity is acquired by Sara or Kira with more stability.

Darkone
Darkone
Reply to  washsnowghost
13 days ago

I’m pretty sure Asuka has given the impression that will not happen (Sara or Kira, I mean). I just hope that at some point Sara becomes aware of her fate.

Lethal Ledgend
Reply to  Darkone
12 days ago

I personally hope Sara never finds out, let that bitch never get the closure on that chapter of her life, lord knows Sara’s victims won’t.

washsnowghost
Reply to  Lethal Ledgend
12 days ago

Everyone should have a chance at redemption. I think Sara has become a loving guardian with influence from Chole and I think closure with charity would be good for both. Giant Sara saving little charity would be great and then giving her to Kira.

Tantan
Tantan
13 days ago

Is she going to level her with her in shot time or after a mouth or something like training pets ?

C M
C M
Reply to  Asukafan2001
13 days ago

I think like is there going to be a heart to heart or a real talk instead of how Al has been handling it thus far. cause she really hasn’t talked to her too much, though that could be the culture of mexico to not really communicate with their littles.

Last edited 13 days ago by C M
C M
C M
Reply to  Asukafan2001
13 days ago

makes sense to me. i think a lot of it right now is we’re still way early in their relationship too. is the madisons world effect. it looks like a lot’s going on but it’s barely even been a full day, if it’s even been that long. We haven’t actually seen what a relationship between a little and guardian from Mexico actually looks like just yet. For all I know Al could be leaning way more into the fact of who her little is and who charity represents to her and that’s more the forefront of the situation.

For all we know, Alejandra could be a highly ranked guardian and have a genuine affinity for caring for a little, and the relationship between a guardian and little in Mexico isn’t very far removed from how it is in the united states, it’s just that they don’t have the transitional period due to the defined lines you mentioned. We probably just won’t know about that until Al has had her fun, cause initially Al didn’t seem like she had the intent to be cruel to a little or even feel a bit of sympathy for someone in the United States that suddenly became a little, it’s just because it’s Charity that she’s behaving in a way we as readers aren’t happy with. which i htink is fair for her, as i’ve never been an illegal immigrant forced to do whatever is necessary just to not be reported to authorities and sent back home or worse taken advantage of with that over my head.

Tantan
Tantan
13 days ago

Is three going season 2 of step monster novel? Is been long time since then

Asukafan2001
Admin
Reply to  Tantan
13 days ago

No step monster is its own thing. Season 2 of step monster would be after I posted all of season 1 and the season 1 Ezra episodes.
Then I would post season 2 of step monster.

C M
C M
Reply to  Asukafan2001
13 days ago

Ezra Episodes? new story drop WOOHOO!

Tantan
Tantan
Reply to  Asukafan2001
13 days ago

Then when season 1 episodes will be updated ?

Asukafan2001
Admin
Reply to  Tantan
13 days ago

Not for awhile. I have projects well into 2026.

Nodqfan
Reply to  Asukafan2001
13 days ago

Oooh a new story, can’t wait to see it in the future.

Tantan
Tantan
13 days ago

Is step monster connected to smallara world too ?

And what is Ezra ?

Lethal Ledgend
12 days ago

0) I see Renata has studied at the Sara Reeves School of Disappearing Eyebrows.

1.1) “The heated countertop. A thoughtful touch her best friend’s parents had insisted on, it calmed skittish Littles, made them easier to handle during feedings. Smart, practical” It is a good detail.

2) “Alejandra’s thumb brushed deliberately along the line of Charity’s collar, an idle caress but also a silent warning: Stay calm. Obey. She felt Charity’s tiny chest shudder under that touch. Good” non-verbal intimidation seems to be a favourite of Ale’s favourite methods

3) “That helpless flinch made Renata snort with delight.” Renata’s enjoyment of fear is a red flag

4) “Another lesson: She needs me for everything now. She’d savour every small reminder.” good

5) “a living barricade ensuring she didn’t so much as think of bolting.” Bolting where?

6) “Alejandra didn’t miss the subtle shift in her friend’s posture: all warmth for her, all patient authority for the trembling Little between them. Renata knew exactly what this was. A friend sharing her new trophy.” They know each other so well.

7) “Alejandra watched the way Charity’s shoulders stiffened at the word tummy. So childish. So perfect” Infantilising Littles is another common form of dominance. I like the consistency.

8.1) “Open up, baby girl,” cute
8.2) “Guardian training from Mexico drilled it in early, always reward compliance. Even a king becomes a dog when he learns where the treats come from” Mexico seems cruel, but they sure know what they’re doing.

9) “Did she try pellets before?” “Once. Said it was like chalk. Spat it out. Thought it was funny.” “Not so funny now, huh, chiquita?” Gotta love it when Karma comes knocking

10) “Charity hesitated just half a breath. Then she crawled obediently back toward Alejandra’s waiting palm, her tiny collar jingling once. Beautiful. Humble. Perfect” Charity is breaking very quickly.

11) “No charge. First bag’s a gift. You take care of her, ¿sí? Make her eat. Good bones, good skin, good Little.” Renata’s a good friend.

12) “Trust me, amiga. I’ll take very good care of her. She’ll never forget her place again.” Oooh, ominous I love it.

(Sorry I’m late, I just really needed teh extra time in bed)

Last edited 12 days ago by Lethal Ledgend
washsnowghost
Reply to  Lethal Ledgend
12 days ago

Infantilizing Littles is a good way of bonding a little to a guardian because a guardian is a littles parent and everything else because they need their guardian for love, protection and food and shelter.