Evan's world 18

Evan’s World: Episode 18 – A Madison’s World Side Story

A couple days had passed when Evan, Madison and Brooklyn walked into Evan’s room slinging their bags onto the floor before plopping down themselves to relax. Charity turned her head hearing just the end of a conversation that had started before they entered.  

“Do you know what would be cool, guys?” Madison said, tucking her legs underneath her as she leaned against Evan’s headboard, her phone abandoned beside her. “If the three of us moved in together after high school, like a big city apartment or a loft downtown, and we built our own little community. Just us… and our Littles.” 

Evan and Brooklyn both lit up like a pair of sparklers. 

“Omg,” Brooklyn grinned, “like a self-contained unit but with a built-in helper system? Like, each Little has a job?” 

“Exactly,” Madison said, straightening up, animated now. “We train them with different responsibilities. One handles laundry and clothing maintenance. One takes care of morning prep, coffee, breakfast, making sure our bags are packed. Another runs errands in the apartment. We rotate based on strengths.” 

Evan nodded eagerly. “It’s like a functioning household but optimized. They’re not just pets, they’re part of our ecosystem.” 

“And we’d have a Little leader,” Madison added, her voice sharp with certainty. “One of them could be trained to oversee the others. Enforce the rules. Make sure our standards are kept up when we’re not around.” 

Brooklyn laughed. “A Little manager? I kind of love it. She could be like the RA of our apartment.” 

“Exactly,” Madison beamed. “She keeps the others in line. We’d give her a tiny clipboard or something.” 

Evan giggled. “With a pen leash. Like she gets demerits if she loses it.” 

Charity, still in her lap, felt the words land like stones. Their apartment. Their future. Their empire. Built atop the backs of Littles they’d trained and broken like prize ponies. It wasn’t even theoretical, they meant it. She could see it in the glow on Evan’s cheeks, the hunger in Madison’s eyes. This wasn’t a daydream. It was a blueprint. 

And they were already drafting roles. 

Already imagining her there. 

Charity clutched the hem of Evan’s jeans where she sat. She remembered her parents’ penthouse, marble and glass, brushed gold fixtures, the quiet buzz of the climate system. Back then, she would laugh at the thought of managing a task list. She didn’t even pack her own bags for trips. Now these girls were building a future where people like her folded socks, scrubbed floors, and enforced obedience among their kind. 

And the worst part? 

She could see it working. 

“Imagine the consistency,” Madison continued. “We’d have, like, rules about how they sit and stuff. So they always look neat. Vocal response training. Rotating uniform themes. Littles who look sharp. Functional. Dignified.” 

“Dignified,” Charity nearly choked. Dignified, as if anything about this life could be dignified. 

Brooklyn tilted her head, her phone now aimed lazily at Charity, who was curled neatly into Evan’s lap. “We could make it look really aesthetic, too. Like, good lighting. Reels. a flow channel, maybe?” 

“We’d go viral,” Madison said confidently. “My mom always says the future belongs to people who can package structure as beauty.” 

Evan nodded slowly, stroking Charity’s hair. “And this one… she’s gonna be our template.” 

Charity didn’t move. Didn’t flinch. She stared at the thread on Evan’s jeans, focusing on one tiny fray like it was a prayer bead. Her pulse thudded dully in her ears. 

“I can already see the training modules,” Madison added. “Like, three main rules: Obey, stick to the schedule, and keep each other in check. The leader keeps the other Littles accountable, but ultimately, we decide rules.” 

“We’d have a little law book,” Brooklyn offered, laughing. “Like a real one. With clauses.” 

“We’d write it ourselves,” Evan said proudly. “It would be so much better than the ones online. Most of those are just punishment cycles. We’d build one around performance and rewards.” 

“And culture,” Madison said. “Songs. Chants. Little mascots. A morning pledge.” 

Charity’s skin crawled. 

She wasn’t just a Little. She was the test case. The prototype. The future lit up before these girls like a social media campaign: sleek, modern, controlled. A world built for them, by them, down to the smallest gesture. 

Her. 

Charity Stevens. 

Who used to have her own suite and a staff. 

Now being discussed like inventory. Like blueprint. 

Like property. 

She wondered if this was how Alejandra used to feel, moving silently past her in the hall, dusting picture frames of a girl who never looked twice at her. Back then, Charity had thought herself generous for smiling. For not being too demanding. But now… now she understood what it meant to be a fixture in someone else’s home. Not because you wanted to be, but because you were placed there. Because it made their life easier. 

Now it would be her placing dishes on a table in a high-rise kitchen while Madison unboxed a delivery. It would be her leading a team of Littles through cleaning protocols while Brooklyn filmed a “day in the life” short. 

It would be her upholding the laws of their apartment. 

Or being punished by them. 

Evan gently tapped her head. 

“Hey,” she whispered, almost tender. “You’d make a great Little Leader. You’re smart. You learn quick. You could help the others stay in line, make us proud.” 

Charity didn’t speak. Didn’t flinch. She stayed curled in Evan’s lap like a doll left on a cushion, silent, pliable, present. 

But inside, her thoughts screamed. 

A Little Leader. 

That’s what Evan had said. With a grin, with affection, like it was a gift. A compliment. 

Charity’s throat felt tight. 

She could see it, that was the worst part. 

She could see herself pacing in front of other Littles, reciting the daily pledges, checking chore lists, administering the soft reprimands Brooklyn and Madison would find so adorable. 

She could see herself praising another Little for good posture. 
Helping Evan draft their little house laws. 
Smiling when Evan said, “That’s my girl.” 

And worse,  

God help me, she thought, I could do it. 

And they’d love me for it. 

Her pulse beat faster. Shame pooled somewhere behind her ribs. Not just because she had imagined it. But because a small, rotted part of her had felt relief in the imagining. 

Because leadership, any leadership, felt like survival. 

She wouldn’t be free. 

But maybe she wouldn’t be last. 

She pressed her forehead against the fabric of Evan’s jeans and closed her eyes, willing the thought away. 

But it lingered. 

The vision of herself with a clipboard and a collar. A badge and a leash. 

Leading others… into the same cage she hadn’t escaped. 

And smiling while she did it. 

 

 

 

 

 

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Nodqfan
2 months ago

Charity as the Little Leader would be an interesting concept. It’d give her a purpose outside of chores and earn her more praise from Evan..

washsnowghost
Reply to  Nodqfan
2 months ago

I wounder how that would fit in with her bond sugar level job.

Lethal Ledgend
Reply to  Nodqfan
2 months ago

I think she’ll get it, power will go to her head, then it get’s taken off her and given to Trina

J - Vader
J - Vader
2 months ago

Wow this girls really want to make a prison for Littles than a home with these words damn but who knows could change in time from sounding like a little nightmare to more of a grey area home where it strict and shit but something special for all involved in this

washsnowghost
Reply to  J - Vader
2 months ago

I think Greg and Cindy’s shrinking will change these plans

Dlege
Dlege
2 months ago

“We’d go viral,” Madison said confidently. “My mom always says the future belongs to people who can package structure as beauty.”—-
Yes maybe then what happens when your hero Sara says that what you guys are doing is cruel….

J - Vader
J - Vader
Reply to  Dlege
2 months ago

Hmmmmm hard to say since Cindy’s method is so deep into their understanding of what a little and guardian relationship should be maybe they find a mix bag of both sides

washsnowghost
Reply to  Dlege
2 months ago

I hope Sara would do that

Lethal Ledgend
Reply to  Dlege
2 months ago

Sara wouldn’t, though; she’d maybe find it a bit much, but she’d likely praise their creativity and innovation. She loves the idea of Littles working and assigning them chores; she’d probably give them tips if she found out.

washsnowghost
2 months ago

A) All the chores talked about seemed to much for littles to do. Even a army of them.
B) The lack of love and companionship in their words is sad and a little bit of a bummer, if they are going to make a little village, does that mean they are going to let them have baby’s?
C) it sounds like Madison would be taking Cindy with her and that would be interesting because Greg would be with Macizie. I know they haven’t shrunk yet lol.
D) I am guessing things will change after Greg and Cindy shrink.

Darkone
Darkone
Reply to  washsnowghost
2 months ago

A) That was my thought too. They could never do laundry, at least not in a reasonable amount of time. They couldn’t even lift a pair of pants or a shirt!

Scrubbing floors? If you don’t mind it taking weeks to complete then OK.

The “Bigs” are going to have keep making their beds and do laundry. Shoe cleaning and toilet cleaning are still on the agenda as we have already seen in previous stories.

C) In Madison’s World they changed the plan to moving into Madison’s house and McKenzie would have the master bedroom and be in charge. So Cindy and Greg would still be together.

washsnowghost
Reply to  Darkone
2 months ago

IF I remember right legally, if the girls split. Greg goes with kenz and Cindy goes with Madison.

Darkone
Darkone
Reply to  washsnowghost
2 months ago

Yes, if they split, but the story has them getting along for now.

washsnowghost
Reply to  Darkone
2 months ago

I just thought that if Madison moved out with her friends that they would no longer be living together and Cindy would be Madison’s little. good for Cindy to be around her students as a little lol.
We are thinking the same way on most of the chapter lol.

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Darkone
Darkone
Reply to  Asukafan2001
2 months ago

A) I figured that was what you were going for (probably should have said so in my earlier comment).

Yeah, kids that age think big and not always realistically.

Eventually, if they are successful with their “community”, I could see them becoming social influencers promoting their vision of Little guardianship.

BTW, you probably already realize this, but maybe others have not picked up on it, but my personal viewpoint is that Littles are still people, so my comments will always have that “bent” to them.

washsnowghost
Reply to  Darkone
2 months ago

I am with you bud. I believe littles are ironically a more advanced humanoid life form that is better for the earths health and if left alone will overtake the humanoid presence on earth because humans are slowly being phased out from poising themselves and small amounts of humans becoming littles every year. The littles have the ability to survive without humans if they are able to create their own living spaces and tools to survive.

washsnowghost
2 months ago

At least Charity was able to curl up in a warm place on Evans leg and is able to just listen and stay out of their sight.

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washsnowghost
2 months ago

it is interesting that there is less little woman then men but all the girls have woman littles

washsnowghost
Reply to  Asukafan2001
2 months ago

so does that mean males are a lot cheaper because there are more of them and smaller and weaker then females? Are the Fees & taxes for males less then females because they much cheaper and the goverment need to give humans a reason to buy the males because they don’t want a glut of male littles they have to take care of & not making them money.

Lethal Ledgend
2 months ago

1) “A couple days had passed when Evan, Madison and Brooklyn walked into Evan’s room slinging their bags onto the floor before plopping down themselves to relax” This story really feels like a montage

2) “If the three of us moved in together after high school, like a big city apartment or a loft downtown, and we built our own little community. Just us… and our Littles.” seeds getting sown

3) “We train them with different responsibilities. One handles laundry and clothing maintenance. One takes care of morning prep, coffee, breakfast, making sure our bags are packed. Another runs errands in the apartment. We rotate based on strengths.” I’m curious how Littles could do some of those jobs.

4) “It’s like a functioning household but optimised. They’re not just pets, they’re part of our ecosystem.” Slaves, the word you’re looking for is slaves

5) “A Little manager? I kind of love it. She could be like the RA of our apartment.” “Exactly, She keeps the others in line. We’d give her a tiny clipboard or something.” It seems like the role Charity would want, but I think Trina will get it, lol

5) “Their apartment. Their future. Their empire. Built atop the backs of Littles they’d trained and broken like prize ponies” Many empires were built on the backs of slaves.

6) “Back then, she would laugh at the thought of managing a task list. She didn’t even pack her own bags for trips. Now these girls were building a future where people like her folded socks, scrubbed floors, and enforced obedience among their kind” so it’s basically how charity used to live, but now she’s at the bottom, and with fewer rights than the people previously below her.

7) “We’d have, like, rules about how they sit and stuff. So they always look neat. Vocal response training. Rotating uniform themes. Littles who look sharp. Functional. Dignified.” We’ve seen some of this in Madison’s world; it’s getting dark

8) “Dignified, as if anything about this life could be dignified.” It could, just not the way they’re describing.

9)  “My mom always says the future belongs to people who can package structure as beauty.” well she’d know, it’s part of her job, both now and in the future.

10) “And this one… she’s gonna be our template.” suck it Trina, lol

11) “Like, three main rules: Obey, stick to the schedule, and keep each other in check. The leader keeps the other Littles accountable, but ultimately, we decide rules.” at this point it’s still slavery

12.1) “We’d have a little law book, Like a real one. With clauses.” “We’d write it ourselves,” and give no input to the Littles like many corrupt governments before you
12.2) “It would be so much better than the ones online. Most of those are just punishment cycles. We’d build one around performance and rewards.” Somehow I think yours would still heavily involve punishment.

13) “And culture Songs. Chants. Little mascots. A morning pledge.” Culture? Or Cult-ure

14.1) “She wondered if this was how Alejandra used to feel, moving silently past her in the hall, dusting picture frames of a girl who never looked twice at her” yeah, probably, except not as bad because Alejandra know y’all were vulnerable, so she knew freedom was inevitable (and could quit anytime she wanted)
14.2) “Back then, Charity had thought herself generous for smiling. For not being too demanding.” and make no mistake, Evan, Madison and Brooklyn think the same, Krisi, Emma, Ava and even McKenzie will as well.

15) ““You’d make a great Little Leader. You’re smart. You learn quick. You could help the others stay in line, make us proud.” She’s also bossy and used to having authority; even if you gave her this power, it’d go to her head, and she’d likely need it taken from her and given to Trina (who we know has it in the future).

16) “She could see it, that was the worst part. She could see herself pacing in front of other Littles, reciting the daily pledges, checking chore lists, administering the soft reprimands Brooklyn and Madison would find so adorable. She could see herself praising another Little for good posture.” very much sounds like her
16.2) “Helping Evan draft their little house laws.” That part I highly doubt she’d have any role in

17) “And worse, God help me, she thought, I could do it. And they’d love me for it.” and hse has done it.

18) “Not just because she had imagined it. But because a small, rotted part of her had felt relief in the imagining. Because leadership, any leadership, felt like survival. She wouldn’t be free. But maybe she wouldn’t be last” People with no power often cling to any small amount they can acquire; they are the fastest to get corrupted by it.

washsnowghost
Reply to  Lethal Ledgend
2 months ago

3) I was thinking the same thing. they sound like slave owners not pet owners.

5) based on history the word they are looking for is House slave

5) History repeats itself.

6) what comes around goes around for charity but worse.

7) just being a good little slave is not enough.

8) from the mouth of babes evil is coming out. seems like parenting.

9) Cindy will be living it soon and hopefully Madison can train her different

10) Trina didn’t seem nice so go Charity lol.

11) They are being good giant slave owners.

12)From slave owners to tyrants. That was fast lol.

12) Tyrants cant get away from punishment.

13) sounding like a place in Europe in WW2.

14) being a human and little is totally different.

14) giants looking at littles as less then even if they don’t mean to is normal.

15) Trian and Charity are the battle of girl bosses lol.

16) its sad being a 12 year old’s bootlicker lol

16) littles don’t make laws, their brains are to small. That is what Cindy said lol.

17) she knows but still wants a giant to pet her lol.

18) she would be like a hall monitor in school and the other littles would talk behind her back.

Lethal Ledgend
Reply to  washsnowghost
2 months ago

3) I’ve been saying it since the Body-Hottie days

5) That’s two words

5) Again?

6) exactly

7) I think this extra stuff is part of being good slaves

8) Damnit, Cindy

10) Right, because Charity seemed so much nicer/s

11) Nah

12.1) It’s not a great distance
12.2) Never

13) Not quite, this is dominance, not genocide, but I like the enthusiasm

14.1) Yep, they are
14.2) Very normalised.

15) not Girlboss, more like Girlmiddle-management.

16.1) Better licking the human’s boot directly than licking a fellow Little’s boot. (best is not licking either)
16.2) Cindy fucks it up again

17) I meant when she was human

18) Absolutely.

Darkone
Darkone
Reply to  washsnowghost
2 months ago

18) I’m thinking to the extreme. It makes me think of the holocaust camps where the Nazis had designated prisoners as enforcers. It’s like Lethal said, some people will latch on to any amount of power.

washsnowghost
Reply to  Darkone
2 months ago

It is sad a group of young girls couldn’t come up with a fun loving community for basically doll people. The concepts they are talking about is beyond the sex stage of their development. Scary how fast they are growing up around the city.

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Lethal Ledgend
Reply to  Asukafan2001
2 months ago

1) Yeah the time skips betwixt each chapter do that well

2) It was showcased well

3) Fair enough

4) Claiming that enslaved groups “aren’t really people” dates back to the dawn of slavery, it’s no new for this universe, even in the world Dani compares size discrimination to skin colour discrimination.

5) True, though some had more of a reliance on slavery than others

6) Truly a cutting remark

7) valid

8) agreed

10) you mean Charity?

11) yep

12.1) maybe, but seems unlikely
12.2) That is not how that works, but if you wanna play that game; the humans decide if it’s a punishment cycle or not. As the more unfair the humans make it, the more rebellious the little would become, and there the more punishment would be “justified”.

13) We have a national anthem we sing at special occasions. And mascots are usually connected to brands not the government

14) Exactly

15) her past, and her present thoughts

18) It’d be like relapsing on a drug addiction recovery.