Thursday showed up pretending nothing had happened.
The sky was blue, the air was cold, and Roosevelt Middle looked exactly the same as it had every other morning that week. Kids clogged the front steps, yelling about tests and shards and which lunch line was faster. A Little-safe ramp gleamed next to the stairs in the patchy sunlight.
None of it matched the way Dayton’s stomach felt, which was somewhere between “quiz day” and “emergency drill.”
She shoved her locker open harder than she meant to. The door banged off the one next to it.
Nicole jumped a little. She was already there, leaning inside her own locker, braid half done, earbuds wrapped around her phone like a nest. Hayden hovered nearby, scrolling, backpack half unzipped as usual. Hannah arrived a second later with a thermos of tea and that permanent “did I forget something” look.
“Someone’s in a mood,” Nicole said, but her voice was thin around the edges.
“Door was stuck,” Dayton muttered.
“It wasn’t,” Hannah said gently.
Dayton ignored that.
She swapped out one of her class books for her English binder. Her Guardian certification card sat still taped to the inside wall. It felt louder today. Like it was shouting.
“Okay,” Nicole said. “What are the vibes for English. Scale of one to ten, how cancelled do we think I am after yesterday.”
“You are not cancelled,” Hannah said immediately. “No one is cancelling you.”
“Some people definitely want to,” Nicole said. “I heard Marcus in the hallway doing that ‘wow, must be nice to own your sister’ joke after everything Rhys said.”
“Marcus is an idiot,” Hayden said. “He thought Finland was a city.”
“That is not making me feel better,” Nicole said.
Dayton shut her locker, the metal thunk carrying more force than she meant. “If he bothers you again, tell me,” she said. “I’ll handle it.”
Nicole eyed her. “You already tried handling something yesterday and almost went nuclear with our English teacher.”
“Yeah,” Hayden added. “Not saying it wasn’t iconic. Just… maybe scale of one to ten, that was like a twelve.”
Hannah worried at the sleeve of her cardigan. “Did you talk to him after?” she asked Dayton. “Like… alone?”
Dayton’s jaw tensed. “Yeah.”
“You did?” Nicole’s eyes went wide. “You didn’t say that.”
“You looked like you were going to puke at the bus stop,” Hayden said. “We figured maybe save the ‘I went to confront him’ info dump for today.”
“Hayden was in the hall.” Dayton said explaining to Nicole she didnt know Hayden was there.
“Obviously,” Hayden said. “I’m not letting you walk into a boss fight solo.”
Nicole put a hand to her chest. “Wow. Betrayed. My own best friend got into a secret argument with our tiny teacher and didn’t live text me.”
“It wasn’t a live text situation,” Dayton said. “It was a ‘try not to scream at our Little English teacher’ situation.”
“Did he apologize?” Hannah asked.
Dayton hesitated. “Not really.”
“Did you yell?” Nicole’s eyes were shining now, half nervous, half morbidly curious. “Please tell me you yelled.”
“No,” Dayton said. “I used my training voice.”
Hayden grinned. “She went full Guardian. It was actually terrifying.”
“She told him Kinsley is family and that he’s never allowed to use her as a class example again,” Hayden added. “And that if he keeps messing with you, she’s filing to the Smallara Enforcement Agency directly.”
Nicole’s mouth fell open. “You.. you actually said that?”
“Yes,” Dayton said. “Because I meant it.”
“Dude,” Nicole whispered. “You threatened to claim our English teacher.”
“I didn’t threaten,” Dayton said. “I explained the consequences.”
“Those are the same thing,” Hayden said.
“They’re really not,” Dayton said. “Guardians don’t do threats. We set boundaries.”
“Sure,” Nicole said faintly. “You set a boundary with a leash on the other side.”
The second bell beeped down the hall. The hallway traffic shifted, students peeling off toward their classes.
Hannah twisted the lid on her thermos shut. “Do you think he’ll… like… change anything today?” she asked. “Because of what you said?”
Dayton closed her locker. “We’ll see,” she said.
She didn’t say what she was actually thinking.
If he doesn’t, then I was right about everything.
They walked toward Room 305 together, but it felt different from other mornings. Usually, there was some joke floating between them, some conspiracy about what was in the cafeteria mystery meat. Today the space between them was heavier. Filled with yesterday’s words, with the look on Nicole’s face when Rhys had said “gatekeeper,” with the tiny crack in his voice when he’d said, I did not reduce her.
Dayton kept replaying his last line in the empty classroom.
Whatever happens, you’re not the villain in this story.
She wasn’t sure if he believed that. She wasn’t sure if she did.
The closer they got to his door, the more her nerve endings lit up. Her Guardian training brain was in overdrive, scanning: noise level, number of bodies in the hall, any Littles on the floor. It was automatic now. Built in.
Thought like a Guardian. Walk like a Guardian. Talk like a Guardian.
In 305, he was already on his platform when they walked in.
No Ms. Whittaker. No transfer board. He must have gotten there early.
His tie today was deep blue. His sleeves were rolled down, cuffs buttoned. His jacket was back on. Every line of him screamed formal.
The mic was on. His tiny voice came from above them. “Phones away,” he said. “It’s Thursday, which means half of you have mentally left your bodies already. Let’s try to keep your physical forms in the room for at least forty minutes.”
The class chuckled weakly. The vibe was wrong. Tighter. Stretched.
Dayton slid into her seat. Hayden by the window. Nicole on her right. Hannah in front, already taking out her pens like normal.
Rhys glanced at the clock, then at the door. When the final stragglers slipped in and the late bell beeped, he clapped his small hands once.
“Yesterday’s discussion was…” he paused, “…energetic.”
A nervous ripple of laughter.
“We touched on some… sensitive topics,” he went on. “Guardianship. Reduction. Exile. Some of you felt… uncomfortable.”
He let that sit. Then he smiled, sharp.
“Good,” he said. “Literature that never makes you uncomfortable is usually not about anything real.”
Dayton’s fingers curled around her pen. Her eyes flicked to Nicole, whose shoulders had drawn up like she was trying to hide inside her hoodie.
“Before we begin,” Rhys continued, “I will say this: If any of you wish to continue yesterday’s conversation in a more private setting, my office hours are posted on the board. You may speak to me one-on-one, or with a counselor present, or with your SEA-appointed case manager if you have one.”
His gaze skated across Dayton for half a second. Not lingering, but not missing her either.
“What I will not do,” he said, “is allow any student to dictate which topics are off limits in this classroom. We are dealing with texts that intersect with your lives. That is the point. We will be respectful. We will be rigorous. We will not be sanitized.”
He tapped his pen against the mini board, a crisp little sound. “Now. Today’s theme.”
His eyes went to the big whiteboard behind him, still half smudged from some other teacher’s notes.
“Dayton,” he said.
Her stomach clenched. “Yes.”
“The board, please,” he said. “Today we are dealing with perception. Be a darling and write that for me.”
Nicole muttered under her breath, “Here we go again.”
Dayton stood up. The eraser felt rough in her hand, edges crumbling. She wiped away the ghost math, then grabbed a fresh piece of chalk and wrote in big letters:
PERCEPTION.
Her “P” came out a little crooked. She went over it, fixing the curve.
Rhys watched her from his platform. “Careful,” he said. “Don’t let the C swallow the T.”
A couple of kids laughed. It was automatic now, the rhythm of it. He poked. They reacted. She swallowed.
She underlined the word, put the chalk down, and went back to her seat.
“Thank you,” he said. It was almost a normal thank you. He ruined it a second later. “Our junior calligrapher grows stronger every day.”
The class chuckled again.
Dayton sat, spine straight, jaw tight. Guardian tone, she reminded herself. Calm. Firm. Clear.
“Perception,” Rhys said, underlining the word on his tiny board with his microscopic marker. “How we see. Who gets to call what they see ‘real.’ Today, we’re going back to Dickinson.”
He read Much Madness is divinest Sense, his amplified voice wrapping the words around the room.
“Much Madness is divinest Sense
To a discerning Eye
Much Sense the starkest Madness.
’Tis the Majority
In this, as all, prevail
Assent and you are sane
Demur, you’re straightway dangerous
And handled with a Chain…”
He let the last line hang.
“Handled with a chain,” he repeated. “Poetic, isn’t it.”
No one said anything.
“The majority decides what’s normal,” he went on. “The majority decides what’s dangerous. And when they decide you’re dangerous, they don’t ask you for your opinion before they put you on a leash.”
His eyes flicked toward Nicole. Barely. Just enough that Dayton felt it like a shove.
Nicole stared at her notebook, face blank.
Dayton’s hand tightened around her pen hard enough to make it creak.
“We live in a world,” Rhys said, “where this poem has become… quite literal for some people. Do we have anyone in this room who has been officially labeled dangerous by a majority.”
He let his gaze drift now. Slowly.
Dayton knew what he was doing. He was waiting for her to speak. To jump in. To block.
She didn’t.
Her heart hammered, but she stayed still.
“Let’s expand the question,” he said when no one offered themselves up as an example. “Anyone whose family member has been officially reclassified. Reduced. Re-labeled as something less than they were the year before.”
The word family hit like a slap.
Nicole’s breathing had gone shallow. Dayton could see it in the rise of her shoulders.
Again, Rhys’s eyes brushed her and Nicole. Again, he moved on before Dayton exploded.
“Miss Merriweather,” he said instead, pointing at Hannah. “Spare us for the moment, please, from the drama of our resident Guardians. Talk to us about perception. Has there been a time when you felt the majority misread you? Treated you like you were something you weren’t.”
Hannah jumped a little at her name. “Um. When I moved here in fourth grade,” she said. “I moved here from Canada. We speak French but we know English. Just because I was quiet. They kept talking really slow at me. It was… weird.”
“Excellent,” Rhys said. “A more mundane example, but very useful. The chain in that situation was assumption. You were handled with a chain of other people’s expectations about what a girl who looks like you must be like.”
He kept going. He called on other students. He talked about labels, about “crazy” and “sane,” about how power decided who got which.
He did not say Kinsley’s name.
He did not have to.
Every time he said chain, leash, dangerous, Dayton could feel it pressing against her. Against Nicole. Against everyone in the building under four inches tall.
She lasted fifteen minutes before she raised her hand.
“Dayton,” he said. Of course he called on her immediately.
“Yesterday you said law and morality aren’t the same thing,” she said. Her voice was level. Measured. “Today you’re saying the majority decides who’s dangerous. Those are both about power. Just different kinds.”
“Go on,” he said.
“If the majority passes a law that says a certain group is dangerous,” she said, “that doesn’t automatically make them dangerous. It just means the majority has the power to call them that. Guardianship’s like that. Littles didn’t vote for it. But they’re stuck with it.”
“Spoken like someone who’s been reading the SEA handbook for fun,” he said.
A couple kids laughed, but it was quieter this time.
“So you see yourself as… what,” he asked. “A necessary evil. A kind chain.”
“It’s not about what I see myself as,” she said. “It’s about what happens if we aren’t there. You know those stats too. Uncollared Littles getting hurt. Going missing. Ending up in ‘private collections.’” She made air quotes around the phrase.
A little shiver went through the room. Everyone knew somebody’s cousin’s cousin who’d disappeared after reduction.
“And who made those stats,” he asked. “Who collected them. Who framed them. Who decided the solution was state or federal sanctioned ownership.”
“The government,” she said. “Obviously. But just because they did it wrong doesn’t mean the answer is no safety at all. We’re the safety.”
“You keep saying we,” he noted.
She met his eyes. “Yeah,” she said. “We. Guardians. I’m not pretending I’m not part of it.”
He studied her for a moment. “So when a Little like myself questions the people holding the chain,” he said, “you see that as… what, exactly. Insubordination? Ingratitude?”
“It depends how you do it,” she said. “If you’re asking real questions, that’s one thing. If you’re embarrassing kids in front of their whole class, that’s another.”
There was a tiny hitch in his expression. Then it smoothed out.
“We’re back to Nicole,” he said.
The room tensed. Nicole’s shoulders hunched a fraction.
“Yes,” Dayton said. “We’re back to Nicole.”
He nodded slowly. “I see.”
He capped his marker with a sharp little click.
“Here’s the thing, Miss Harris,” he said, voice still calm. “And yes, I am using your title on purpose. Guardianship is a legal classification. This school district spent a great deal of time with lawyers, union reps, and more local bureaucrats than I care to think about, working out what my position would look like post-reduction.”
He spread his hands. Tiny, precise. “My continued employment here is not an accident. It is not a loophole. It is the result of reading the law very carefully. I assure you, you are not the first person to worry about my collar status.”
Dayton’s pulse spiked. “Then why…”
“And,” he went on, “those same adults determined that discussing the realities of reduction and Guardianship in a literature classroom was not only allowed, but educational. That includes…” his eyes flicked briefly to Nicole “…referencing real experiences my students are living.”
“That doesn’t make it right,” Dayton said. “Just because a bunch of adults signed off doesn’t mean it’s not hurting people.”
“You filed something, did you not,” he said. “Or you are planning to. Your threat yesterday was not subtle.”
A couple of kids shifted in their chairs. Nicole’s head snapped toward Dayton. She whispered something quietly, but Dayton kept her eyes on Rhys.
“I’m following procedure,” she said. “That’s literally what we’re supposed to do when we see a violation.”
Rhys’s mouth twitched. Not quite a smile. “Then by all means,” he said. “Follow it. File whatever you like. The SEA and the district will hash it out. Perhaps they’ll discover they’ve all been terribly wrong and a thirteen year old knows the regulations better than they do.”
“That’s not what this is about,” she said. Her voice was still steady, but she could feel the heat rising in her face.
“Isn’t it?” he asked. “From where I stand, it looks very much like a power struggle. You are used to having the enforcement arm of the federal government behind you. The weight of the gracewood name backing your moves. That must feel… intoxicating.”
“It feels heavy,” she said. “Like responsibility. Like if I mess up, someone dies.”
The room had gone so quiet that the hum of the lights was louder than breathing.
He looked at her for a long moment.
“Perception,” he said finally, tapping the word on his board. “To you, Guardianship feels like a burden. To Littles, it feels like a chain. Both are true. Both exist at once. That tension? That’s what Dickinson is talking about.”
“It’s also what you’re living in,” she said. “You can talk about it without putting my friends on display.”
“If Nicole wishes to discuss this privately, she may,” he said. “That is her choice. What I will not do is write my lesson plans around the comfort level of one or two students who happen to carry guardian licenses”
He said it matter-of-factly, but the line landed hard.
“I am the teacher,” he added, and there it was, the steel under the words. “You are the students. That hierarchy has not changed, regardless of what recent medical mischief the universe has visited upon my body.”
A low ohhh rippled through the room. Someone whispered, “He’s pissed,” under their breath.
Dayton stared at him, throat tight.
“So,” he said briskly, “let’s get back to the poem, shall we. Miss Myers.”
Nicole flinched. “What,” she said.
“How does Dickinson’s chain compare,” he asked, “to the leash on your sister’s collar.”
A couple of kids made tiny panicked sounds. Hannah slapped a hand over her mouth.
Nicole went very still.
Dayton opened her mouth.
Nicole beat her to it.
“She hates it,” Nicole said, voice low but clear. “The collar. She says it feels heavy. Even when I loosen it. Even when we put the soft lining in. She says it reminds her she’s Little now.”
The words hung in the air. Raw. Unpolished.
“And how do you feel about it,” he asked.
Nicole’s jaw worked. “I feel like if I don’t make her wear it, something worse will happen,” she said. “Like if I mess up one rule, they’ll come take her. Or she’ll get stepped on. Or lost. Or… something. So I tighten it and I hate it and I pretend I don’t.”
Her eyes were shining now. She blinked hard.
“And in that tension,” he said softly, “between her hating the collar and you hating what no collar would mean… there is your chain.”
He turned back to the class. “That’s the tension Dickinson is naming. Assent and you are sane. Demur and you are dangerous. What happens when saying no to the chain means you lose the person you’re trying to protect.”
He moved on then. Called on other people. Layered their answers into his analysis, wove it all together like he always did.
He did not look back at Dayton.
At lunch, the cafeteria felt louder than usual. Or maybe that was just the noise in Dayton’s head.
They sat at their usual table by the windows. Trays. Cafeteria food. Juice boxes, soda’s coffees.
Nobody touched their food for a solid minute.
“Okay,” Nicole said finally. “That was… a lot.”
Hannah’s eyes were still a little red. “You were really brave,” she told Nicole. “Saying that about Kinsley.”
“I was not brave,” Nicole said. “I was cornered. He just wouldn’t let it go. Again.”
Hayden shook her head. “He literally gave a whole speech about not letting middle schoolers tell him how to teach,” she said. “He’s calling your bluff, Day.”
Dayton shoved her lunch around with her fork. “I know,” she said.
“Just… by the way,” Nicole said, looking at her. “Did you actually file? Because I feel like that should be a group chat announcement, not a surprise.”
“I submitted it to the SEA directly,” Dayton said.
Nicole chewed on a straw wrapper. “Do you think he really believes the district did everything right?” she asked. “Or is that just, like, denial.”
“He sounded pretty sure,” Hannah said. “Like, ‘I have spoken to ten lawyers’ sure.”
“Of course he believes them,” Hayden said. “He’s Rhys. He trusts books and rules. He probably thinks the system can’t be that bad if it kept him in his job. Lets him walk around uncollared and live guardian free. Get cartered round by Ms. Whittakker like a king.”
Nicole laughed once, sharp. “Meanwhile the system turned him into a small chalk gremlin.”
“Nicole,” Hannah said, horrified laughing. “Oh my God.”
“I’m just saying,” Nicole said. “If reduction doesn’t break your faith in authority, nothing will.”
Dayton stared out the window for a second. The Little safe ramp glinted in the weak sun. A tiny pair of students moved along it, one full sized, one small. The bigger kid walked just a half step slower, matching pace. Guardian instinct. She could spot it now from across a room.
“He thinks I can’t do anything,” she said quietly.
“What?” Hayden leaned in.
“Rhys,” Dayton said. “He thinks the district and the lawyers are on his side. That I’m just… what did he call me? ‘A student with a card.’ He doesn’t believe I can actually change anything.”
Nicole toyed with her bracelet. “To be fair,” she said, “the idea of you going up against like, three lawyers and the entire school district is kind of, you know. Big boss level.”
“He underestimates you,” Hannah said. “That’s his problem.”
“Yeah,” Hayden said. “He thinks the hierarchy is fixed. Teacher up here, student down there. He’s not ready for Guardian Harris speedrunning the bureaucracy.”
“Please never say ‘speedrunning the bureaucracy’ again,” Nicole said.
Dayton didn’t smile.
“The line was Nicole and Kinsley and he crossed it. I told him I’d file if he didn’t stop,” she said. “He didn’t stop. That means I either do it or I prove him right.”
“And you hate proving people like him right,” Hayden said.
“More than anything,” Dayton admitted.
Nicole exhaled. “Okay,” she said. “Real talk. You filed… so if you…somehow, like, win, what happens?”
“Best case?” Dayton said. “SEA rules the district out of compliance. They either assign him a Guardian from the agency, force the district into compliance or transfer him out of the classroom to a registered facility.”
“Worst case?” Hannah asked.
“They say everything’s fine,” Dayton said. “And he knows I tried to claim him and failed.”
Nicole winced. “That would… not be fun.”
“Yeah, no kidding,” Hayden said. “He’d be insufferable.”
“So what do you do?” Nicole asked.
Dayton looked down at her tray, then up at her friends.
“I do my job as a guardian,” she said. “Even if it makes him hate me.”
“You sure?” Hayden asked softly.
“No,” Dayton said. “But I can’t keep sitting in that room, listening to him pull us apart and call it a lesson, and do nothing. That’s not who I am.”
Nicole reached across the table and flicked her Guardian card through Dayton’s lanyard with one finger. “Then go be who you are,” she said. “I’ll just be over here, trying not to throw up.”
Hannah smiled weakly. “We’ve got you,” she said.
“Yeah,” Hayden said. “If this ship sinks, we’re all going down together. It’ll be very dramatic.”
“That’s not actually comforting,” Dayton said.
“It’s the only kind I know,” Hayden said.
The lunch bell eventually rang. They dumped their trays, shuffled off to their next classes, let the rest of the school day wash over them in a blur of algebra and science and half-heard announcements.
But all through Thursday, in the back of Dayton’s mind, a different bell was ringing.
He didn’t change.
He thinks I won’t.
That night, when she sat at her desk staring at the claim packet under her lamp, the signature line did not look hypothetical anymore.
It looked like the only way to prove that in a world built on chains and leashes and laws written by people who’d never met her, a thirteen-year-old girl could still choose which side of the leash she wanted to stand on.

To be fair he’s not wrong in a sense that it feels like littles get no say what so ever!
He is right 100%. Speaking facts
I don’t think he’s really calling a bluff, I just don’t think he cares lol “file, don’t file, i’m stilling going to teach my class how i want to” is how i read it at least
He also could just believe the district is right and did everything right so isn’t afraid of Dayton.
He also could just have no f’s to give.
Can’t take anything away from him that’s been taken already
I think he is like a lot of teachers, thinks he is above people that can do stuff because he memorized some other peoples stuff that cant build or do anything with their hands. He is angry Dayton did something that he cant do. I hope she gets him and shows him off on her shoulder with a pink ribbon in his hair he loves so much lol My mom and sister are teachers FYI lol. teachers are not like they used to be. lol.
OK, this has nothing to do with the story!
Is that school near a petroleum/chemical plant? It looks like there is a tower flaring gas in the background.
😬
I didn’t notice that till you mentioned it but I do see it now. . But it’s just a generic background image I generated using ai as there was nothing outside the window. So I used adobe ai generative fill to make a background image.
This comment IS about the story.
I’m getting confused in this chapter. Did Dayton file or not? It seems like you say she did, but then later it seems like she is still going to.
You also have me confused on your thinking (I’m trying to psychoanalyze you 😝). From everything you have written I get the distinct feeling you agree with Dayton’s POV regarding Littles; however, in this chapter you did a great job of presenting the opposite POV with Rhys’ lesson. I am impressed with the way Rhys speaks in this chapter.
You have done a great job of presenting both POVs in this story!
I love the dichotomy that you have presented here. It would be interesting to see some of the other students actually discussing the differing POVs ( or at least Dayton and her friends actually seriously consider that maybe Rhys’ POV is correct, even if they dismiss it after considering it). I forget the exact quote of what you said before, but if they do not consider the other POV, then they have shown their bias and closed mindedness.
She filed after this class, before lunch if that helps.
I wouldn’t say I agree with Dayton’s opinion but i undersetand how she got there and why seh feels and thinks the way she does.
I dont agree with Rhys though as to me he is just to unprofessional as a teacher and is kind of using his position to try to influence minors to a position they may not fully understand the ramifactions for.
Well Mr. Rhys is basically attacking dayton and her friends. At 13 it would be extremely mature for a 13 year old to who is being attacked for their beliefs and having to defend them in class against their teacher and then also be able to weight what would be considered anti-government sentiment.
totally agree, he is a bad teacher
I have had worse teachers. I think he has the ability to be a really good teacher if he could shed some of his personality issues, but he is human (wait… no he isn’t 😝).
He does manage to bring up salient points and if the students are paying attention, they should actually start to think. Unfortunately he screws up by making it personal for some of the students and forcing what should be private information to be discussed in class.
I was messing with AI video and this what it would look like if Dayton wins him and
shows him off around the school as a trophy.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mvv8w7FiHrLEuH5YwoDv-4XKRltP78Sd/view?usp=drivesdk
this is what it would look like if she wants to make a point at how vulnerable he is. tried to take the PG one not the PG 13 ones the AI was making and grossing me out lol.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QXLROD-SI71zzEm-Zz1V84vNCXYK_jxf/view?usp=drivesdk
You need to make these public, they have restricted access
thank you for the heads up. I’m still new to google drive so thank you for your patience
here is Dayton putting a collar on her new little so everyone knows where her spunky little is around the giant kids
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1WHH1zUhxy6AACxdVXI6xcgierEF1Q0um/view?usp=drivesdk
thats pretty neat seeing dayton in motion like that.
i did this awhile ago where Kelli was buzzed at the party and had some fun with a giant red head that has a crush on her. i was going to do more but i was worried the AI would go to far. lol
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1aK47IELsuLFmahtGCvAgBmBynofGuiuE/view?usp=drivesdk
Are all of the other videos you’ve uploaded unlocked as well?
they all should be unlocked
Cool, could you send me a link?
The links are in the posts on this site. He posted 3 links.
I know I’ve been trying to find them.
I will try to make longer movie of one of your chapters if you want, just tell which one. You do so much work for our community that I would be so happy if I can put some time in something for you. I love bringing your stories to life.
Not bad!
I created a video with Dayton petting the teacher and I got her to say good little pet so now you can hear what Dayton sounds like lol
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FOMRwyLuvNSKzy9ttsMnKFSoj3DSJcr8/view?usp=drivesdk
Ehhhh… Ok…
Just trying to learn Ai to make small movies of the chapters
1) “I heard Marcus in the hallway doing that ‘wow, must be nice to own your sister’ joke after everything Rhys said.” Well, not all guardians are like that, but enough guardians, lol.
2) “You already tried handling something yesterday and almost went nuclear with our English teacher.” It’s good to see her friends holding Dayton accountable.
3) “Please tell me you yelled.” – “No, I used my training voice.” Which could easily have been more insulting,
4) “ if he keeps messing with you, she’s filing to the Smallara Enforcement Agency directly.” something she said she’d do anyway.
5) “I didn’t threaten, I explained the consequences.” – “Those are the same thing,” Hayden gets it. It is a threat because Dayton decides if she does or doesn’t file, she also has a plan mapped out in her mind of what happens if she does, even if she’s not in direct control of it.
She’s assuming the district has fucked up SEA regulations and is therefore threatening him with filing means; in her mind, she’s threatening his job and livelihood.
It’s like threatening to expose a kid’s conservative views in a liberal family; it’s possible that the family isn’t that kind of liberal family and will still love thier conservative child, but that’s not what the person making the threat is counting on.
6) “Guardians don’t do threats. We set boundaries.” And how do they do that? With threats of punishment, perhaps?
7) “Whatever happens, you’re not the villain in this story. She wasn’t sure if he believed that. She wasn’t sure if she did.” Well, I’m certain I don’t
8) “Thought like a Guardian. Walk like a Guardian. Talk like a Guardian.” Control like a guardian. Threaten like a Guardian. Oppress like a Guardian
9) “Dayton slid into her seat. Hayden by the window. Nicole on her right. Hannah in front, already taking out her pens like normal.” Then why does the Image put Nicole on her left?
10) “I will say this: If any of you wish to continue yesterday’s conversation in a more private setting, my office hours are posted on the board. You may speak to me one-on-one, or with a counselor present, or with your SEA-appointed case manager if you have one.” That’s about as close to an apology as they’re gonna get.
11) “What I will not do, is allow any student to dictate which topics are off limits in this classroom. We are dealing with texts that intersect with your lives. That is the point. We will be respectful. We will be rigorous. We will not be sanitized.” Littles not letting humans censor them is good, but so is respecting the privacy of others.
12) “Dayton,” “The board, please,” Does he have students singled out in his other classes, or do they get the workload shared around them?
13) “Our junior calligrapher grows stronger every day.” She’s so gonna file
14) “The majority decides what’s normal, The majority decides what’s dangerous. And when they decide you’re dangerous, they don’t ask you for your opinion before they put you on a leash.” He’s mostly right, but leaving out the the government holds much sway over the majority.
15) “Anyone whose family member has been officially reclassified. Reduced. Re-labeled as something less than they were the year before.” technically not singling Nicole out again
16) “Miss Merriweather,” he said instead, pointing at Hannah” Miss Marriwether but not Miss Harris, dude wants to play with all the fire.
17) “I moved here from Canada. We speak French but we know English. Just because I was quiet. They kept talking really slowly to me. It was… weird.” That’s a good example, one that still targeted Dayton’s friends, though.
18) “He called on other students.” HE CAN DO THAT?!
19) “Yesterday you said law and morality aren’t the same thing, Today you’re saying the majority decides who’s dangerous. Those are both about power. Just different kinds.” She’s right, but most of his lessons have been about power in different ways.
20) ““It’s about what happens if we aren’t there” Well, there was a time, with two guardians in your house, one right beside you, when you almost killed a Little
21) “And who made those stats,” he asked. “Who collected them. Who framed them. Who decided the solution was state or federal sanctioned ownership.” That’s an escelent point, statistics are often used to lie and manipulate people, loaded to serve biases and agendas
22) “But just because they did it wrong doesn’t mean the answer is no safety at all. We’re the safety.” True, but are you really safe? Guardians are often abusive to their Littles, even the #1 Guardian complains about this (when not being abusive herself)
23) “We. Guardians. I’m not pretending I’m not part of it.” Technically, she’s just Guardian trained/licenced/certified, like Ellie or Hayden. She won’t be an actual guardian until she has a Little of her own. The same way that having a forklift licence doesn’t automatically make one a Forkie (forklift operator).
24) “So when a Little like myself questions the people holding the chain, you see that as… what, exactly. Insubordination? Ingratitude?” That’s a good question. We know guardians don’t like being questioned
25) “We’re back to Nicole,” and what’s more Dayton brought her up this time.
26) “Here’s the thing, Miss Harris,” Oh shit he actually called her that “And yes, I am using your title on purpose.” oh damn.
27) “This school district spent a great deal of time with lawyers, union reps, and more local bureaucrats than I care to think about, working out what my position would look like post-reduction.” I didn’t hear ‘SEA compliance workers’ or ‘Genritech’.
28) “My continued employment here is not an accident. It is not a loophole. It is the result of reading the law very carefully. I assure you, you are not the first person to worry about my collar status.” I hope that means he’s safe from her, even if he is a little shit
29) “those same adults determined that discussing the realities of reduction and Guardianship in a literature classroom was not only allowed, but educational. That includes…referencing real experiences my students are living.” Just because he can doesn’t mean he should
30) “That doesn’t make it right,” Dayton said. “Just because a bunch of adults signed off doesn’t mean it’s not hurting people.” Fucking Damnit, Dayton, stop agreeing with me, you are not the good guy here.
31) “You filed something, did you not? Or you are planning to. Your threat yesterday was not subtle.” Damn, he’s exposing her in front of everyone.
32) “From where I stand, it looks very much like a power struggle. You are used to having the enforcement arm of the federal government behind you. The weight of the Gracewood name backs your moves. That must feel… intoxicating.” Definitely something Dayton agrees with. Name-dropping Chloe on multiple occasions would be pleasing to her.
33) “It feels heavy, Like responsibility. Like if I mess up, someone dies.” Oh fuck off, you are not taking it that seriously
34) “To you, Guardianship feels like a burden. To Littles, it feels like a chain. Both are true. Both exist at once. That tension? That’s what Dickinson is talking about.” Damn he brought it back to the lesson plan
35) “What I will not do is write my lesson plans around the comfort level of one or two students who happen to carry guardian licenses” I mean, he kind of is doing that, just not in an avoidance kind of way.
36) “I am the teacher, You are the students. That hierarchy has not changed, regardless of what recent medical mischief the universe has visited upon my body.” Damn straight
37) “How does Dickinson’s chain compare, to the leash on your sister’s collar.” Fucking dick.
38) “She hates it, the collar. She says it feels heavy. Even when I loosen it. Even when we put the soft lining in. She says it reminds her she’s Little now.” Damn, actual honest answer.
39) “I feel like if I don’t make her wear it, something worse will happen Like if I mess up one rule, they’ll come take her. Or she’ll get stepped on. Or lost. Or… something. So I tighten it and I hate it and I pretend I don’t.” A more vulnerable side of Nicole was not on my bingo card for this episode.
40) “between her hating the collar and you hating what no collar would mean… there is your chain.” That’s a surprisingly empathetic end to the topic, though still fucked up how it started.
41) “He moved on then. Called on other people.” Has he been able to do that this whole time?
41) “I submitted it to the SEA directly,” So, she threatened to do it if he didn’t change, then did it anyway before giving him the chance to? That’s breaking the rules Dayton set for herself.
42) “He’s Rhys. He trusts books and rules.” SO does Dayton, question is, who’s right about the books and rules?
43) “Please never say ‘speedrunning the bureaucracy’ again,” That does sound like an oxymoron
44) “He didn’t stop. That means I either do it or I prove him right.” YOU ALREADY FILED
45) “And you hate proving people like him right,” – “More than anything,” And yet by filing before she’s proven me right, which I don’t think Dayton would like either.
46) “I do my job as a guardian, Even if it makes him hate me.” I don’t think this counts as a guardian’s job. I knows she thinks it does, because she wants it to, but I think a guardian’s only responsible for their own Little, they can choose to ‘help’ other Littles, but that’s not any more mandatory for them than it is to others,
47) “He didn’t change.” he doesn’t owe you change.
48) “It looked like the only way to prove that in a world built on chains and leashes and laws written by people who’d never met her, a thirteen-year-old girl could still choose which side of the leash she wanted to stand on.” she doesn’t get to chose, she just gets to pick if she (tries to) put someone on the wrong end of hers
I hope Dayton gets him because he is not teaching what he should and he is putting his plight as a little in most of his lessons and is harmful to many of the students that have connections to little enforcement
9) I’ve already accepted that the pictures don’t always jive with the story (the other day, Rhys had no tie). Asuka has point out multiple times that this is the case. Although I guess in this instance he could have edited the text to match the picture 🙂
10) Yeah, I thought he might actually tone things down, but he pushes on and does it again.
15) Actually he is. He knows she is the only one with a registered Little in this class.
21) Agreed. “Trust, but verify” (Although with the government, trust is hard to come by)
29) If the District actually said he could reference “real experiences my students are living” then they messed up. Personal problems should be handled outside of class.
35) Again, personal issues should not be discussed in class
46) Time and again she refers to being a Guardian as a job. I see it more like when a person gets a license to raise falcons. They have to be certified, but it isn’t necessarily a job. Many falconers do it as a hobby and the birds are pets and controlled.
*) So many times Dayton and her friends come so close to questioning the system, but then they fall short of doing so. It would be nice to see some of the class actually doing that. There has to be at least one! Come on! There are no cynics in this class?
9) the pictures and the text arent made at the same time. So sometimes it depends what order things are done in. Lots of times the stories end up edited and changed from the first draft and to me personally its not worth the time to re-render the images as this already takes alot of my free time.
In this case its becuase resources. If they were in the third row that means I would need to add more models to scene as it would look odd having that many desks open.
Adding that many models a scene is taxing and may not even be possible to fit within the amount of video ram my graphics card has. As while i have a 50 series card i only have a 5080. So the entire scene has to fit within 16gb of video ram. That means every texture within the scene, classroom, desks, people, hair, clothes, etc.
So if its depicted how i wrote it. I would need render in more students to make it look realistic.
This way i can cheat the system so to speak if I have htem all alogn the window and not in the third row and overal render the scene quicker.
*) Well her friends dont really have that much of an issue with system as a whole. There are parts they dont like there isnt a better system available. Nicole doesn’t like the collars but she also wouldnt want someone just taking her sister either. The rules do provide a level of protection.
Some in the class could be more for or against or indifferent but like in real life most people dont share there opinions when they go against the norm.
9) That one’s more poking fun than actual criticism
10) It’s the consequence of Dayton trying to control him.
15) She’s the only guardian; anyone in that room could have a reduced family member they aren’t the guardian of. Like how Alison has a Little brother, but she isn’t his guardian.
29) I think they meant more like Hannah’s experiences, not Nicole’s.
35) Agreed
46) She clearly views it closer to a narcissistic version of parenthood or slave driver than pet ownership.
*) At the end of the day, the system mostly lines up with their values, so even when they question the parts that don’t, they won’t dismiss it fully.
1) Still Mr. Rhys should have known better or cared more imho.
2) Dayton doesnt regret defending her friends but she is held accountable.They have opinions and thoughts as well.
3) its possible it was. I guess it would depend on how Mr. Rhys took it and tone. Her intention wasnt to be insulting though but it could be taken that way.
4) Well she hasn’t yet though. Saying and actually doing are two different things. In this case she didn’t actually file everything till after class.
5) its a fine line. I can see how its a threat but I personally wouldn’t call it a threat persay as his own actions, decisons and choices have consequence. He has the freedom to do what he wants but he is not free of the consequences.
Dayton saying she will file is part of the consequences. He can choose to care or not care.
6) similar to parenting you can take your parents setting rules and things as theats or setting the consequences for your own choices and actions. I’m not saying one is right or wrong. its just perspective of the indvidual on how they take it.
7) that was without question to me. I have dayton locked in as the villian according to lethal.
I personally am not sure there is a villian to me. As i kind of write it trying to portray real life and there are good people bad people neutral people. I’d count dayton as more neutral. She can be good and can be bad. Where Hannah I would consider more just a good person.
8) you have all the makings for a hit song there.
9) I wanted them by the window. As the amount of models needed to depict the scene the way it was written would balloon the scene size. I would need to spend time either reducing each texture size which isnt focused by the camera or spend more time rendering.
I also need to keep the scene to underneath the 16gb of video ram. in order to utilize my gpu to render. While i do have 64gb of system ram the 9800x3d cpu i have is more of a gaming cpu then it is a production cpu. Which I did know when i was buying and buildling this system. I just didnt want to give up gaming performance and even if i had. cpu rendering within prosumer line isn’t all that speedy. It could take several hours to even a day depending on what is actually depicted in the scene.
So often times I have to make edits or decisions just to get that is able to be rendered easily.
If I did less episodes per week I could spend more time on the images and more time could be spend rendering. But currently between writing and rendering i’m already utilizing 10 hours outside of my 40 hour work week. So the ony option would be restructuring the release schedule to optimze the images. Going down to maybe 3 episodes per week. But i havent really thought about it.
10) I would think so. Thats hardly an apology. That makes Sara’s apologies look pretty good.
11) He definately doesnt respect there privacy.
12)No, he just singles out Dayton.
13) He isnt doing himself any favors. Giving her every reason on earth to get underneath her skin.
14)The government has been educating the majority for a long time.
15)I mean she’s the only one who would qualify, but you are right.
16)Gotta give dayton the business of disrepect at every turn.
17) He knows what he is doing. He picked hannah on purpose to send a message to dayton.
18) clearly a anamoly.
19) He is definately working htrough the lens of power and dynamics in his lesson plans .
20) Jordan had alot to do with that himself. you cant fully blame that on Dayton as jordan made the choice to put himself in the backyard on his own putitng his own life in danger.
Not that daytong was blameless in that but Jordan also deserves a large share of blame for running.
21) It is a good point but one that could be used in nearly every argument.
22) Well it happens. Im not sure about often. As I wouldnt say a majority of littles are abused. I think its also somewhat skewed as the stories told wouldnt be interesting if I told a story where the little was treated well, the guardian was doign everything right. There was no strife or issues. So there is a bit of conflict that has to occur which skews things
23) are forklift drivers actually called forkies? is that what those in the trade refer to themselves as?
I do think you are right here. Dayton is a guardian but doesnt have a little so she doesnt have hte practical experience.
24) Guardians could argue the same thing. Any time they do anything for safety, or the law, or a requirement the little views that often in the same light..
25) True, but not in a airing of private information that is almost putting her in tears sort of way like Mr. Rhys did the day prior. Its not like Nicole never expected herself to be metioned in class again.
26) lol I like your initial response then your slightly dejected oh.. almost like come on man. you were so close.
27) You did not. That is a factual statement.
28) Only time will tell.
29) Yes that is very true. Can and should are crucial
30)Lethal and dayton on the same page. You heard it here first folks Book it. Arm and arm. Friends practically.
31)He is. Airing it all out.
32)Not to mention #1 guardian Sara Reeves aka sarandipity. Im sure dayton has brought up a time or two.
33) lol, she could have turned over a new leaf.
34) sure did.
35) That freedom is what he is after. He is choosing to write lesson plans encorporating Dayton and Nicole. He isn’t being forced too.
36)Lethal firmly back on Team Rhys. The flag bearer if you will.
37) and he lost you instantly
38) Nicole is just like fuck it at this point. lets just get this over with he’s goign to keep prying and poking till he gets what he wants. So sharing what she wants private is her only recourse is how she feels. Then she just has to deal with it. as its what he forced her into.
39) She was forced too. But it does give the reader good insight to nicole’s process and feelings.
40) Well he forced her to share something seh didnt wnat to share. Forced to aire it in front of the whole class. Then turned her personal life into a teaching moment for everyone. I wouldnt exactly call that empathetic being she was coerced.
41) No she filed after class. She said was the line was and he crossed in class. HE danced over it with a big show. Teasing her by bringing in Hannah on top of everything else. So she filed everything in teh time after class and before lunch.
42) They are alot alike in that regard.
43) It really does.
44) Well he just filed because of what happened. But yes as of during lunch the deed has been done. I probably should haev made that more clear. But these episodes have already been quite long.
45) Well she filed after class which was after he used nicole and kinsley again. So she did keep her word to the letter.
46) Well if they see a infraction being they know the law they are sort of required to report it. Otherwise they could be liable. Kind of like if you are a doctor adn are giving cpr you are held to a higher standard as you know what your doing. A guaridan is in a similar situation.
47)He doesnst owe her anything. that is true.
48)The end of Dayton’s leash is your favorite place to be.
2) I like that, some friends just ignore flaws
3) She’s insisting on acting like a guardian around him.
4) But she said she would file yesterday, so either way she’s lied to someone.
5) And saying you’ll out someone if they don’t obey is a consequence, but one the person saying it is using as a threat.
7) Dayton is a villain though, she bullied Jordan, and when given the chance to apologise, doubled down on her actions. Her treatment of Mr Rhys is more of the same.
But I also see Mr Rhys as a villain, I see this as more of a Breaking Bad or God of War (original trilogy) type story where it’s just villains against other villains.
9) I know I was just teasing
10) It’s about the same as Sara IMHO
11) Which I’d consider worse if they didn’t also not respect his, but they intentionally went digging into his living situation.
13) I do hope he’s as safe as he feels.
15) That we know of, for all we know half the student in that class have reduces relative they just aren’t the guardians of.
20) Jordan is responsible for his actions I agree, but his opportunity came from Dayton, and his motivation came from all the girls he’d interacted with.
22) It also comes down to where the line of abuse is drawn. There are things guardians can do to Littles than doing to their own children or even dogs would get them called abusive.
23) That may be Aussie Slang, but I’m definitely a forkie.
24) True, that’s why communication is important, Guardians often keep secrets and lie to their Littles, which is not good for building trust.
26) Hey, I don’t want him calling her that, I just don’t want him calling other like that either.
27) I hope they fall under the “more local bureaucrats than I care to think about” comment, but I suspect their exclusion was deliberate.
30) I am not happy about this
31) I wonder how other students will react to finding out Dayton did this.
32) Oh most definitely.
33) She probably didn’t though.
36) I support Little teachers, even if this one is a twat, plenty of biggle teachers are twats too.
37) He did
38) It’s also different form the “Kinsley accepts that she’s no longer a person” image Nicole painted earlier.
39) But this pretending not to hate it is the kind of dishonesty I as referring to in 24.
40) Yeah, I misread that one a bit, my bad. I thought he was empathising for her being forced to collar her sister.
41) But she already told her friends she’d file regardless, which means she lied to them.
42) Too alike
44) Wasn’t everything she needed to file at home in hard copy form?, does the school have somewhere she can file from?
45) I see
46) I see, and they put that responsibility in 12yo’s?
48) Lol, I’d push Ezra under that bus in a heartbeat if it kept me from that position.
41) Well she was kind of going back and forth is what I was trying to create. As it is a big decision and while she may want a little she may not want this one persay but also beggers can’t be choosers being her mom has been reluctant to get her one. She gave her okay to get Mr. Rhys. So dayton si also weighing that.
in hindsight i should have highlighted that aspect more but iw as so focused on Rhys, lessons, and dayton and her friends i kind of overooked that aprt.
38)Kinsley can accept shes a little but still not like wearing a collar as while she could view a little as less then a person. She cuold still view herself as above animals where the collar makes her more feel in line with a house pet.
27) he could have also been just disclosing the ones he dealt with. Mr.Rhys may not have dealt with the SEA or Generitech directly.
Another great episode, I sense a twist coming where Dayton has a change of heart where she doesn’t file for Mr. Rhys but instead she gets a different little.
I didn’t comment yesterday because I was dealing with putting one of my dogs down.
sorry for your loss. our pets are family.
Thanks.
sorry for loss. I know how hard that can be.
Thank you.
My condolences bro
I’ve done that 3 times in my life and it never gets easier.
I was in my late 40’s the last time and I cried big time, so don’t feel ashamed if you did as well.
My sympathies as well.
sorry to hear about your dog
I’m rooting for him very hard