Rain started to pelt down against the windshield as Sara turned into the parking lot. The girls watched the rain streak down the window while Sara looked for a parking spot. Jordan struggled a bit in Ellie’s grip before finally just giving in to her. It was frustrating that the teen could so easily overpower him. But anything Ellie wanted to do, he was in no position to stop as Sara was focused on driving. Jordan looked over at Mallory, hoping she would say something; anything would be a help, but he was stuck in Ellie’s clutches as she started to pet him gently.
“Mallory,” Jordan loudly said which caused the teen to look down at him.
“I told you its Miss Bak, little one.” Mallory chided before opening up her pocket to peer down at Gavin. “Oh, good, you’re awake. I’m just going to transfer you to my bag. It’s raining, and you should be dryer in there.” Mallory said, not waiting for any response from Gavin before taking further action.
Sara shut the car off as she turned around; she extended her hand out toward Ellie moving her hand next to Ellie’s. Jordan stood up in Ellie’s hand, still finding it awkward to walk across a hand as if it was the floor. He couldn’t quite get his mind to accept that Ellie was supporting the entirety of his weight, and then in a few seconds, as he crossed over to Sara’s hand, it would be her who was supporting him.
Kayla watched intently as Jordan walked into Sara’s hand without her having to say anything. If she were to do anything like that with her sister, it would be a whole production. Kelli would never. Kayla thought to herself.
“You’re not going to like this, Jordan, but you will have to go into my purse,” Sara said as he watched her eyes drift down to her purse. She could see the questioning look on his face. As if telling her that I told you I don’t like it in there.
“It’s raining,” Sara said, looking down at Jordan.
“I don’t think he knows what that means, Sara,” Mallory said as she lowered Gavin into her bag.
“Rain is dangerous to underbreds like you. The water drops hit you with quite a bit of force; you can get a concussion or worse. This is for your own good.” Sara said as she lifted her bag up with her free hand.
“I guess that makes sense,” Jordan said, relenting to the point but not liking how each day seemed to uncover a new risk for him. It was bad enough that navigating sidewalks was deadly because of the heat. Now having to worry about concussive raindrops was just another example of his reliance on Sara.
“There are stories of underbreds who get caught out in the rain, and the droplets knock them to the ground and just batter them unconscious. Where they are susceptible to any number of predators as they are literally helpless at that point. Underbreds are also likely to get stepped on by people in those situations as they aren’t seen until it’s too late.” Sara explained.
“Just till you get inside, though,” Jordan said sternly as he looked up at Sara and crossed his arms to illustrate the point that he meant business.
“Jordan, tone,” Sara said as she flashed a glare at him. The kind of glare a parent would give a child if they weren’t happy with their attitude. It wasn’t lost on Jordan how Sara’s simple glare stopped his heart. He could feel a sense of guilt well within him ever so slightly as he looked at her. It seemed like the car fell quiet to Jordan after Sara’s comment. He was unsure if that was the reality or just his own self-conscious insecurities.
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1. A, Why is Mal “Miss Bak” to Jordan? And he “Little One” to Mal? She doesn’t do that to Kelli so it’s not like it’s every little except Gavin, and none of the others girls do it, it’s kinda cringe,
1. B, still hope he retaliates by saying “that’s Mr Fitz to you” when she calls him “Jordy” or any other name
2. Ellie playing is just as humiliating as anyone else, lol.
3. It’s good that Sara explained herself rather than just throwing him in the purse.
4. Kinda rude of her to dismiss him settling his boundaries with her, especially due to something as stupid as “tone” since her’s is no better.
5. Rain being dangerous males perfect sense, it was hinted at during previous shower scenes
Kelli isn’t really a like for like example as their is a pre-existing relationship. She didn’t really know Jordan before so that could be a difference. It could just be her preference with Jordan.
1b – he would probably get in corrected by Sara that his last name is Reeves now.
2 – maybe it hits different with Ellie as he knows there is or was an attraction there.
3 – I wondered if you would catch that.
4 – well she was more correcting his tone then action of him doing it. If he had said what he said differently she may have responded differently.
5 – that’s probably why Sara didn’t think he would be confused.
1. A, that’s kinda makes sense, but it’s not something anyone else has demanded, it makes her seem insecure to be demanding such unearned respect from him.
1. B, she likely would, and then he’d get embarrassed, or remind Sara of hin “One Condition” and ask her to change it for him, I can’t imagine Sara woukd support him wanting to be adressed more reasonably by Mal.
2. Yeah, that could be it, I thought there’d be a bit more consideration and courtesy from her, as she was the first to take interest in him.
3. Of course.
4. His tone was just trying to make her understand he was serious, and that he wanted her to keep her word, if she wasn’t a liar, perhaps he wouldn’t have said anything at all. And in any case, his tone was likely the same as hers has been to him countless times by now.
5. That’d make sense.
Sadly the Pictures isnt loading for me, I tried in my Phone, and with chrome and Edge in my pc None of them work.
Any Idea how to fix that?
That is strange. Are the other pictures working normally for you? I am not able to replicate that issue. I’ve tried multiple devices. I’ve been logged in and I’ve tried logged out. I used my wife computer as well, a few different mobile devices. The picture always loads for me.
I get the same issue. Also 411 isn’t loading for me, all the older images seem fine.
If you open the image in a new tab you get the following msg:
“We cannot complete this request, remote server returned an unexpected status code (400)”
hmmm, I will continue to look into it.
i tried disabling a image loading accelerator that optimizes image loading to see if that isn’t somehow causing issues for some users with the new server. Let me know if it’s any better. You may need to clear your browser cache for the past 24 hours or so just to ensure the broken image isn’t now stuck for you.
It’s working now, thanks!
I disabled a image accelerator i was using. If you could please let me know if the images are loading for you now. You may need to clear your browser cache for the past day or so.
Now its working again, thanks
This is FREAKING FANTASTIC Asukafan2001!!!!!!!!!! I really really REALLY!! Love 💗 this how all the girls are talking to him just like he’s the whittle child and they’re the adults💯👌💯💯💯👏👏👏 Mallory didn’t care was my favorite part here. She didn’t care what was going on she would not be addressed to like that from the whittle thing👌 Miss Bak is correct whittle one and mama Sara getting aggravated when he is trying to order her to take him right out of the purse 👛 when they get inside and she yells to him “watch your tone!” He doesn’t make the orders 💗💗💗💯💯💯 I can see him messing up badly here soon with his tone with her. It’s not going to be pretty for him I can see real hard punishment coming his way. Whittle baby pet doesn’t know how to respect his master and her friends
so glad you liked it. There sure to be more.
I love how Malory corrects Jorden to how he should properly adresses her as Ms and her last name instead of her name, as if he is just a 4 or 5 years old child how is speaking to an older babysitter. I felt sick and horny at the same time when she said that to him 😂. That Was so cool. In normal word she would give her total attention to him and she’d addresses him as sir and probably be so nervous when talking to him. God I live for these situations in this story. There should be an old friend of Jorden standing there with thim when he get scolded by these teens like that and see how themselves be so child like when talking to someone as old as Jorden in front of him and maybe Sara even as Jorden to speak in a more manner with his old friends and addresses thim as Mis and sir or uncle too.