Greg and Cindy had finally finished McKenzie’s homework.
It had been harder than Madison’s usual assignments, longer reading, more careful responses, more places where a careless answer might stand out. By the time they set their tablets down, both of them felt mentally wrung out. They sank into the couch together in the warm, enclosed quiet of the habitat while, just beyond the clear walls, the soft sound of another makeup tutorial drifted across Madison’s room.
Some woman on Madison’s phone was explaining the difference between two nearly identical shades of lip liner with breathless seriousness neither Greg nor Cindy cared about. The voice rose and fell in a soothing, insipid rhythm, full of terms they barely registered. Setting spray. Undertone. Blending. Contour placement. It all washed over them with the strange intimacy that came from living in someone else’s bedroom long enough for their interests to become part of the texture of your captivity.
By now, this was normal.
That was the part Greg still had trouble absorbing, even months into it. Not the habitat itself. Not the humiliation of its scale, or the routines, or even the endless need to ask permission for the smallest things. Horrible as all of that was, it at least still felt horrible in recognizable ways.
What unsettled him more was the normalcy.
The fact that he and Cindy could spend an evening doing their older daughter’s homework inside an enclosure in their younger daughter’s room while a makeup tutorial played a few feet away, and none of it seemed to strain the shape of the house anymore. The world had not cracked around them. It had simply rearranged itself and carried on.
Greg stared across the room at Madison.
She sat on her bed with one leg tucked beneath her, face lit by the glow of her phone, occasionally pausing the video to study something on the screen more closely. She looked comfortable. Entirely at ease. There was no sense in her posture that this arrangement was strange, no residual awkwardness, no lingering awareness that her parents sat enclosed across from her like part of the furniture.
And maybe that was what made it hardest to bear.
Greg could still remember what it had felt like to move freely through this room. To enter without permission. To stand in the doorway and tell Madison dinner was ready. To nag her to pick clothes up off the floor, to tell her a cup didn’t belong on the nightstand, to remind her she’d lose her phone if she kept ignoring him. More than that, he remembered what it had meant to be able to leave. To walk back out. To move through his own house as a man, a father, an equal part of the adult world.
That memory felt almost abstract now, like something he had read about rather than lived.
Months had passed this way. Long enough for the new structure to harden. Long enough for resistance to stop feeling like a path back and start feeling like a reflex with nowhere to go. He knew there would be no reversal. Cindy knew it too. But knowing a thing and living inside it were not the same.
The sound from Madison’s video stopped.
Greg straightened slightly without meaning to.
Madison slid off the bed and walked toward the habitat with that easy, unthinking casualness she had developed around it. There had been a time when every approach carried some edge of deliberate theater, some reminder that she knew exactly what she was doing. Now she moved toward the enclosure the way anyone moved around familiar furniture in their room.
That was how fully it had been integrated.
The habitat no longer looked like something imposed awkwardly on Madison’s space. It belonged to the room now, or rather the room had absorbed it. A hoodie lay half-draped over one top corner where Madison had tossed it earlier. An empty energy drink can sat near the control panel. A Starbucks cup with a fading ring of condensation marked the desk beside it. Her brush, charger, and a tangle of cosmetics crowded the surrounding surfaces. The habitat existed among all of it as naturally as the bed, the rug, the mirror, the vanity lights.
Cindy followed Greg’s gaze and saw the same thing.
Months ago. God, even imagining it felt obscene now, she would have scolded Madison for the clutter without a second thought. She would have pointed at the can, the cup, the hoodie and launched into one of the little corrective speeches that used to come to her so easily. Throw that away. Pick that up. Don’t leave drinks in your room. I’m not asking again. Give me your phone if you can’t listen the first time.
Now the very idea felt so detached from reality that “fantasy” was almost the wrong word for it. Fantasy still implied something imaginable. This was something more impossible than that, something structurally absurd. Not only could Cindy not discipline Madison, she could not even comment on the state of the room unless invited. Could not correct. Could not direct. Could not act on the smallest impulse of parental authority without exposing herself to the humiliation of remembering she no longer possessed any.
And perhaps worst of all, Madison knew that.
She reached the habitat and glanced in at them, one hand settling lightly against the clear wall. Her expression was relaxed, faintly pleased, the look of someone checking on something she expected to be exactly where she had left it.
“Done? Good,” Madison said, sounding pleased with herself. “See? This is way better. You wanted to be more involved in McKenzie’s life, and now you are. You got to help her. You got to be useful. You got included. Literally exactly what you asked for.”
Greg swallowed. “Ms. Wessen, we are grateful for your consideration. We only meant… we had hoped to actually see McKenzie.”
Madison’s expression shifted at once. Not into anger, but into something firmer, more pointed.
“I feel like you’re saying grateful words without actually being grateful, Dad.” She looked over at Cindy. “Mom, don’t you agree? Because I’m pretty sure I just did something nice for you.”
Cindy felt the weight of that look immediately. Madison’s expression was not loud, but it carried expectation with it, that same sharp seriousness Cindy herself had once used so effectively. On Cindy now, authority felt like an emptied thing, a prop stripped of force. On Madison, it had become something honed, bright, precise, and dangerous.
“What I think Greg is trying to say is—” Cindy began.
Madison cut her off without even looking away.
She opened the habitat, reached in, and lifted Greg out with practiced ease before carrying him over to her desk.
“Dad, clean my phone screen,” she said, setting him down beside it. “It’s disgusting. I was eating Cheetos and scrolling and now it’s all smudgy.”
She dropped a moist towelette next to him.
Greg stared up at her.
Madison crossed her arms and looked down at him, all bratty confidence and quiet possession. “Next time I do something for you, maybe don’t immediately complain that it wasn’t the exact thing you wanted. That’s kind of annoying.”
She leaned down just slightly, voice lowering.
“You need to get used to this. You’re one of my Littles. McKenzie is busy. When she has time, she’ll come by. But right now you need a reset.”
Greg said nothing.
Madison’s eyes stayed fixed on him.
“You need to remember something,” she said. “You were always mine. I found you two. I decided to share you with McKenzie. You live in my room. So sit there, clean my phone, and spend a little time thinking about the difference between being my Little who gets McKenzie time when she’s free… and acting like you’re McKenzie’s Little who’s just stuck with Madison until she comes back.”
The words landed exactly where she wanted them to.
Madison straightened, smoothing her shirt as if she had merely clarified something obvious.
“Because those are not the same thing,” she added, almost lightly. “And I’d really rather you stop acting confused about it.”

Man I hope she says something similar around kenzie and gets schooled in who determines the hierarchy lol
That would be interesting as Madison isn’t fully wrong. She did find them and chose to share them.
If the two have a fight from a legal standpoint Greg goes with McKenzie but what I think people don’t consider is that it’s similar to court ordered custody.
If McKenzie pulled that card she is probably or atleast risking basically ending any relationship with her sister in a meaningful way potentially forever but atleast for awhile as it’s doubtful Madison forgives and forgets that.
It’s decided in a legally forced way but in a civil realistic sense Madison feels she deserves both and wants both. As she is doing the work when it comes to the littles.
IF Greg ever gets alone time with McKenzie again, he needs to bring this conversation up with her, no matter how awkward it may be.
Yeah, I’m sure at some point he will get some McKenzie time.
While she isn’t fully wrong, if it did go to a legal decision, that’d be Madisons fault, imo. Kenzie’s made it pretty clear that she’s going to see her father no matter what and that Madison can’t hold his ability to see her over his head, unless things changed from last season and now during the time skip. Using technicality to stop that would have to come from Madison and it’d be the thing to start the divide. Madison might be incharge of their day to day and things like that, but she isn’t able to stop Kenzie from just seeing greg or letting him stay with her without good reason, and it’s doubtful she’s just going to take Madison’s word about things given how she acts historically. she’d probably want Greg to tell her the truth, and since Greg is Team Kenzie by his admission, he would tell her the truth about a situation, plus it’d be more beleivable from him than Madison.
the alternative to all that is to just keep letting Kenzie see greg without finding ways to impede it, which she doesn’t appear to do, but seems like she also wouldn’t find ways to do so.
Jealousy will ruin her relationship with him
It could but with Madison I would say it’s less jealousy and more possessiveness.
She wants her dad as her little and not necessarily for the reasons people may think.
What are the reasons?
You will have to read along to find out.
Time will tell, but my guess at this point is that Madison is so anal retentive, that she has to keep both parents in order to have the complete set (so to speak). Also I think, she thinks, that since she originally “claimed” them and then “legally” shared them, they still belong to her.
It could also cause tension between her and McKenzie.
I really like the way you presented Greg’s POV here.
Thanks, the direction for this season is more focused on the people and how making this work isnt easy. Relationship focused a bit more.
So she does this but when she’s alone with him she’s not like this…. God dam!! That’s your Dad!
1) “Greg and Cindy had finally finished McKenzie’s homework” well it took them long enough, lol
2) “What unsettled him more was the normalcy” that would feel fucked up after a while. Espacially since Greg’s new normal should logically include more Kenzie time
3) “Greg could still remember what it had felt like to move freely through this room. To enter without permission. To stand in the doorway and tell Madison dinner was ready. To nag her to pick clothes up off the floor, to tell her a cup didn’t belong on the nightstand, to remind her she’d lose her phone if she kept ignoring him” someon’e feeling nostalgic for the good old days
4) “knowing a thing and living inside it were not the same.” very true, that’s why I hate guardians calling thier Littles “lucky”
5) “A hoodie lay half-draped over one top corner where Madison had tossed it earlier” I was wondering if that’d come up since seeing it in S3E2
6) “Months ago. God, even imagining it felt obscene now, she would have scolded Madison for the clutter without a second thought” mothers do be like that, and who knows, maybe Trina and Charity would have secretly helped Maddie clean.
7) ““See? This is way better. You wanted to be more involved in McKenzie’s life, and now you are. You got to help her. You got to be useful. You got included. Literally exactly what you asked for” you know this isn’t how they meant.
8.1) “I feel like you’re saying grateful words without actually being grateful, Dad.” I feel like you’re demanding gratitude without actually giving them something to be grateful about.
8.2) ““Mom, don’t you agree? Because I’m pretty sure I just did something nice for you.” she would think that about this, egotistic bitch
9) “Dad, clean my phone screen, It’s disgusting. I was eating Cheetos and scrolling and now it’s all smudgy.” Someone knows she’s wrong about this. That’s why she’s changing the topic and throwing up a distraction.
10) “Next time I do something for you, maybe don’t immediately complain that it wasn’t the exact thing you wanted. That’s kind of annoying.” Maybe don’t twist his requests into something entirely different than.
11) “You need to get used to this. You’re one of my Littles. McKenzie is busy. When she has time, she’ll come by. But right now you need a reset.” Someone’s definitely jealous of Gregs preference for McKenzie.
12) ““You need to remember something, You were always mine. I found you two. I decided to share you with McKenzie.” I feel liek that was less of a choice more of a, if she didn’t McKenzie would have forces her anyway.
13) “spend a little time thinking about the difference between being my Little who gets McKenzie time when she’s free… and acting like you’re McKenzie’s Little who’s just stuck with Madison until she comes back.” That’t the thing he is McKenzie’s Little, that;s the arrangement the sisters made, weather Maddie likes it or not.
14) ““Because those are not the same thing,” she added, almost lightly. “And I’d really rather you stop acting confused about it.” I don’t think he’s the confused one.
2) That it is what he “wanted”, unfortunately life events have not been in his favor.
4) Unfortunately in some instances, it may be true.
6) They aren’t moving a hoodie from a chair!
7) Mind control!
8) Manipulation at it’s best!
9) No, it is punishment and an attempt to change the way he thinks.
11) Again, she is trying to change the way he thinks so she can get her way with McKenzie.
12) She knows how to play the long game.
13) “I am altering the deal. Pray I don’t alter it any further.” (Thank you Darth Vader 😈)
14) Neither is she.
1) “Greg and Cindy had finally finished McKenzie’s homework” well it took them long enough, lol
Answer: It was harder homework. She is in a higher grade with harder classes.
2) “What unsettled him more was the normalcy” that would feel fucked up after a while. Espacially since Greg’s new normal should logically include more Kenzie time
Answer: It would depend on the arrangement worked out by the sisters. Greg isnt owed any more mckenize time then Cindy is. McKenzie also does more outside the house then Madison does as part of Madison’s responsibilities is caring for the littles just like McKenize works and told Madison not too.
3) “Greg could still remember what it had felt like to move freely through this room. To enter without permission. To stand in the doorway and tell Madison dinner was ready. To nag her to pick clothes up off the floor, to tell her a cup didn’t belong on the nightstand, to remind her she’d lose her phone if she kept ignoring him” someon’e feeling nostalgic for the good old days
Answer: Lots of time for him to think about the past when you can’t leave the house on your own, or even madison’s room for that matter. He would need to be fetched by McKenzie or Madison to leave. Otherwise he has a front row seat to Madison’s room.
4) “knowing a thing and living inside it were not the same.” very true, that’s why I hate guardians calling thier Littles “lucky”
Answer: Well they could be lucky it would just depend on the life they had before. I mean being Chloe’s little would be relatiavely lucky. You would probably most certainly live a better life then before for most people. The parents are probably lucky in that they get to stay together. Greg and Cindy could be separated and have no hope of seeing each ohter again. Boguht by different families.
5) “A hoodie lay half-draped over one top corner where Madison had tossed it earlier” I was wondering if that’d come up since seeing it in S3E2
Answer: It was bound to come up eventually. it was just setting the stage beforehand.
6) “Months ago. God, even imagining it felt obscene now, she would have scolded Madison for the clutter without a second thought” mothers do be like that, and who knows, maybe Trina and Charity would have secretly helped Maddie clean.
Answer: I mean they could now. Its not like they havent been to Madisons house. They have most definitely interacted. Madison is the type who would view Brooklyns and Evans littles as littles she can order around within reason.
7) ““See? This is way better. You wanted to be more involved in McKenzie’s life, and now you are. You got to help her. You got to be useful. You got included. Literally exactly what you asked for” you know this isn’t how they meant.
Answer: THey should have been more specific. This is helping McKenzie. Freeing up time where she could potentially see Greg as she wont have to do homework.
8.1) “I feel like you’re saying grateful words without actually being grateful, Dad.” I feel like you’re demanding gratitude without actually giving them something to be grateful about.
Answer: She is providing a room over their head, pellets, care, medical visits, protection from dangers, all the things parents provide children madison is providing her parents. I wouldnt say she is doing nothing. But it may not be enough in your eyes which is fair.
8.2) ““Mom, don’t you agree? Because I’m pretty sure I just did something nice for you.” she would think that about this, egotistic bitch
Answer: lol, hte rare cindy defense for you.
9) “Dad, clean my phone screen, It’s disgusting. I was eating Cheetos and scrolling and now it’s all smudgy.” Someone knows she’s wrong about this. That’s why she’s changing the topic and throwing up a distraction.
Answer: She isnt really changing the topic she is teaching a lesson. It also could be task he had to do anyway just maybe not right now.
10) “Next time I do something for you, maybe don’t immediately complain that it wasn’t the exact thing you wanted. That’s kind of annoying.” Maybe don’t twist his requests into something entirely different than.
Answer: She’s most definitely heard that from her parents before which is probably why she included it. She did do something for them they werent specific in their request and Madison took advantage. Its a lesson learned or should be on their part.
11) “You need to get used to this. You’re one of my Littles. McKenzie is busy. When she has time, she’ll come by. But right now you need a reset.” Someone’s definitely jealous of Gregs preference for McKenzie.
Answer: Well she definately doesn tlike that his preference is not to be with her or atleast suspects its not to be with her. She may or may not know specificaly how deep his preference is.
12) ““You need to remember something, You were always mine. I found you two. I decided to share you with McKenzie.” I feel liek that was less of a choice more of a, if she didn’t McKenzie would have forces her anyway.
13) “spend a little time thinking about the difference between being my Little who gets McKenzie time when she’s free… and acting like you’re McKenzie’s Little who’s just stuck with Madison until she comes back.” That’t the thing he is McKenzie’s Little, that;s the arrangement the sisters made, whether Maddie likes it or not.
Answer: Well there is framework for what happens if the sisters separate and it cannot be worked out amicably and it would go to court. As the agreement is more the legal filing if it goes to court. The parents would be split up. There is plenty of room within that for Madison to position and mckenzie to position how things would go or how they want them.
14) ““Because those are not the same thing,” she added, almost lightly. “And I’d really rather you stop acting confused about it.” I don’t think he’s the confused one.
Answer: Confused or not Greg has the least say in the matter although he is the one wanted by both daughters. So that would be a form of love in and of itself.
1) Yeah, but they got it a week ago.
2) Even if he isn’t ‘owed’ it, she’s made it clear she wanted to keep him in her life.
4) Chloe’s kind of an acceptation though, we know her values go against the values of 99% of the world, and we know that she’s actually rich enough to provide the closest to normal life that any guardian could.
But we also don’t know how she’d be with a personal Little, I think not so great, we know she doesn’t want one, and I think that would negatively affect the situation.
6) She 100% would have, lol
7) That sounds like an intentionally convoluted route to their goal.
8.1) If you wanna get technical, Greg and Cindy provided the roof, we also know the girls are largely living off the parents’ savings so pellets and stuff would also be from them and partially McKenzie. Also (and stop me if you’ve heard this one), that’s the bare minimum.
9) What lesson is that? I’m a bitch who can’t take criticism.
10) Even if they weren’t specific, she knew what they meant.
11) And she’ll never take accountability for why she isn’t his preference
12) Didn’t feel this one needed an answer? lol.
13) I could see Madison being difficult to deal with.
14) He does, unfortunately.
8.1) You got that right!!!
Another sad day in Greg’s world:(
I seem to remember McKenzie making Greg promise that he wouldn’t change in his training and become a little like Trina or like a drone little…. If this keeps up I can see McKenzie taking notice of Greg’s behaviour
If Greg changes to much , McKenzie won’t want him because he will be like any other
fully trained little and it will be her fault leaving him withMadison.there is a difference between adapting to his life and changing who he is. He can adapt and still be the same person.
What if Madison physically bonded Greg to her to the point he had to sleep on the pillow next to her head so he could hug her hand and be physically touching her skin or he freaks out, which of course would drive a wedge between Greg and Cindy but with Madison I’m guessing the ends justify the means when a daughter’s jealousy is involved.
I mean, at that point, there would be no storytelling or narrative. As there isn’t really nuance in that. There isnt much of a way of a spin that isn’t just sad and depressing on a level we haven’t really seen in Smallara.
As you’re talking about the complete mental and physical collapse of a person to where they are literally dependent on another person for not just self-preservation but self-worth and the want of continued existence.
there is a big difference between being possessive and wanting her father to stay with her and having her parents do things for her and completely crushing them to the point where they have no worth and are just tiny bags of water.
Madison seems very selfish so I can see her mentality enslaving Greg to get her way because to her he is her little to please her.
In my humble opinion, everything Madison is doing to her parents is mental abuse. Whether they are a little or not, it’s still abuse. If she is proud of herself then Madison is mentally ill.