“No, Madison, you’re misunderstanding,” Greg said, trying to keep his voice calm. It still felt deeply unnatural, having to explain himself like this to his own daughter.
Madison rolled her eyes and crossed her arms, all teenage irritation and smug authority. “No, we’ve literally talked about this. You do not get to tell me what I’m misunderstanding. I understand perfectly fine.” She pointed toward the phone on the desk. “What I understand is that my phone is still gross and you’re not cleaning it like I asked.”
Greg looked up at her, trying not to let his frustration show. “Can we just talk about this in private?”
The words were out before he could stop them. Some stubborn part of him still believed that if he could just get Madison alone, away from Cindy, away from the posture and performance of authority, he might still be able to get through to his little girl.
Madison’s expression shifted almost instantly. Not softer. Sharper. More amused.
“Oh my God,” she said, with a short disbelieving laugh. “This is private. This is my room.”
Greg’s face tightened.
Madison tilted her head, clearly enjoying herself now. “Actually, no. You know what? You get one on one time with my phone while Mom and I go relax and do some rotting.” She smirked. “Which, honestly, sounds way more fun for me than whatever this is.”
Then her tone turned firmer, though the bratty edge never left it.
“When I come back, I expect an apology, and I expect you to explain what you did wrong and what you’re going to do differently next time.”
The words hit Greg with a familiar kind of force.
They were his.
Or close enough to be.
Not one of Cindy’s polished little lectures about standards and expectations. One of his own old punishments, the rarer kind he used when Madison’s attitude had crossed a line and she needed to stop, think, and come back with something better than defensiveness. He had not used them often. He had not needed to.
Madison was using them now with devastating ease.
And worse, she knew exactly what she was doing.
Cindy stayed very still inside the habitat, watching the exchange with a tightness in her chest that felt painfully familiar. She recognized the structure of it at once—the forced pause, the demanded reflection, the expectation of a better answer on the second try. Madison had taken one of Greg’s own parental tools and slipped into it so naturally that for a sickening moment it almost sounded ordinary. Except nothing about this was ordinary. Greg stood on her desk beside her smudged phone, reduced to waiting for judgment from the daughter he had once sent to her room for less.
Madison looked from him to Cindy and seemed to catch every part of that realization at once. Her mouth curved, not cruelly, but with unmistakable satisfaction. She liked this. Liked being listened to. Liked being the one who decided when a conversation was over and what happened next.
“Mom,” she said, her tone brightening at once, “come on. You earned your time.”
Madison walked back across her room and reached into the habitat for her mother. She was just about to leave when she paused at the door and looked back over at her dad, still standing on her desk beside the smudged phone.
“Dad,” she said, her voice turning sharp, “it’s Ms. Wessen. You know better than to ‘Madison’ me after all this time. My Littles know how to address people respectfully, especially their own guardian.”
Greg looked up at her, trying to steady himself. “If we could just talk about this… we’re working hard. We’re trying to make this work. We should be able to speak to each other like a family. McKenzie doesn’t require this.”
“McKenzie isn’t here, Dad,” Madison snapped.
The room seemed to tighten around the words.
“You are my Little, and regardless of anything else, you are going to address people the way I tell you to.” Her grip on Cindy shifted slightly, not rough, just secure. Possessive. “And honestly? I think spending so much time with McKenzie has started to confuse you.”
Greg’s face fell.
Madison kept going, her irritation now sharpened into something colder.
“You keep acting like you’re hers first and mine second, like being with me is just some waiting room until she comes back for you. And I’m over it.” She rolled her eyes, but there was real feeling under it now. “I found you. I take care of you. You live in my room. You are one of my Littles. McKenzie getting time with you does not somehow make you less mine.”
Greg swallowed, but said nothing.
Madison’s expression hardened with satisfaction when he stayed quiet.
“So here’s what’s going to happen,” she said. “I’m going to talk to McKenzie. She’s busy the next few weeks anyway, and maybe that’s for the best. Maybe we use that time wisely and let you get a proper reset.”
She shifted Cindy a little higher against her side, then looked straight at him.
“You need time to settle back in and remember whose Little you are. Then, later, maybe you can learn how to appreciate time with McKenzie without forgetting that it’s time I’m allowing you to have.”
The emphasis landed exactly where she wanted it.
Madison tilted her head, the bratty edge returning just enough to make the whole thing feel even more personal.
“Because right now? You’re acting spoiled. And I really don’t like spoiled Littles.”
Madison walked out of her room, making sure to pull the bedroom door shut behind her with a firm little click. Greg could still hear her voice for a few seconds after that, drifting faintly down the hall as she talked to Cindy in the bright, casual tone she used when she was pleased with herself. He caught only fragments, but it was enough to picture the scene anyway. The living room, probably. Madison liked to stretch out on the couch when she wanted to “rot,” as she called it, with Cindy tucked close beside her like some reward she had earned.
Then even those sounds faded.
Greg stood alone on Madison’s desk beside her phone.
For a moment he just stared at it, the moist towelette still lying unopened at his feet.
He couldn’t believe her.
Or maybe he could, and that was the worse truth.
With a sharp, tired breath, he bent and dragged the towelette toward himself, wrestling it open with both hands. The wet cloth inside was enormous from his perspective, more like a damp rag than anything meant for a single quick wipe. He pulled and adjusted it until he had enough of an edge to work with, then turned back toward the phone.
He hated how large it looked.
Even after months, the proportions still had the power to disorient him. Madison’s phone did not look like an object meant to be held anymore. It looked like part of the landscape—sleek, dark, and smooth, its screen stretching upward like a polished wall. The case wrapped around it in thick protective curves, and the charging port at the bottom might as well have been a piece of machinery. Smudges streaked the glass in cloudy arcs from Madison’s fingers, and faint orange residue from Cheeto dust lingered along one side where she had apparently scrolled while snacking.
Greg set the damp cloth against the screen and pushed.
The surface resisted in a way that was oddly humiliating. He had to put his back into it, bracing his shoes against the desk for leverage as he dragged the moist towelette across the glass in slow, broad strokes. The cloth left temporary wet trails behind, and in the sheen he could see his own warped reflection moving over Madison’s fingerprints.
He scrubbed harder.
Across the middle of the screen first, then along the top edge where foundation dust and skin oil had collected near the speaker slit. He worked in careful lines, going back over areas that still looked smeared, then changing angles and pressing with both hands to polish away the worst of it. The phone gave off the faint chemical smell of cleaner mixed with Madison’s lotion, something sweet underneath the sharper scent of the wipe itself.
When the main part of the screen was done, he moved to the edges.
Those were worse.
Grease and dust had gathered in the tiny seam where the case met the glass, and he had to wedge the corner of the towelette in with both hands, pushing and twisting until it caught. He dragged the cloth painstakingly along the groove, inch by inch, lifting out little streaks of grime he would never once have noticed in his old life. Then he repeated it on the other side, jaw tight with effort, shoulders already aching.
By the time he reached the volume buttons, he was sweating.
The raised little ridges along the side of the case took frustrating precision. He had to fold the towelette down to a narrower point and rub around each button separately, then scrub over the buttons themselves to lift away the skin oil Madison had left there. The power button on the other side was worse still, set just deep enough that he had to brace himself and scrub in small circles to get the damp cloth into the recess properly.
Then there was the charging port.
Greg stared at it with immediate resentment.
Cheeto dust had somehow made its way there too, caught in the corners of the opening along with lint from Madison’s pocket or hoodie. He crouched, bunched the towelette into a tighter edge, and pushed at the port with maddening care. Too hard and the cloth bent uselessly. Too soft and it did nothing. He worked slowly, dragging out tiny bits of residue and wiping them away, then going back in again until the dark opening looked clean enough that Madison might not complain.
Might.
That was the word that governed everything now.
Not done. Not finished. Not good. Just clean enough that Madison might not complain.
Greg sat back on his heels for a second and looked at the phone again.
He couldn’t even use it.
That was the part that still struck something raw in him every single time. The device was there in front of him, larger than his torso, humming with access to the whole outside world—calls, messages, maps, news, people, choices—and it may as well have been dead stone. It was not in Little mode. Without that adjustment, the screen was functionally sealed to him. His touch registered too lightly, too erratically. He could smear the glass. He could clean it. But he could not make it answer him.
He had tried, of course.
In the first weeks especially. More than once. More than a dozen times, if he was honest. Pressing with both palms, jumping to put extra force behind a fingertip, trying different parts of the screen, different angles, trying desperation disguised as problem-solving. Nothing worked. If a device was not switched for Littles, it was simply closed to them. Another door. Another lock. Another ordinary piece of the world quietly removed.
No phone a friend. No secret call for help.
And even if there had been, who would he have called?
The thought came and stalled there, as it always did.
McKenzie, maybe.
But even imagining that made his stomach sink. He could picture it too easily—Madison finding out, hearing his voice on the line, seeing the proof that the first instinct he still clung to was to reach past her and toward McKenzie. She was already in one of her moods, sharp and possessive and too alert to every hint that he might think of her as second best. She had always been sensitive to that, even before all this. Sensitive to being compared. To being overshadowed. To feeling like McKenzie came first in some invisible ranking she had never agreed to but always felt.
He should never have said McKenzie’s name.
That was the mistake.
Not because it was wrong to want to see her. Not because his feelings for McKenzie were untrue. But because invoking her in that moment had touched the one part of Madison that was still all raw teenage pride beneath the authority. He had made her feel secondary, and Madison never took that well.
Greg pulled the towelette back across the screen again, polishing now, working away the last damp streaks until the glass shone in the desk light.
As he scrubbed, the thought that kept returning to him was the one he least wanted to look at directly:
being Madison’s Little.
Not visiting her. Not depending on her in passing. Not waiting out some temporary stretch of her control until McKenzie had more time. Truly being hers in the full sense Madison meant it. Living under her moods, her pride, her pleasures, her corrections. Belonging to a girl who loved him, yes, but loved him in a way that never questioned itself, never doubted the hierarchy at the center of it.
Just like Cindy.
He loved his wife. He loved both his daughters. But the idea of sinking fully into Madison’s care turned something over in his chest that felt dangerously close to panic.
Because Madison’s idea of harmony had always come with conditions. Even as a child, she had been brightest and sweetest when the world bent the right way around her. She loved affection, loved praise, loved closeness, loved being understood—but what she wanted, more than almost anything, was alignment. Agreement. Validation. People being with her, on her side, in her rhythm. Opposition never merely frustrated her. It offended her. It made her feel abandoned, diminished, pushed aside.
And now she had power enough to build a life where disagreement did not simply wound her.
It submitted.
Greg leaned forward again and worked the cloth carefully around the camera lenses on the back of the phone, wiping each black circle clean, then polishing the metal rings around them until they caught the light. He cleaned the case corners. The bottom speaker holes. The glossy Apple logo in the center. Every part of it.
Because if Madison came back and found a streak, a smudge, a crumb of orange dust she thought he had missed, she would notice. Of course she would notice. This was her phone. The center of her social world, her entertainment, her routines, her attention. She lived through it half the time. Being told to clean it had not been random. It had been personal. A petty little act of service chosen precisely because she knew he would understand that.
Greg sat back at last, exhausted again, the towelette limp and dirty in his hands.
The phone gleamed beside him, spotless now, reflecting the desk lamp in a hard white line.
He looked at it for a long moment, then lowered his head.
Beyond the closed bedroom door, the house was quiet. Somewhere out there Madison was stretched across the couch with Cindy tucked into her orbit, feeling pleased, feeling justified, maybe already deciding how long to let this lesson last. And Greg, alone on her desk with aching arms and a cleaned phone, understood with a fresh wave of dread how little separated punishment from ordinary life anymore.
That was the real danger.
Not the moments when Madison was openly angry.
The moments when she was simply being herself.
And alone in the hush of her room, Greg realized that what frightened him most was not that Madison might force him into being her Little.
It was that, piece by piece, day by day, she might get exactly what she wanted.

that’s rough. it’d be wild for greg to just snap and flat out say Kenzie is his favorite because of how she gaurdians him lol i know he never would, cause he love both daughters and he’s not really that big of a asshole, but things slip out when youre mad. There might not be a favorite daughter, but there’s definetly a favorite guardian. and I bet that really bugs Madison too, the fact she’s doing everything she believes is right, and isn’t the favored guardian.
At some point Mads has to realize how much her ways effect them emotionally and how they feel and see reason why both with favor McKenzie at the moment and hopefully dial back her harsh ways because it not doing her a lot of favors to be honest here lol
Again not saying Cindy’s teaching aren’t at fault here but these are still Mads decisions of being like this and some point its become her own fault for maybe deep down not being the favored guardian
It definitely bugs Madison as from her viewpoint she did everything right
Dear god this family got problems……like holy shit … well I figured this season would be depressing to read lol but holy fuck we went backwards from where we left off it’s honestly insane I feel like I’m watching first days with Sara all over again where there where so many moments I was team Jordan all the way even during the running away arc lol
But damn Madison you really aren’t taking this well and Cindy just has to watch while staying in her lane with her want to help Greg
And poor Greg
Hopefully things get more……positive energy because oh boy this has been a hard read which mean this story is so fire to effective me emotionally lol
I dont htink they are as bad as you are probably imagining as this is only one event. its not like everyday was inherently like this.
It’s funny because her jealousy is blinding her because all he asked was to see McKenzie or a txt to her saying the parents are missing you just that! Not fucking jealous hole has to make it about her thinking she’s done right! Looks like these few months she’s going backwards for maturity and the direction we were heading in on the final episode of season 2 has crashed 🤣
I think its easy to say its going backwards when this really just one issue or event. It doesnt inherently mean every day is like this or there werent better days. Narratively an event with more drama and strife would be depicted over the everything is fine and they cuddled for six hours. As one of them is more narratively interesting then the other.
McKenzie getting time with you does not somehow make you less mine- but it also doesn’t make him more yours either
No, but Greg is closer to McKenzie so Madison would feel naturally slighted. Parenting wise Greg should have probably worked harder to make Madison feel equal because of how easy it is with him and McKenzie.
Its not uncommon for one child to feel less important and sometimes that can result in feelings of being hurt or jealous. even if someone like Madison may not say it out loud.
Greg should go full formal now as a protest! She can’t have it both ways either, during their alone time “oh it’s ok dad you can call me madison, no miss wessen I don’t think that’s appropriate”
I agree, make sure she knows there is consequences to her abuse.
Well she did tell him when they were alone they werent alone.
1) “Actually, no. You know what? You get one on one time with my phone while Mom and I go relax and do some rotting. Which, honestly, sounds way more fun for me than whatever this is.” Madison being meaner to Greg than usual, might be jealousy.
2) “When I come back, I expect an apology, and I expect you to explain what you did wrong and what you’re going to do differently next time.” I’m sure he’d like one too
3) “The words hit Greg with a familiar kind of force. They were his. Or close enough to be.” it does sound like parent logic
4) “it’s Ms. Wessen. You know better than to ‘Madison’ me after all this time. My Littles know how to address people respectfully, especially their own guardian.” She’s gonna turn his collar on ain’t she, lol
5) “You are my Little, and regardless of anything else, you are going to address people the way I tell you to And honestly? I think spending so much time with McKenzie has started to confuse you.” Well, he’s Kenzie’s Little too, and can address people as she’s told him to as well, Not that Madison is good at acknowledging
5) “You keep acting like you’re hers first and mine second, like being with me is just some waiting room until she comes back for you. And I’m over it.” You give him no reason to put you over her; worse, you actively give him reasons not to.
6) “maybe you can learn how to appreciate time with McKenzie without forgetting that it’s time I’m allowing you to have.” Man, I can’t wait until we actually get McKenzie’s pov on this. Madison sounds like a divorced mom trying to deny the father visitation to punish the child.
7) “Because right now? You’re acting spoiled. And I really don’t like spoiled Littles.” Oh, you can talk
8) “The living room, probably. Madison liked to stretch out on the couch when she wanted to “rot,” as she called it, with Cindy tucked close beside her like some reward she had earned.” That actually does sound kind of nice for Cindy, at least compared to her normal treatment.
9) “He scrubbed harder Across the middle of the screen first” did he have to flip the phone? Cause the image has it screen down, lol
10) “Greg stared at it with immediate resentment.” I hope Padison appreciated the effort Greg’s putting in for her
11) “Greg sat back on his heels for a second and looked at the phone again. He couldn’t even use it. That was the part that still struck something raw in him every single time.” That’d be something I’d imagine hating too in his position
12) “The device was there in front of him, larger than his torso,” Torso? Mate, the phone is two Gregs tall at least
13) “Nothing worked. If a device was not switched for Littles, it was simply closed to them. Another door. Another lock. Another ordinary piece of the world quietly removed.” Don’t give up, Greg, if Gavin can do it, so can you.
14) “He could picture it too easily—Madison finding out, hearing his voice on the line, seeing the proof that the first instinct he still clung to was to reach past her and toward McKenzie.” not too far off what happened to Gavin when he tried, lol
15) “Belonging to a girl who loved him, yes, but loved him in a way that never questioned itself, never doubted the hierarchy at the center of it. Just like Cindy.” Truly scary thought.
16) “Because Madison’s idea of harmony had always come with conditions. Even as a child, she had been brightest and sweetest when the world bent the right way around her” Very on brand for Madison, no wonder she took to Cindy’s teachings like a duck takes to water.
17) “Greg leaned forward again and worked the cloth carefully around the camera lenses on the back of the phone, wiping each black circle clean, then polishing the metal rings around them until they caught the light. He cleaned the case corners. The bottom speaker holes. The glossy Apple logo in the centre. Every part of it.” well, she can’t say he slacked off at least. (also apple logo? Not Genritech?)
18) “understood with a fresh wave of dread how little separated punishment from ordinary life anymore.” That’s true, being a Little in the first place would already feel like a punishment.
19) “That was the real danger. Not the moments when Madison was openly angry. The moments when she was simply being herself,” Well, Madison’s self is a monster.
20) “And alone in the hush of her room, Greg realised that what frightened him most was not that Madison might force him into being her Little. It was that, piece by piece, day by day, she might get exactly what she wanted.” Madison getting what she wants is the worst-case scenario
1) Well he pushed her buttons and shes not blind. She can clearly see she’s second place to him. She wants to feel important to. Is she goign about it the best way? probably not but also when your her age and have a bit of power and authority over the person you want attention from and to feel important to. Then you probably do act out like this.
2) While I do think Madison is going about it wrong. I do think Greg could do better to make her feel equal to McKenzie. As its no fun feeling like the second place child when you want to atleast feel like you are equal.
3) That was the intent was she was using some of his words not in a quote like way but using his parenting rubric against him. Things seh heard him say to her and to do.
4) Lol, When she think of it but the idea here was that she was worked up and not being as observent towards the collar.
5) He is also McKenzie’s litlte but I feel like some communication amongst the sisters would go a long way. As McKenzie shouldnt be actively going telling Greg Anti Madison things. they should have a unified
6) thats one way to look at it. Although since its her father there arent many ways seh can actualy exert control over him. I mean there are but she doesnt want to do them ebcause its her father.
7) Madison would like to beg your finest of pardons.
8)It is very pro cindy right now. As shes getting soem good madison time adn relaxing time.
9) Well he cleaend both sides, and the ports.
10) Im sure Padison will. She has a big heart.
11) It would be annoying not that he probably has that many people he can call.
12) The official unit of measurement is the Jordy. So the first question is what is the greg to jordy conversion.
13) True its not impossible but it requites alot of effort. Having to deal with a upset mallory over it was probably not worth it.
14) Yup.
15) Especially when love can make you do alot of things.
16) Well she was also always in McKenzie’s shadow. Which is a real factor. Not that Mckenzie did anything wrong. But Greg and McKenzie always got along very easily. They had similar interests, and got along well. Where Not that Greg loved Madison less but they had less in common so she felt overshadowed more. So she is naturally more easily vulnerable and more easily set off by percieved inbalances when it comes to her feeling less than as to her it feels like she is loved less even if its not true. But perception has a way of being reality.
Now with smallara the heirarachy is different so the same checks and balances dont exist. Not that this justifies things but just mentioning the angle in which seh is being written from.
17) Well Madison has no specific reason to buy generitech over another brand. She isnt anti generitech but she got the phone her parents bought her. Plus Cindy did work at Preematech for awhile.
18) Most certainly unless you got a really good owner.
19) Well shes no Charity but she’s definately striving towards the monster side.
20) some say its the best case scenario….granted those people are normally madison but some people.
A) Greg needs to give Madison what she wants, be a bland little. If she wants daughter &dad time, be a quiet little who answers meekly and as little as possible.
B) when Madison wants him to see her dance, he can meekly say he doesn’t believe it’s a place for a little to be. Make her feel what her trauma has caused.
C) if he does get time with Mackenzie, he needs to act the meek little & when she asks why he is acting like this, just say ms wessen will punish him if he doesn’t.
D) Greg needs to give her the lesson of , be care what you wish for. You just mite get it. Mackenzie will take him with her after seeing the damaged Greg. And Madison will lose her father daughter time.
A) Well Greg also needs to come to terms with the fact of where failed as a parent and a father as while it wasnt intentional Madison clearly feels like the second place daughter and has felt that way for awhile. By being possessive as she is now could be percieved as a course correction of her part to feel important and validated and loved as equally as he loves McKenzie.
However, instead of returning what she desires he in turn gives off I’d rahter be with Mckenzie vibes. Which would hurt Madison and people when they are hurt can lash out and overreact. Especially when tehy are younger and not fully matured adults but this is even true with adults.
b) That would probably be okay if it wasnt for the fact its his child. As that would only prove her point that she’s second place, Mckenzie is better, McKenzei si where he wants to be and he doesnt love her and never loved her equally.
So it would only further drive a wedge between them. Because its sitll his daughter. The other side of hte coin, he is also cheating himself out of getting to see his daughter perform and be there for her as a parent.
As its hard to say I’m not just a little im still your parent but then when you are given chance to be a parent greg shirks it. He would be better off i think taking adventage of thsoe situations but finding a alternate way that doesnt belittle or make the situation worse.
C) He could and its a valid strategy but what greg adn cindy are also trying to balance is not destroying the family. As ultimately if McKenzie and Madison get in a big fight and its not fixable as far as what is spoken and they chose to go their seperate ways. Legally Greg would go with McKenzie, Cindy with Madison, but then Greg and Cindy never see each other. Madison and McKenzie may never speak to each other and all they’ve done is torn apart the family for what gain? Greg getting to be with McKenzie but removed from his wife. Is that really a victory? As Cindy may be a bitch and done wrong things. But she is sitll his wife and he does love her.
D)SHe could feel like she already lost it because its just time he’d rather be with McKenzie but shes just the consolation prize. Its not really fahter daughter time if Madison feels like she is just filling time while teh real daughter is away which is her point but shes young and can’t articulate that well.